Welcome to My Head Elves

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Welcome Dear Readers,

As promised, I will outline my creative chaos into a well-ordered system of nonsense in hopes that you might find a long list of things you should never do in your creative process.

Previously, I announced my effort to participate in NaNoWriMo 2024 and write a 50,000-word novel, Whispers of the Desert, in just 30 days. NaNoWriMo doesn’t count prep time against the writing schedule. If I follow the to-do list from the website, I might get a path to success – or not.

  • Develop story idea
  • Create unique characters
  • Construct a detailed plot or outline
  • Build a strong world
  • Grow your writing community
  • Manage your time

Below is how I tackled this demanding list of tasks.

Develop story idea: This was my first shock at how hard the competition would be. I needed a story to write. As a lifelong pantser, I daydreamed and night-dreamed about what I would like to write about, and it didn’t take long. My head elves presented me with an infinitely detailed documentary on the subject of my desire.

The story’s subject was to weave in the current global collapse of society and civility along geopolitical lines. I would show opposing ideologies in a story about an insular society in the death throws of corruption in government and two violently opposed ideologies. Those ideologies are ancient religious precepts opposed to the desire to seek self-serving lifestyles through wealth accumulation (unethically, of course).

Create unique characters: This looked like a bridge too far until I remembered my imagination was boundless and ever-present. I created the protagonist, Amir, a baker’s son; the antagonist, the son of a corrupt judge; and supporting characters that help Amir rise to lead the people against the corrupt government and their minions of doom.

Create a detailed plot or outline: Me? A detailed plot? Pantsers don’t do that. I was lucky because I used Scrivener. The program automatically creates a detailed outline with many writing tools available as you set up your chapters and scenes. I created placeholder chapters to indicate what happens in the story.

Here, you can see a part of the chapter outline. The blue folders act as containers for the white square scenes in the chapter. These will change as the writing begins and the story evolves.

The image above shows the chapter outline on the left, the detailed outline in the center, and a synopsis and notes on the right. The center outline tells me the status, section type, word target, and actual words written as a color-coded graph. The synopsis reminds me of what the selected document is about, and the notes guide me through what should happen in the selected chapter, The Stoning.

Build a strong world: I don’t plan to construct a detailed and descriptive environment as a guide. I’ll let the story describe the environment through dialog, with more revealed as time goes by in the story.

Grow your writing community: This is the community you, dear readers and storytellers, connect with through the NaNoWriMo process and blogging. I firmly believe in a community that, through its interaction, helps everyone avoid trying to go it alone and allows for informal growth and entertainment.

Manage your time: All right, total fail here. I retired from the career world to focus on assisting Grandma Hyperion as she retreated into her internal universe and occasionally experienced a supernova that scorched my behind and others in the blast zone. Managing one’s time when the undies are aflame and the ears battered by what sounds like angry ducks is not important. However, I found that I do have more time than I imagined to come here and let my head elves unload.

This story is an experiment that may or may not work. I plan to change my data-dumping passive purple prose filled with adverb strings and endless exposition to a concise style that moves the story along without delay. I plan to use a minimum number of dialog tags and work fervently to show, not tell. You will get a blow-by-blow ringside seat as I post my progress here on Hyperion Sky.

Thank you for riding along.

57 responses to “Welcome to My Head Elves”

  1. I look forward to reading!

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    1. Thank you M. It will be a simple story. All the complexity is between the lines.

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      1. Of course! You’re a great story teller.

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    Great stuff! I will save this for posterity! Follow your example? Dunno.

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    1. LOL! Follow carefully for I be full of pitfalls and dependent clauses. Thank you!

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  3. Great stuff! I will save for posterity, look back and learn! Follow your example? I dunno. I could piss into a hurricane too…

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    1. I’ve always wanted to pee into a hurricane but I keep getting blown over into the gutter. I really have learned a lot just plugging away and listening to good advice and reading excellent works by my fellow bloggers. It’s a fun journey if we don’t let it blow us over into the gutter.

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      1. Never stand up and pee out the back of an open Jeep going 40 MPH. Don’t ask me how I know that.

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        1. LMAO! Beer will do that to us sometimes.

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  4. So I learned the Shrike is the anti-matter anti-Christ. Loved the concept!

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    1. Wasn’t that brilliant in a sci-fry sort of way? Dan Simmons weaved more in between the lines than he did in the lines.

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      1. It’s brilliant. Got time travel, the Matrix, farcasters…today’s sci-fry written a long time ago in dog years…

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        1. I always thought Simmons was a bit prescient because some of what he wrote appears to be happening now.

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          1. He was very early to the game.

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            1. To our great fortune and reading pleasure.

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    2. All my writing has been spontaneous.

      For example I had never heard of the Shrike until today.

      I’m glad I somehow turned the Shrike into an anti-matter anti-Christ in one of my vampire novel chapters without even having heard of such an entity before.

      After reading your comment on that post, I immediately had to google the Shrike.

      And then after having read the article on the Shrike, I immediately had to google Hyperion Cantos.

      And after having read the Wikipedia article on Hyperion Cantos, I said, my God this Dan Simmons guy views the Cosmos the same way I do.

      So I was about to start writing my Leo Tolstoy War and Peace novel length reply to you when the guy putting in the new tiles for my landlady’s bathroom arrived and would soon be hammering and πŸ”¨ banging away so I left for the afternoon.

      I didn’t take my tablet with me because I figured too many uglos would be in the place where I sought refuge.

      I first went to a sports bar in the area thinking I’d leave right away because while the waitresses there wear short skirts as part of their uniform, they’re generally all quite repulsively ugly so I leave.

      Just because a stone happens to be in a Diamond ring πŸ’ doesn’t make it a diamond πŸ’Ž, the stone could be petrified fossilized πŸ’©.

      But as it turns out, all 3 waitresses in there were beautiful women wearing short skirts so I stayed.

      I’m currently at home doing all the emails and check of Facebook statuses first before I write my Leo Tolstoy War and Peace novel length reply to you.

      I may only get around to writing it tomorrow but expect a Leo Tolstoy War and Peace novel length reply from me to your comment on my blog post.

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      1. I think the Shrike and Pan Goatee could pair up and really go after the aesthetics correction genre.

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        1. I think you’re right there, Daniel. πŸ˜…

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          1. I’ve met a few people from Calgary here lately. All nice people. I told them about you so they may drop in on your blog to root a fellow Canadian on to glory.

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            1. That’s wonderful to hear. πŸ˜€

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              1. Apparently, the border has been reopened and Canadians can come and go as they please again. That’s our good fortune down here in the 9th ring near the Gulf.

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                1. Of course Joe Biden and his successor Kamala Harris (handpicked by the American Deep State in the bowels of Hell instead of being handpicked by Juan Valdez in the coffee fields of Columbia) have always kept the border open for illegal immigrants south of the U.S. border.

                  The more illegal immigrants, the more votes πŸ—³οΈ for Joe Biden (or so senile old fool Joe Biden thought at the time) and now as it turns out the more votes πŸ—³οΈ for Commie bitch Kamala Harris and her running mate flaky weirdo Minnesota Gov. Tampon Tim Walz.

                  I think that now that Robert F. Kennedy Jr. will be part of the Trump Administration (should a fair election πŸ—³οΈ actually be held this November) this will keep Trump from making some of the mistakes he made in his first term.

                  Trump Derangement Syndrome has produced that psychotic condition whereby many liberal Democrats do not realize that Joe Biden was actually a bigger disaster for the country (economically, legally, morally and in terms of preserving freedom and liberty) than Donald Trump ever was.

                  That’s why New York Sen. Chuck Schumer is threatening to shut down the U.S. government unless illegal immigrants are allowed to vote.

                  And why I have Sen. Chuck Schumer astral projecting over to the City of Rome where he receives UnHoly Communion from the Dread Cardinal (a figure even more sinister and satanic than AntiPope Francis – a Cardinal who is sure that he will be elected the next Pope at the next Papal conclave whereupon he will take the name Pope Sixtus VI) and George in commenting on that post was divinely inspired to say, β€œThanks for letting me know that the Shrike is the anti-matter Anti-Christ”.

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                  1. I see the evil machinations of the Dark Lord and his countless minions of doom at work. He protects his own to inact his grand plan to defeat God and the heavenly host. We already know how this ends. We only need to endure with faith to the end. Of course, a nice underground resistance would be inspiring.

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      2. Waiting patiently for your reply…

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        1. Good things come to those who wait. πŸ˜€

          Unless of course you live in the City of Calgary and you’re waiting to have conjugal relations with a beautiful woman.

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  5. If it were anyone else I’d probably be skeptical but I know you will pull this off. If not there’s always Cuervo and Walmart.
    Good luck, I’m looking forward to following this.

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    1. Good luck with it, my friend.

      All those things they suggest you should do for NaNoWriMo I have never done in writing a novel.

      Develop story idea I have never done.

      Usually much of my writing depends on current events and geopolitical happenings.

      Create unique characters.

      I have always done that accidentally.

      For example, Renfield R. Renfield is based on an unusual hamster named Renfield who lived in a hamster cage in a used book store in Manitou Springs, Colorado where an eccentric book clerk named Natalie worked.

      The satyr Pan Goatee was originally intended to be a nice guy but there was such a drastic increase in uglos among the female population of the world in the early 2010s that I thought somebody is needed to bump them off.

      And that individual turned out to be Pan Goatee.

      Sherrielock Holmes (the professional dominatrix who is Sherlock Holmes’ lesser known twin sister) I created as a result of a suggestion by our mutual friend Sherrie.

      The character of Michelangelo the Psychic Lobster 🦞 was based on Paul the Psychic Octopus πŸ™ who made uncannily accurate predictions about game results during the 2010 FIFA World Cup in South Africa from the bottom of a zoo aquarium in Germany πŸ‡©πŸ‡ͺ.

      Build a strong world.

      Like you, I created my world through dialogue.

      Create a strong plot or outline.

      That I have never ever ever done.

      Grow your writing community.

      My attitude has always been, those who read my blog, read my blog.

      Those who don’t, don’t.

      Manage your time.

      I have never managed my time.

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      1. You are a true Pantser, Chris, which means you develop by the seat of your pants. Absolutely nothing wrong with that. Some can and some can’t. For those that can, it’s a wonderful talent. Your characters are the best ever.

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        1. Thank you so much 😊.

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          1. You earned all of your vampiric fame by determined long standing and hilarious and entertaining effort.

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            1. Thank you so much, Daniel.

              This coming November will mark 20 years since I first started writing my vampire novel.

              In early November of that year 2004 after having decided to write a vampire novel online, I thought What date should I start writing it?

              November 17th was coming up.

              November 17th is the Feast Day of St. Elizabeth of Hungary πŸ‡­πŸ‡Ί.

              And Hungary πŸ‡­πŸ‡Ί is the homeland of the most famous actor to ever play Dracula – Bela Lugosi.

              So I decided to start writing it on November 17th 2004 – the Feast Day of St. Elizabeth of Hungary πŸ‡­πŸ‡Ί (the country that was the birthplace and homeland of Universal Pictures’ Dracula – Bela Lugosi).

              I’m wondering if on November 17th of this year, Fred Flintstone and Barney Rubble will appear outside my bedroom window with a piano and start singing, β€œA happy anniversary, a happy anniversary… β€œ

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              1. That’s impressive, Chris. 20 years is epic. We were both still young and fruitful upon the earth 20 years ago.That was an act of fate to call upon St. Elizabeth of Hungary. I believe her sister was named Bela as well. I’m sure she has looked after you as well as all of the Vampiresses who do good works. I’ll bet if you envision Fred and Barney performing a duet outside your window, it will happen and I’ll have the pleasure to read about it.

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                1. Yes, St. Elizabeth of Hungary πŸ‡­πŸ‡Ί is the Patron Saint of my vampire novel.

                  She’d have been horrified to know that some day a satanic Antipope would be the Bishop of Rome.

                  So she has said prayers for me in Heaven as I have gone through the turbulent times in which we live.

                  After having read all about the Shrike and the Hyperion Cantos novels on Google yesterday, I’m reminded of something Christ said when His Apostles asked Him, β€œLord, why do you speak to us in parables?”.

                  And Christ answered, β€œFor now I speak to you in parables. But the time will come when I shall speak to you not in parables but plainly.”

                  Now I must say Wikipedia did an excellent job of summarizing the plots of all 4 of Dan Simmons’ Hyperion Cantos novels.

                  And as I read them, I thought, I know the real names of all those organizations he’s referring to in those books which he mentioned by fictional names when he first wrote them back in the 1980s.

                  Now in my vampire novels, I name names.

                  I use real names for both organizations and people.

                  Fictional names I only use for my fictional characters.

                  But I name names in my novels.

                  I call a spade a spade ♠️.

                  I call a satanic Antipope a satanic Antipope (when I’m not calling him Jorge Mario Bergoglio).

                  And when you mentioned Simmons’ writings being prescient to George in a previous comment, I’d have to wholeheartedly agree.

                  Simmons saw the times in which we are now living.

                  Now Christ spoke in parables to His Apostles when His Crucifixion was some time off.

                  But the closer He got to His Crucifixion, the less He spoke to them in parables but spoke plainly.

                  Simmons’ novels were like Christ’s words at the start of His ministry.

                  He wrote in parables.

                  My vampire novels are like Christ’s words as He approached His Crucifixion, less parables and more naming names directly.

                  The past year, I’ve been getting impressions about the year 2025.

                  The past year I remembered something the great Catholic radio and TV preacher Archbishop Fulton J. Sheen said on one occasion.

                  Someone in the audience asked him, β€œWhat year do you think the Antichrist will make his first official appearance on the world stage?”.

                  Sheen quickly answered, β€œIt is not given to men to know such things.”

                  Then he suddenly paused and a strange look came over his face.

                  And he said, β€œI don’t know. The year 2025 maybe?”.

                  Which I thought strange when I saw that clip on YouTube about 10 years ago.

                  Because at the time Sheen answered that question – way back in the 1950s – at the start of the atomic age – many people were seriously wondering at the time whether the world would even last until the year 2025.

                  The great Evangelical Christian writer Tom Horn (who just died last year in October) – he wrote a book called Apollyon Rising 2025 at the start of the 2020s in which he thought from his reading of the Bible and from examining current geopolitical trends (he was an excellent geopolitical analyst) that it was a strong possibility that the Antichrist would publicly emerge on the world stage in 2025.

                  I wondered why George would comment on my post, β€œThanks for letting me know that the Shrike is an anti-matter anti-Christ” when I had never even heard of the Shrike before until George made his comment on that post.

                  But then when I looked at Google’s images of the Shrike, it suddenly hit me.

                  George had read 3 of my past blog posts this week all at once, because he commented on them all on the same day and at the same hour.

                  But in my 2nd last blog post that I wrote I ended it with an AI image I had created myself of the Lovecraftian entity Cthulhu approaching the Temple Mount in Jerusalem.

                  I saw looking at Google images of the Shrike that the Shrike bears a striking resemblance to Lovecraft’s Cthulhu in appearance although Cthulhu is a lot taller.

                  I believe from the Wikipedia article I read on the Shrike that it was about 3 feet tall in height whereas of course I believe Lovecraft’s Cthulhu was at least over 100 meters tall.

                  I can’t remember whether Cthulhu was 100 meters tall or 300 meters tall or 600 meters tall, it was one of those.

                  George didn’t make his comment about the Shrike being β€œthe anti-matter anti-Christ” until my very last post that I wrote this past week (where I didn’t have my AI generated image of Cthulhu approaching the Temple Mount in Jerusalem) but no doubt that AI generated image of Cthulhu approaching the Temple Mount in Jerusalem in my previous post was still fresh in his mind.

                  Still if he hadn’t mistaken Cthulhu for the Shrike, I might not have found out about Dan Simmons’ Hyperion Cantos novels.

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                  1. I do know that the feeling from many is the end times are upon us. The warning from those most humble and devoted is exactly as that in the times of Isaiah, Jeremiah, and Daniel. While they saw the suffering of the people from their iniquity, they also knew the Messiah was coming. This is now happening in our time as well. I would not be surprised if you also received revelation and your vampire novels may warn us.

                    I was definitely able to see a lot of the parable and metaphor in the Hyperion Cantos and thought it cleverly done. He showed us the apostasy of the Catholic Church, the deep state and science vying for the same powers as God and the iniquity and false hopes of the people. Ultimately we witness the battle in heaven between the different mysterious entities and the reward of heaven for the main characters in the last three books.

                    As for the antichrist, I follow John’s account in his epistles to the churches and his account in revelation. Understanding John’s word and it’s deep connection to the aforementioned prophets and Christ shows us that the anti-Christ(ian) appears often in history and today. His power to corrupt and turn the weak away from Christ paves the way for the Über AntiChrist that will signal the opening of the seven seals. There are several candidates in my view. The Jesuit Pope, Putin, Xi, Trump, and even Kamala Harris. There could be others that rise to the top with a plan to take us all to Hell. β€œDo not ask for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for thee.” Thee being all us poor souls that will witness the end of days.

                    I’m sure you can find free copies of the Hyperion Cantos, perhaps the library if not on the β€œall thing” web. It’s a fascinating read.

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                    1. I will search there for free copies of the Hyperion Cantos.

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                    2. I think you’ll enjoy it and maybe find lots of inspiration for Set Enterprises and staff.

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    2. Thank you Rene. Cuervo and Walmart seem a lot more fun. I may do that for a break to fire up the imagination. πŸƒβ€β™‚οΈ

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      1. This project should keep you out of trouble for a while. If you start channeling Hemingway I’ll see you at Walmart . πŸƒπŸƒπŸΌβ€β™€οΈ

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        1. I’ll definitely need some good ole Walmart life to snap me out of my Hemingway cosplay costume. 🩳 🫣

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          1. That will bring you back to earth in a hurry. πŸ€—

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            1. I might fit in with the Walmart crowd if I allow myself a bit more avant garde fashion and eccentricity. What I had in mind was a Jimmy Buffet ensemble with a safari hat. Walmart flip flops would definitely work. 🫒🀠

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              1. Terrific ! I’m going for a crop top with something controversial written on it and some cutoffs with knee high boots πŸ‘’β€¦ I can’t wait to mingle, camera ready.

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                1. Waaa haaa haaa! I know all of those crazy Walmart People videos come from the security cameras. That has to be an entertaining job. Cutoffs and knee high boots are true southern fashion. We’re ready to turn heads!

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                  1. How about some pigtails for a finishing touch? Woot!

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                    1. You gotta do it! Pigtails would be the perfect finishing touch to the Walmart Haute Couture.

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                    2. πŸ˜³πŸ«’πŸ˜‚

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    camilla wells paynter

    Enjoyable peek into your process! Good luck!

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    1. Thank you Camilla! This might be interesting to see how it works or doesn’t work.

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  7. Okay, write away!

    I’ll read.

    I know you’ve gone to a lot of work”organizing” your project. I have used “To Do” lists, and they work brilliantly. However, that was when I was creating for others, for $$$.

    Still, don’t be surprised, as a pantster, that all you really need to do to create is put your pants on.

    Let the ‘To Do” list help, but don’t let it imprison.

    Resa

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    1. Thank you, Resa. Good advice. I like to have a detailed plan, I can throw out the window as soon as I pull out of the driveway. It’s liberating.

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      1. Everyone has a plan until they get punched in the face.

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        1. LOL!πŸ˜† Yep. That punch to the face evaporates my plan and puts me in whomp-stomp arm slinging mode.

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      2. Yes, it is liberating. Some of the strongest feelings of freedom I’ve ever had were tossing out the rules, and doing it my way.

        In my way no one got hurt.
        Okay…sometimes love hurt, but no wounds or broken bones.

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        1. That is the best way to do anything. Leave them smiling and thankful for the experience.

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