The Island 11

Epigraph from the Codex of Clay and Breath

Canticle of the Shaping Hand, Verse XII

“The vessel remembers what the mind forgets.
For every curve is a breath once taken,
and every line is a dream once lived.

The potter does not shape the clay alone.
The clay shapes the potter in return,
teaching the hand the pattern of its truth.

Life is written in spirals,
and dreams are fired into permanence.
Those who read the pottery read the soul,
for the island inscribes its memory
in every shard that survives the turning of time.”

MS Copilot AI generated image by the author

The morning after the kiln was finished, the air was cool, smelling of wet clay and smoke. David stood by the creek, stacking dry wood into neat bundles. Renate was kneeling near the kiln, brushing away bits of loose earth from the opening. The clay mortar had hardened overnight and had dried to a pale gray.

David carried the wood to her. “We’ll start slow, let the heat build.”

Renate nodded. “I hope it doesn’t crack.”

He arranged the wood inside the kiln, careful and deliberate. The sound of the creek was steady behind them, and the forest was quiet except for the rustle of leaves.

Renate brought a small bowl of clay pieces they had shaped the day before, two cups, and a shallow dish. She set them on a flat stone beside the kiln.

David struck flint against steel. The spark caught, and the fire began to breathe. Smoke curled upward, thin and white.

Renate watched the flames. “It feels good to see it fire up for the first time.”

David smiled. “It’s the first real fire we’ve built for work, not warmth or cooking.”

She nodded. “It’s a different feel.”

They sat together as the fire grew. The heat shimmered in the air above the kiln, and the clay inside began to darken.

Renate leaned back on her hands. “We’ll need glazes soon,” she said. “Something to make them shine.”

David looked at her. “We’ll find a way. We always do.”

She smiled. “Maybe the ash will give us color.”

He nodded. “Or the minerals from the creek.”

The fire crackled, and the smell of burning wood mixed with the scent of hot clay.

Renate stood and walked to the creek. She dipped her hands into the water, let it run over her fingers, and then wiped her brow. “I love how cool the water is, especially in the heat of the day next to a fire.”

David joined her. “It’ll be good for tempering.”

They filled a small pitcher and carried it back to the kiln. The flames were steady now, the stones glowing faintly.

Renate looked at the pottery pieces. “They’ll be strong,” she said.

David nodded. “And useful.”

She smiled. “And beautiful.”

The sun climbed higher, and the light turned bright yellow through the trees. The creek sparkled, and the air was warm.

David added more wood to the fire. “We’ll keep it burning until dusk.”

Renate sat beside him. “Then we’ll see if we are clay masters or disasters.”

They worked through the day, tending the fire, gathering more clay, and talking quietly. The kiln stood solid and alive with the glow of red hot coals, its heat pulsing through the air.

When the sun began to set, they let the fire die down. The stones glowed faintly in the fading light.

Renate brushed ash from her hands. “Tomorrow we’ll check it,” she said.

David nodded. “Tomorrow should give a good idea if it gets hot enough to fuse the clay.”

They sat by the creek as the last light faded, the sound of water soft and steady. The kiln smoked gently behind them, a promise of what was to come.

Renate leaned against him. “It feels like we’ve built something that will last,” she said.

David looked at the kiln. “We have had really good luck with everything we’ve tried so far. It’s as if the island is helping us.”

The forest grew quiet, and the stars began to show. The fire was gone, but its warmth lingered in the stones.

They stayed there until the night settled around them, the creek whispering, the kiln cooling, and the island holding them close.

The next morning after the kiln had cooled, the air was cool, smelling of damp earth and smoke. David stood by the creek, stacking more wood into neat bundles. Renate was kneeling near the kiln, brushing the ash into a woven basket she made. The clay pieces had hardened overnight without cracking. The two squatted together at the edge of the creek cleaning the ash from the pottery with wet sand.

Renate held the dish up to the light, “It’s pretty good for an amateur, don’t you Think?”

David smiled. “Some archeologist in the future is going to think he found the first fired pottery ever made by human hands from a tribe previously unkown.”

“I think we make a fine tribe,” Renate replied, holding up their first pieces produced in the kiln. “But, we really do need to glaze our pottery and even use a patten unique to us so that archeologist will know we were totally cool artisans.”

“You know, the creek is full of colored quartz-like pebbles. We can collect some nice colors, crush them up and mix the powder with the ash and we have glaze that will really make this pottery shine. Museum quality.” David said.

Renate noticed David had that look in his eyes. “Are you thinking about dragging me up and down the creek hauling bags of rocks?”

“You read my mind so easily,” he replied.

67 responses to “The Island 11”

  1. They make a good team, these two.

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    1. Thank you Shruti. I think so too. Not once during this whole ordeal have they picked up bamboo sticks and whacked the tar out of each other over David’s snoring or Renate picking her teeth with the carving knife. They just accept each other and do everything together.

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      1. Kinda makes sense they do that, considering they’ve no one but each other on this island.

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        1. Good point. Having no options helps one focus on the beauty at hand, not the beauty that might exist somewhere else.

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  2. Very wonderful descriptions of the work David and Renate are doing on the island.
    The Bible, Khalil Ghibran and Omar Khayyam all had wonderful things to say about the potter and the clay.
    So what David and Renate are doing makes for beautiful reading.

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    1. The potter and the clay lends itself to many philosophical insights. The wise and insightful can see the relationship between the Master and the earth.

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  3. Renate and David have everything it takes to build a life on the Island. Dedication, creativity, passion, and enthusiasm. I’m imagining the reaction of future explorers when they happen upon the Artifacts left here by our friends. Or perhaps R&D will create their own tribe and remain forever there. This is just lovely writing dear Dan. I’m can feel the warmth of the kiln and air and hear the ripple of the stream.
    I once shared a kiln with a friend of mine. We made some beautiful pottery . She kept it in her utility room. That’s some incredible heat those things put out. 🌷

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    1. You are very finely tuned to this story, Rene. I’m sure your previous experiences with this most ancient art gives you amazing insights into the hard work and the great reward of making pottery. And being forged in the hottest fire is a powerful metaphor for life. There are plans for a tribe and island perpetuity. I think you’ll approve. For a long time, I’ve dreamed of terraforming my own land into a natural garden that produces food and natural medicine. The Island in Renate and David’s capable hands gives that dream wings. I’ll send you a hint in your DM.

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      1. I really love this story Dan. I think they are definitely going to turn this into their home and whether they will live in peace or have to leave is to be seen.

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        1. Thank you so much Rene, This is the tribute to those dreams of living in peace. My vision for the story was to throw all modern story writing conventions out the door and write it in a simple style, no long paragraphs of world building and environment scenario constructions. Keep it simple and let R& D tell the story through their eyes and dialog. No real plots, sub plots, story arcs, character arcs with protagonists and antagonists. I do deepen the psychological ties to a mystic vibe that has followed R & D and grounded them to their natural world. The theme might be good stewards of the land will be rewarded by the land.

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          1. The mystic vibes are always the most intriguing.

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            1. It’s the twist. You and I will get it right away. It’s more of the Cave Monks and the garden blessing. It adds a little bit of R & D solving riddles and coming to understand how connected they are to the Island.

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              1. Love the twists and the turns. That’s what escaping is all about. 🌷

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                1. I think so too. It’s in the twist, the unexpected, we find ourselves clutching and holding on to our seats to see what will unfold next.

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  4. I can relate to R and D , they’ve been searching for that slice of paradise and now that it’s become imperative to seek out peace and harmony they have finally found their own island in the sun. ☀️

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    1. And this is no ordinary island. It’s a happy place and it likes R & D and will take good care of them.

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      1. It’s already offered up a sweet stream, all the tropical beauty anyone could ask for, good and silver, fire, 🔥 I’m sure there is a fall. Renate loves falls.

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        1. I’m absolutely sure Renate would not settle on an island without a waterfall and lovely pool beneath. It’s a deal breaker.

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          1. Make it so , and some tropical birds in every color of the rainbow. How about it 😊

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            1. Friday at 4:00 pm Central Time, 5:00 pm Eastern Time, The Island 12 will reveal Renate and David at a spectacular waterfall. And their life and connection to the Island ramps up a notch. The Birds come shortly after.

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              1. Definitely will see you then 🏝️

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                1. I look forward to it. Hope you enjoy.

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                  1. I’ve no doubt about that !

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                    1. Perhaps it will be a familiar scene.

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                    2. That would be nice 😊

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                    3. Back from Vacay. I saw a gazillion truckers with car smashing anger management problems. I couldn’t figure out why they focused on me all the time. There were lots of ugly cars to smash. However, being one to use motorcycle lane splitting techniques, I had a great time out on the highway. Now, loaded with fresh zen, it’s time to get back to writing that lovely island story.

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                    4. Omg, the highways are terrible. I’m glad see you back safely and freshly zenned! Welcome back, I will be over as soon as possible 🏃‍♀️

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                    5. With all the flooding we’ve had, I might have ocean front property now. What a bonus. I didn’t have to move and the ocean came to me. 😳. Enjoy your island stay. Darn caves keep popping up everywhere. And, David promised not to do any cave exploring anymore.

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                    6. I have a feeling they will have to go into the cave. I’d be disappointed if they don’t 🤔

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                    7. David still has giant lizard nightmares. But, he won’t let Renate go it alone. 😉🪎🏴‍☠️

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                    8. Renate is a daredevil. Curiosity will get the best of her. I see David did not put up an argument about entering the cave. 😳

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                    9. LOL! He did learn his lesson. That might be the experience that caused him to grow up.

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  5. See you here … 🏝️💦🍃

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    1. The AI image is nice. It helps give the scene some real life. We are sitting across to them in a little circle having lunch by the waterfall. So the scene is from our perspective. Enjoy! 😉🏝️🥂🦜

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      1. We’ve always been nearby. 🥂

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        1. Glad to always be ready to help out. Just an arms length away. 🥂🤗

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          1. Cheers to a lovely day , Dan 🥂⛅️

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            1. Thank you Rene. I’m doing a little R&R up in the Ozark mountains and tho a little rainy everything is gorgeous and relaxing. Put in a great hike yesterday and just like David’s luck the trail was washed out in a steep area and had to do a little off trail adventure which turned out very well. My zen bucket is filling up fast. Hope you are also having a lovely weekend.

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              1. That’s awesome, Dan. I’m glad you are enjoying yourself. A bit of adventure on the hike , sounds fun. It’s nice here. A good day for the beach. 🏖️

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                1. It has rained every day but thankfully enough sunshine in between has given me plenty of time to enjoy my son and grandsons outdoors. The beach always sounds inviting. I need to try that next.

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                  1. Those the important things. I was at the beach early, the water is rough but beautiful posting it at IG.

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                    1. Love the natural photos. It’s helping me cope with my beach abandonment anxiety. 😁

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                    2. I always snap a pic when I’m there. They all look alike unless a storm is coming in. ⛅️

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                    3. Ahhh, don’t we love predictability when it comes to oceans and waves. Maybe that’s a Florida Pisces thing.

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                    4. And it is is so unpredictable from June to Dec! 🌀

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                    5. It definitely has been weird. Half the US is bone dry and we are swimming around in our back yards here trying to find grass to mow. It’s now on the mega-lake bottom. I’m going to need a snorkel.

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                    6. The flooding is a real problem, next week it’s predicted to rain everyday. I can do without that , just enough to water the grass and keep the fires at bay is enough.

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                    7. I agree. No need to get obsessive or greedy. Share the water. I have a feeling clean water supply is going to be the single most sought after resource for the world. I need a pear wine bunker.

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                    8. lack of access to safe, clean water in specific regions will be a challenge . For many, water won’t vanish, but it will become prohibitively expensive to treat, lack of access will be a huge problem. Climate change.

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                    9. I know the US is thinking hard about this problem but they can’t get past the party politics and the cost to fix a hundred years of negligence. I recently saw a documentary on Lake Tahoe. It’s filled with old cars, mafia dumps, and hundreds of barrels of extremely toxic waste. The only reason it isn’t deadly to swim in is the depth and cold temperatures hold the toxins in the depths. Such a beautiful place can’t be saved in a generation if the water levels drop enough to warm up the lake. It’s like that all across the US.

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  6. I like this chapter, as it appears I have learned something… a lot … about making pottery.

    I’m thinking this is something you have experience in?

    I find it intriguing that you are writing such an earthy… back to basics, nature story, yet you use AI imagery.

    I don’t mean that as a negative criticism. Still, even without it, your words create the images beautifully.

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    1. We are about to take a deeper dive into nature’s wonders. Pottery is one of the earliest transitions into tool making in human history. It’s a key to dating archaeological finds because it was so unique across cultural timelines by design and decoration. We instantly assumed a need to store things safely and to hold water, drink from and hold food for eating. Then they wanted to decorate it to elevate their pottery’s appearance. It signifies R & D’s regression backward into natural living. My daughter’s and grand daughters have all created wonderful and useful items from pottery with a flare for the art. 😂 I hadn’t thought about using AI images to portray natural scenes. To me it was a way of creating an exact and relevant image for the scene portrayed rather than searching for something relevant. But, once I read your comment I saw that contrast. I also get a laugh out of the bizarre mistakes the AI makes. I leave some of the mistakes in the image for giggles. In a more interpretive view, I see the duality of one foot in the natural world and one foot in the digital world. Now my challenge is to see how much more weird I can get.

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      1. Is that someone’s beat up iPhone lying in the stack of logs? AI is playing with us. Or is that you , Dan 😂

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        1. LOL 😂! It’s the AI. It screws up wildly with the images. But I leave some of it in just for people to have fun noticing the weirdness. Like Renate’s tattoo switches arms, she only has 3 fingers, and her clothes change from scene to scene during the same event, like she changes clothes every hour. Imagine the auto spell and imaging AI is the same and if they will wildly screw up basic things like that, wait until they start doing surgery.

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          1. That’s hysterical! Love it. I had to work with AI for two days to try to-fix my blog before getting a human.
            Here’s its words of wisdom :
            Don’t worry, we are going to fix this together…
            Stay calm and don’t worry , your blog is still there , nothing has changed”
            Then comes ten suggestions including wiping out my entire Safari history.
            Again… Don’t worry…
            We will fix this together … etc etc.
            We are doomed !

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            1. Whose idea was it to let AI do all the thinking around here? I’ve heard from a lot of people how the AI kisses their behind and then blows smoke in their face. Nothing like depending on a conman to solve your problems and make you feel good while your digital world burns to the ground. WE are soooooo doomed.

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              1. It’s an example of corporate greed, it’s much cheaper to install AI now that it is to hire qualified people. So the humans in the back of WP are few but once you get one they are helpful, it’s just a matter of getting to one. Doomed!!

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                1. I headed a project to create a human in the loop AI to do business analysis for the Army. My idea was AI should be a tool the person uses. Those that see it as a replacement for human labor are throwing the future of their business in the trash. AI alone will wreck businesses and individuals with weak mental courage. It’s the same a spinning the six shot cylinder on a gun with one bullet in the chamber and then putting it to their head and pulling the trigger. Maybe they win that round, but eventually, they will lose in a dramatic way. IT’s insane what we are doing with machine technology. Pretending there is no limit has far different results than respecting a limit.

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                  1. Im afraid for the human race and esp the use of AI to replace human intelligence in jobs , that everyone needs in America to survive. I completely believe that is the goal of the corporations and small businesses too. Just recently I heard in the national news that even before a job applicant sees a human his application will go through AI. 🤖

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                    1. Most of the very worst applicants for jobs I posted were scanned by AI first. The government does that for every single application it receives. I bet the AI recommended The GOO for president. That’s what we face with AI out front instead of way in the back.

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                    2. Really? I hate the idea of being review and investigated by AI… though I have made many friends with AI. Even took deep breaths and counted to ten together last week.

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                    3. Wa Haa haaa! 😆 I guess the AI had to bond with you before it handed you to the Happiness Engineer because that might have been too dangerous to just say, hello, how may I help you today and then get choked through the phone. You have way too much precious works to trust WP with it all. Do those back ups then you can wipe your entire website and recreate it in ten minutes or less.

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                    4. This is my second public blog. I downloaded my first one after being hacked in 2013 and uploaded it to House of Heart. . I’m not feeling very confident tech wise since they made the upgrades here. I should at least do a back up. AI told me to clear all the history from Safari. Thankfully I wasn’t that dumb.

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                    5. Clearing your browser history is a sure fire way to have to start over rebuilding your internet life. I would go in and clear any strange files that WP dropped in my history but everything else except the spyware can stay. Depending on your posting volume, back-ups will protect your posts and comments as well as the web site structure. You only lose anything posted after your last back up. Frequent back ups aren’t a bad thing.

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                    6. Since AI came in my blog it hasn’t been the same with lots of posting issues . even though I “ delected” that option it’s still there. Yes, you are right.

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                    7. I’ve read about the AI’s protecting themselves from being deleted and sneaking back in to create havoc with all kinds of nonsense. You may be a case of AI survival instinct gone awry.

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