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Amir, a baker, reflects on Sūrah 21 Al-Anbiyā while encountering Layla, a woman seeking day-old bread for her children affected by local conflict. Despite her offer to pay, Amir decides to help her, carrying the bread to her home. Their brief interaction leaves a lasting impression on both.
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After two years of farming, Amir begins working at his father Jacob’s bakery in Old Jerusalem. Despite concerns about local threats, Jacob and Rachel support Amir’s transition into the bakery. He quickly earns respect through his kindness and charitable acts, making the bakery a beloved community hub while strengthening family bonds.
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Amir grapples with his feelings of guilt and temptation while studying An-Nisā. His reflections on the harsh teachings and his past actions toward a condemned widow intertwine with his growing affection for a young woman. He seeks understanding and redemption, hoping for forgiveness and release from oppressive judgments stalking him.
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Amidst the exhaustion of daily labor, Amir and his fellow workers bond over shared prayer and humor. After a long day, Amir returns home to the comforting presence of his parents, where he cleans and reflects on his life. He becomes captivated by a mysterious woman, stirring unexpected feelings within him.
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Amir, traumatized by recent events, returns to the Old City with his mother Rachel. They discuss his safety and future, realizing that he cannot remain in the valley where danger lurks. A plan forms for Amir to help with the family bakery while considering education in the new city, aiming for a brighter future.
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In “Night Ride,” Amir and his uncle Subinyá traverse familiar trails under the stars, discussing heavy themes of honor, cultural heritage, and resistance against corrupt authority. Subinyá shares his past struggles, emphasizing the importance of fighting for liberty. The narrative reflects on choices that shape one’s destiny amidst turbulent circumstances.
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Subinyá and his nephew Amir return home in silence after a traumatic day. Subinyá reassures Amir, urging him to leave for his father’s bakery to escape danger from the Red Scorpions. They prepare for a nighttime escape, riding through safer paths, as Amir grapples with the weight of their situation.
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The three keystones to the story, Whispers of the Desert, are laid down. In the Opening we received the back story of the woman who now lies brutally murdered in the bowl of stones. The story opens with an excerpt from Isaiah the Old Testament Prophet describing the iniquity of the Israelites. And now sometime…
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The opening scene of the book Whispers in the Desert introduces the antagonist and his secret plan to take property and control the city.
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We explore ways to ruin your story with word salads and infinite telling not showing. I introduce the reader to my twelve most popular writing mistakes and general FUBAR efforts.
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