The Island 11

Epigraph from the Codex of Clay and Breath

Canticle of the Shaping Hand, Verse XII

“The vessel remembers what the mind forgets.
For every curve is a breath once taken,
and every line is a dream once lived.

The potter does not shape the clay alone.
The clay shapes the potter in return,
teaching the hand the pattern of its truth.

Life is written in spirals,
and dreams are fired into permanence.
Those who read the pottery read the soul,
for the island inscribes its memory
in every shard that survives the turning of time.”

MS Copilot AI generated image by the author

The morning after the kiln was finished, the air was cool, smelling of wet clay and smoke. David stood by the creek, stacking dry wood into neat bundles. Renate was kneeling near the kiln, brushing away bits of loose earth from the opening. The clay mortar had hardened overnight and had dried to a pale gray.

David carried the wood to her. “We’ll start slow, let the heat build.”

Renate nodded. “I hope it doesn’t crack.”

He arranged the wood inside the kiln, careful and deliberate. The sound of the creek was steady behind them, and the forest was quiet except for the rustle of leaves.

Renate brought a small bowl of clay pieces they had shaped the day before, two cups, and a shallow dish. She set them on a flat stone beside the kiln.

David struck flint against steel. The spark caught, and the fire began to breathe. Smoke curled upward, thin and white.

Renate watched the flames. “It feels good to see it fire up for the first time.”

David smiled. “It’s the first real fire we’ve built for work, not warmth or cooking.”

She nodded. “It’s a different feel.”

They sat together as the fire grew. The heat shimmered in the air above the kiln, and the clay inside began to darken.

Renate leaned back on her hands. “We’ll need glazes soon,” she said. “Something to make them shine.”

David looked at her. “We’ll find a way. We always do.”

She smiled. “Maybe the ash will give us color.”

He nodded. “Or the minerals from the creek.”

The fire crackled, and the smell of burning wood mixed with the scent of hot clay.

Renate stood and walked to the creek. She dipped her hands into the water, let it run over her fingers, and then wiped her brow. “I love how cool the water is, especially in the heat of the day next to a fire.”

David joined her. “It’ll be good for tempering.”

They filled a small pitcher and carried it back to the kiln. The flames were steady now, the stones glowing faintly.

Renate looked at the pottery pieces. “They’ll be strong,” she said.

David nodded. “And useful.”

She smiled. “And beautiful.”

The sun climbed higher, and the light turned bright yellow through the trees. The creek sparkled, and the air was warm.

David added more wood to the fire. “We’ll keep it burning until dusk.”

Renate sat beside him. “Then we’ll see if we are clay masters or disasters.”

They worked through the day, tending the fire, gathering more clay, and talking quietly. The kiln stood solid and alive with the glow of red hot coals, its heat pulsing through the air.

When the sun began to set, they let the fire die down. The stones glowed faintly in the fading light.

Renate brushed ash from her hands. “Tomorrow we’ll check it,” she said.

David nodded. “Tomorrow should give a good idea if it gets hot enough to fuse the clay.”

They sat by the creek as the last light faded, the sound of water soft and steady. The kiln smoked gently behind them, a promise of what was to come.

Renate leaned against him. “It feels like we’ve built something that will last,” she said.

David looked at the kiln. “We have had really good luck with everything we’ve tried so far. It’s as if the island is helping us.”

The forest grew quiet, and the stars began to show. The fire was gone, but its warmth lingered in the stones.

They stayed there until the night settled around them, the creek whispering, the kiln cooling, and the island holding them close.

The next morning after the kiln had cooled, the air was cool, smelling of damp earth and smoke. David stood by the creek, stacking more wood into neat bundles. Renate was kneeling near the kiln, brushing the ash into a woven basket she made. The clay pieces had hardened overnight without cracking. The two squatted together at the edge of the creek cleaning the ash from the pottery with wet sand.

Renate held the dish up to the light, “It’s pretty good for an amateur, don’t you Think?”

David smiled. “Some archeologist in the future is going to think he found the first fired pottery ever made by human hands from a tribe previously unkown.”

“I think we make a fine tribe,” Renate replied, holding up their first pieces produced in the kiln. “But, we really do need to glaze our pottery and even use a patten unique to us so that archeologist will know we were totally cool artisans.”

“You know, the creek is full of colored quartz-like pebbles. We can collect some nice colors, crush them up and mix the powder with the ash and we have glaze that will really make this pottery shine. Museum quality.” David said.

Renate noticed David had that look in his eyes. “Are you thinking about dragging me up and down the creek hauling bags of rocks?”

“You read my mind so easily,” he replied.

26 responses to “The Island 11”

  1. They make a good team, these two.

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    1. Thank you Shruti. I think so too. Not once during this whole ordeal have they picked up bamboo sticks and whacked the tar out of each other over David’s snoring or Renate picking her teeth with the carving knife. They just accept each other and do everything together.

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      1. Kinda makes sense they do that, considering they’ve no one but each other on this island.

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        1. Good point. Having no options helps one focus on the beauty at hand, not the beauty that might exist somewhere else.

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  2. Very wonderful descriptions of the work David and Renate are doing on the island.
    The Bible, Khalil Ghibran and Omar Khayyam all had wonderful things to say about the potter and the clay.
    So what David and Renate are doing makes for beautiful reading.

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    1. The potter and the clay lends itself to many philosophical insights. The wise and insightful can see the relationship between the Master and the earth.

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  3. Renate and David have everything it takes to build a life on the Island. Dedication, creativity, passion, and enthusiasm. I’m imagining the reaction of future explorers when they happen upon the Artifacts left here by our friends. Or perhaps R&D will create their own tribe and remain forever there. This is just lovely writing dear Dan. I’m can feel the warmth of the kiln and air and hear the ripple of the stream.
    I once shared a kiln with a friend of mine. We made some beautiful pottery . She kept it in her utility room. That’s some incredible heat those things put out. 🌷

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    1. You are very finely tuned to this story, Rene. I’m sure your previous experiences with this most ancient art gives you amazing insights into the hard work and the great reward of making pottery. And being forged in the hottest fire is a powerful metaphor for life. There are plans for a tribe and island perpetuity. I think you’ll approve. For a long time, I’ve dreamed of terraforming my own land into a natural garden that produces food and natural medicine. The Island in Renate and David’s capable hands gives that dream wings. I’ll send you a hint in your DM.

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      1. I really love this story Dan. I think they are definitely going to turn this into their home and whether they will live in peace or have to leave is to be seen.

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        1. Thank you so much Rene, This is the tribute to those dreams of living in peace. My vision for the story was to throw all modern story writing conventions out the door and write it in a simple style, no long paragraphs of world building and environment scenario constructions. Keep it simple and let R& D tell the story through their eyes and dialog. No real plots, sub plots, story arcs, character arcs with protagonists and antagonists. I do deepen the psychological ties to a mystic vibe that has followed R & D and grounded them to their natural world. The theme might be good stewards of the land will be rewarded by the land.

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          1. The mystic vibes are always the most intriguing.

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            1. It’s the twist. You and I will get it right away. It’s more of the Cave Monks and the garden blessing. It adds a little bit of R & D solving riddles and coming to understand how connected they are to the Island.

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              1. Love the twists and the turns. That’s what escaping is all about. 🌷

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  4. I can relate to R and D , they’ve been searching for that slice of paradise and now that it’s become imperative to seek out peace and harmony they have finally found their own island in the sun. ☀️

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    1. And this is no ordinary island. It’s a happy place and it likes R & D and will take good care of them.

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      1. It’s already offered up a sweet stream, all the tropical beauty anyone could ask for, good and silver, fire, 🔥 I’m sure there is a fall. Renate loves falls.

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        1. I’m absolutely sure Renate would not settle on an island without a waterfall and lovely pool beneath. It’s a deal breaker.

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          1. Make it so , and some tropical birds in every color of the rainbow. How about it 😊

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            1. Friday at 4:00 pm Central Time, 5:00 pm Eastern Time, The Island 12 will reveal Renate and David at a spectacular waterfall. And their life and connection to the Island ramps up a notch. The Birds come shortly after.

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              1. Definitely will see you then 🏝️

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                1. I look forward to it. Hope you enjoy.

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                  1. I’ve no doubt about that !

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  5. See you here … 🏝️💦🍃

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    1. The AI image is nice. It helps give the scene some real life. We are sitting across to them in a little circle having lunch by the waterfall. So the scene is from our perspective. Enjoy! 😉🏝️🥂🦜

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      1. We’ve always been nearby. 🥂

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