Whispers of the Desert 2

Isaiah 1:21-23
How the faithful city
has become a whore,
she was full of justice.
Righteousness lodged in her,
but now murderers.
Your silver has become dross,
your best wine mixed with water.
Your princes are rebels
and companions of thieves.
Everyone loves a bride
and runs after gifts.
They do not bring justice to the fatherless,
and the widow’s cause does not come to them.

The Stoning

Amir Abraham sat on a smooth rock under an acacia tree and looked up from his lesson book to count his uncle’s sheep grazing in the high valley of Isaiah. The Kangal dog lay in the tall grass; his ears perked to listen for predators. Satisfied that everything appeared in order, he returned to his lesson from the local religious school he attended to prepare for college and the life of a spiritual leader. 

In his best oratory voice, he read aloud to the sheep and dog, who ignored him. “I make a covenant to undergo poverty, learning the realities of being poor, hungry, thirsty, and inadequately clothed. My journey as a holy man begins with a mastery of poverty and affliction.”

“Very good,” he said. Amir noted the dog seemed annoyed. The shepherd boy launched into the rest of his pledge. “I will bring justice to the fatherless and hear the widow’s lament.”

Uncle Subinyá found him under the acacia tree. 

“Come, boy, we must go to the bowl of stones.”

Amir knew the bowl of stones as a place of judgment.

“Will the judges be there to punish a criminal?”

Subinyá’s throat vibrated under the tanned wrinkles on his neck as he swallowed. 

“They will carry out God’s commandments,” said Subinyá. “You must attend so you can learn the way of the judges.”

Amir did not test his uncle’s patience with more questions. They hiked from the mountain meadow until they met the road to the village. On the way, in a field, was the bowl of stones. It was an area shaped like a bowl full of smooth river rocks the size of a man’s fist carved by an ancient stream that no longer flowed.

When they arrived, a crowd had gathered. Amir noticed a group of judges around a wagon. Their turbans were black and red. A gold scorpion emblem was on the front of the red turbans. The black turbans had no symbol. Amir guessed they were mosque workers with no rank. The red turbans were the exalted judges.

“Uncle, why do the judges wear scorpion badges on their head wraps?” Amir asked.

“The scorpion symbolizes their high status and represents death and rebirth. It is an emblem from ancient times.”

Amir admired the rich fabric of their robes and large stature. One judge had the blackest beard he had ever seen. The man’s face appeared swollen, and his stomach ballooned out like it might pop at any minute. He ate well.

As the crowd swelled, the fat judge took a cloaked figure from the back of the wagon. She wore the burqa of a widow. Everyone could see the shackles around her ankles and wrists. The judge took her to the center of the bowl and pushed her to her knees. He forced her head down and said something to the shaken figure veiled in loose clothing, her head hooded.

The workers brought over a dun-colored horse blanket and covered the woman, who was only a lump on the rocks. They retreated, and the elder judge, a tall and thin man with a white beard, stood at the head of the brown lump and pronounced his judgment.

“Brothers, here before you is a whore of the slums who has broken her covenant with God to remain chaste in honor of her husband, martyred in God’s war against the tyranny of the state.”

The blanket sobbed and begged mercy at the older judge’s feet. 

Amir’s legs shook, and his throat went dry. The pitiful sounds of the condemned shot through him. She sounded like the cry of his newborn sheep, whom he swore to protect.

A villager behind Amir spoke in a low tone to the man beside him. “She wouldn’t allow the fat judge to desecrate her womanhood, and that’s why he is having her murdered.” 

The second man replied, “We must rid our land of these vipers and hypocrites.”

The judge droned on. “… And for these crimes against the commandments of God, we sentence you to death.” The elderly judge then commanded the crowd to stone the woman. Three men immediately ran into the bowl, picked up a stone, and struck the woman with as much force as possible. The crowd cheered. More followed until a hail of rocks arched and fell on the condemned.

Amir flinched at the sound of it all. Horror gripped him to witness the bloodlust. Now, young boys gathered and hurled stones.

Subinyá picked up two rocks and handed Amir one.

“No, uncle, I won’t do this barbaric thing.”

“You must. The judges watch to see who doesn’t dirty their hands in innocent blood. They will drag you into the pit of these scorpions as an apostate.”

The stone flew straight from Subinyá’s hand, catching the woman in the head under the blood-soaked blanket. The lump finally collapsed and flattened. “Throw the stone, boy. Be merciful to end her suffering.”  

Amir threw the stone. There was no reaction under the blanket. He turned and pushed through the crowd, kneeled behind a boulder, and vomited.

The naïve shepherd boy tried to wipe his mouth and stand. A man jerked him up and shook him. Amir looked into the dark eyes of a devil. The corpulent judge held him by his smock with one hand. 

“You effeminate apostate. Explain why you shouldn’t join the whore in death.” Amir trembled in shock. His head rolled on his shoulders as the scorpion judge shook him.

“He is no apostate. He was ill. We came to honor God’s will,” said Subinyá.

Black beard released his grip, and Subinyá caught Amir and held him at his side to keep him upright.

The fat judge glared at the two shepherds. Evil on his face caused Subinyá to step back. “We need him to be one of our martyrs to fight against the corrupt government. I will call for him when I’m ready,” the judge said.


Author’s Note: And now the three keystones to the story, Whispers of the Desert, are laid down. In the Opening we received the back story of the woman who now lies brutally murdered in the bowl of stones. The story opens with an excerpt from Isaiah the Old Testament Prophet describing the iniquity of the Israelites. And now sometime in history the ancient city of Isaiah continues to bear witness to the iniquity of Humankind.

Twenty-six years ago, I experienced the horror of witnessing the stoning of a woman whose sin was refusing sex to her brother-in-law. Her memory never left me and I still hear the terrible sounds of stones striking her body. She has visited me many times in my dreams and asks me why brave men let her die. The answer is in war everyone is disposable except the leaders and those still alive to claim victory. Innocence is never enough to buy back one’s life from those with evil intent.

Through her sacrifice, the woman in black becomes the guiding light for young Amir. He will never forget her or the cruelty of the hypocrite judges. His religion and the attending corruption of men creates the conflict Amir must resolve. He must chose a side and his choice will make him a holy prophet of change or a criminal of unspeakable terror.

This first draft only has very basic editing and is presented to you in its raw form. The story will improve over time and the final book will be published for free download or reading in Hyperion’s Library on this website.

Thank you dear reader for your time and I hope this story will find it’s way with your regard.

47 responses to “Whispers of the Desert 2”

    1. Thank you M. 😊

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      1. You already have your URL, I should go ahead and get mine so I’m ready with one I want vs getting one with a new provider. Where did you go to get yours? 🙂

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        1. I haven’t decided yet. I’m looking at all the options.

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          1. Is your URL thru WordPress or do you own it? Mine is own by WordPress which is why I thought I should go get my own to use whereever I go.

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            1. I rent my URL from the WP host. My address suffix is .blog instead of .com or .org.

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              1. Mine is the same .blog. Do yo see the value to getting a new URL of my own and not wait or buy from next site when I move. I thought it might help people get used to the new URL long before or maybe long before anything happens.

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                1. There are a lot of advantages to having two sites. One can always be a back up for the other but you do have to maintain them both.

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                  1. I wasn’t planning on starting a new site just getting my own URL to use when I need to change sites. I might be able to use on my current site but I don’t know about that. I just wanted to own my URL and it not be owned by whatever site I go to.

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                    1. That’s a good plan to avoid being forced into a cookie cutter plan.

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                    2. I bought lookingforthelight.us at GoDaddy last night. If WP doesn’t implode, I’ve paid $25 for 2 years, no big loss.

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                    3. If you don’t plan to activate your url for blogging, you can use it as a backup storage in the web cloud for those posts you consider important enough to keep.

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                    4. I used the company you mentioned and have everything backed up to it. I am not sure how to use the new URL as a back-up. Maybe on another day. Fibro has been killing me for a couple of months.

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                    5. Have you tried deep tissue massage for the fibro? The medication is good but flushing the lactic acid and inflammation from the muscle tissue will help a lot.

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                    6. I see a chiropractor once a week and get a massage once a month. The massage feels great.

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                    7. Great! The chiro can really help a lot. Some people do Chiro then massage after or massage before. Either way it can go a long way to give you relief. Of course, how long it lasts is an individual experience but it kept me alive for a long long time.

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                    8. It still feels sore in the areas that have degenerated to most but I tell her it’s a good pain. It’s natural medical assistance and I like that.

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                    9. Yes, I experience a lot of soreness but I know that means the massage and chiro was effective. I just take it easy for a couple of days and then jump back into my routine.

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                    10. She will outlive all
                      Of her caregivers.

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                    11. That is a very true statement! 🥊

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  1. That would be a horrible experience witnessing the stoning of a woman.

    This is a most intriguing story, Daniel, and a very engaging plot as what Amir witnessed will set the future course of his life.

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    1. Anti-evil on the misogyny wavelength. With a guiding ghost. Mine has a pair of angels disguised as lesbian fairy godmothers. The evil tentacles of misogyny reach everywhere, and are responsible for my giving the whole works the finger when I was 18. But it started with the medical profession’s barbaric Victorian treatment of my mother when I was nine. So good luck. One thing. This is not a polite story. Make it go BAM. Lean on the meat, ease up on the potato salad.

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      1. I definitely see the Victorians’ long reach in the medical field. I’m sort of a rebel and trust my alchemist approach to self healing instead of vast layers of pills to counteract the negative side effects they each impose on the poor miserable soul who takes them. I took my wife to the hospital for surgery and six doctors unrelated to her care insisted on giving her a pelvic exam. One after the other. Number seven was told to read her charts and leave or go out the damn window, his choice. Okay, reshuffling the word salad and adding more BAM. I feel obligated to keep the boy meets girl part in or nobody will bother. 😆

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        1. Man, I’ve written that one! Deanna Collings and the doctors who went looking for a hernia through her vagina. I think I’ll run the whole unpublished first Deanna and Jackson for November. And boy/girl doesn’t always have to be hearts and flowers. Powerful, smart women get up in Jackson’s shit constantly, including the love of his life…My point, victim by cultural scripting is a great theme. Just don’t beat the victim part too much. I mean for me. You can send the Hallmark version to everybody else🤣

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          1. LOL! I do have a mysterious woman in the plan that guides Amir toward ass kicking righteousness. To get him in the mood, he gets his ass monkey stomped coming and going. Finally, he figured out why all the Abrahamic tribal leaders were skull crushers. It should be fun.

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            1. Jackson gets fed a lifetime supply of hallucinogens by some chicks he thought were interested in him when they were interested in rolling him and leaving him to die, at which point he has a conversation with the female god who chews his ass for being a horny fool. Same ideas…

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              1. I think Jackson has Amir beat by a furlong. Jackson would be a lot of fun during story time by the campfire.

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    2. Yes indeed, Chris. We’ll see this come up at key points in the story where Amir is guided by his conscience and memory to make the right choices.

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  2. Complex layers of tension between the characters in this web of relationships. I felt the dread of the young man forced to participate in this horrific deed. A spellbinding narrative Dan. Well done.

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    1. Thank you Rene. This doesn’t start out lovely. It’s something I’ve thought about for a long time. This story follows that period in our lives where we examine our accepted norms and realize they aren’t acceptable anymore. What to do? Amir isn’t a powerful figure with super human abilities yet he yearns for what most young men seek. Let’s see if he has what it takes. That’s the story.

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      1. Amir is forced into an act that he finds repugnant. Will he be able to maintain his sense of right or succumb for his own safety.
        Not long ago I read stoning is still happening under Sharia law. It is the responsibility of the family to defend their honor,
        I’m looking forward to following your excellent story Dan..

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        1. Yes, the one I had to report on happened in the late 90’s and is very prevalent in Afghanistan more than any other country. This is VERY contrary to Islam which is very specific about Caring for one’s wife. However, the fanatical Islamists ignore Islam and twist Sharia to get revenge on women that spurn their advances. Stoning is an ancient form of justice for low class people as was crucifixtion under Roman law. High bred people were rarely murdered for justice or conflict. Another issue with Islam is it was written when Arabic slavery and harems of wives were normal among the high class. It’s just a man’s opinion on what class his wife belongs too. Her class dictates her treatment under Sharia. Fast forward to more moderate Islamic nations today and you never see these kinds of problems except in odd cases.

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          1. I would hope not. Women are still under the boot of Sharia law. Hopefully we won’t find ourselves there.

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            1. I won’t say never, but if it comes to Sharia being granted on the basis of religious freedom, we will definitely see America change drastically and not for the better. We are not ready for blinding, beheading, loss of limbs, and mass executions as a result of local and national court proceedings.

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  3. See comments in shared GDoc.

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    1. Holy Smokes Bro! That was some work you put in. I’m truly grateful for your time and help. The non-public version is looking very much more gooderer. (This line always triggers the English Majors)😁 Thanks my friend.

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  4. Well written, Daniel. Utterly chilling.

    Hugs.

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    1. Thank you Teagan. Not the opening many would choose. Life often is so dark we can lose sight of the light in our souls. There is always that person who others will follow to a better beginning. I hope the story will illustrate the magnificent compassion and sacrifice we all are capable of even if we choose to go the other way. 🤗🕊️

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  5. It’s a disgusting ancient and still practiced reality.

    It’s an awful beginning, but holds a lot of impetus for a good story.

    I know this is Sharia law, and we are far from that in western countries. Still, I see men’s need to dominate and marginalize women in existence today.

    I see the hate and fear many men have of women in America today.

    A strong start, Dan.

    I feel you are aching to say something important.

    Best to you!

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    1. Thank you for the honest comment Resa. The world’s long history of marginalizing and mistreating women is immoral and criminal in many places, yet it continues unabated even with the severest consequences to the perpetrators of such treatment. In this story, this injustice is a catalyst for change. Amir fears the power, authority, and reach of the criminals masquerading as important leaders in the city and the common people are not happy. We can look at the world today as societies crumble under the weight of iniquity and we can all hope for a solution. Often the only viable solution is in the hands of those willing to step up regardless of the danger and effect change. Will Amir be that person? I hope to show how it’s done.

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  6. Good writing Dan. Just read the first two chapters… Can I be honest? I’m not sure I’ll follow through. I see so much destruction in the world now (Though I guess it’s always been that way) I try to find solace in “easy” fiction. Right now, I’m in a Rex Stout binge. (Love Archie Goodwin…)

    Having said that, again, that is very good writing and I might come back. (If only to chat…)

    Ye be good naw ye hear, my friend.

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    1. Thank you Brian. I started this long before the world descended into utter madness recently. I have stopped posting it as I feel pretty much the same. It was a story about overcoming conflict but I no longer have the heart to go on. In fact, I haven’t posted for a while. I agree. Reading stories that are uplifting is a good way to stay positive. I’ve refrained from posting what is on my mind lately. I may need to check out Rex Stout. You’ve always made the best recommendations.

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      1. I can understand and relate…
        Do check Stout out. His Nero Wolfe mysteries are quite fun. The main -or second- character is Archie Goodwin, assistant to Nero Wolfe. I like Goodwin’s style. An easy buy at your local bookstore. (Preferable to giving more money to Jeff Bezos…) 😉

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        1. Yes, support our local independent. We are choked with Oligarchs right now. Don’t need to feed them.

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