Whispers of the Desert 9

Al-Anbiyā

Sūrah 21 Al-Anbiyā’

In the name of Allah, Most Gracious, Most Merciful

Closer and closer to humankind comes their reckoning, yet they heed not and turn away.

Never comes ought to them of a renewed message from their Lord, but they listen to it as in jest.

Amir rested behind the counter, reading his dogeared holy book. Like a thorn in his mind, he repeatedly returned to chapter 21 Al-Anbiyā (Prophets of Old) until he had memorized its 112 verses. He practiced his oratory to get the right inflections and tone to give the verse life in his voice, which often trembled with his emotional struggle under the weight of its profound prophecy. 

He heard silk on silk and looked up from his book into the face of the woman who had haunted his dreams. His mouth could not form words.

“I know it’s the day of rest, but do you have any day-old bread you can sell me?” Her accent was foreign, stretching the consonants of her words into a soft song.

“We have day-old bread. Would you like a full round or a partial round? It’s still fresh and will go well with goat’s milk or cheese.”

“I need to feed many children whose parents have fallen in this struggle between the Red Scorpions and White Falcons for control of the city.” Her plea for help was palpable as she handed her basket to the baker’s son. “I will take whatever you have that can fill my basket.”

“One moment, please.” Amir went into the darkened storage room and fought back his tears. This woman appears to me at this moment. It is a sign from Allah. I must help her. He filled the basket with the best loaves and partials he could find.

The woman looked worriedly into her tiny purse when Amir reappeared behind the counter with the full basket. “How much do I owe you, sir?” 

The tall man walked to the narrow gate at the end of the counter and stepped out into the alley with the loaded basket of bread. The woman backed up as he approached. “I don’t think I can carry it all. May I leave some of it with you and come back later?” 

“Miss, it would be rude to sell all this to you and expect you to carry it alone. I’ll carry it for you. Lead the way, please.”

“But I haven’t paid you,” she said.

“Ah, my hands are full now. I can get the money from you after I drop it off at your door.”

He followed the woman through the winding cobblestone alleys that snaked into the heart of the old city. Her colorful dress, made of ancient tiles composed of geometric shapes, flowed in an invisible breeze. Amir imagined the ripened grains of wheat writhing in the wind like waves on a restless sea. A mesmerizing scent drifted from her body and black hair like flowers and herbs. She had a natural sway in her hips, like King Nebakenezer’s court dancers.

Their footsteps sounded like distant drums reverberating from the dried clay walls surrounding them. The flinty smell of dirt, stone, and burning camel dung was familiar and reassuring.

Rounding a curve, Amir saw a surprisingly healthy pomegranate tree in the corner growing from a small patch of dirt with a stone wall around it. The woman stopped at a gate next to the tree and reached for the basket of bread. Amir held her gaze as he studied her face. He needed to remember exactly how she looked for his dreams. 

“Thank you, sir. I can take it from here.” Her soft voice said many things to Amir’s heart.

“My name is Amir. You are welcome to come any time when you need bread for the children – or yourself,” he added.

“I am Layla. This is my home and business, where I make folk medicine for the poor. If I can help your family, come to me.”

The baker’s smile was evident through his beard, but the kindness in his eyes and benevolence in his voice caused Layla to blush and avert her eyes. She attempted to speak, but Amir had turned to go.

After a moment, she remembered, “Wait, Amir. I didn’t pay you.”

Layla sighed, it was too late. He was gone.

89 responses to “Whispers of the Desert 9”

  1. An extremely well written chapter, Daniel.

    I love the approach you took to Amir and Layla when they meet for the first time.

    I love your paragraph about her colourful dress, the natural sway of her hips and the line, “Amir imagined the ripened grains of wheat writhing in the wind like waves on a restless sea.”

    I can also imagine Maxwell Smart giving a sports announcer style commentary on the beginnings of their courtship, “Ah yes, the old carry the loaves home because they’re too heavy to carry alone to get to know the woman better trick.”

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    1. I’m glad you enjoyed this pivotal scene. Ole Maxwell Smart was always on the scent, wasn’t he. I do think Jerusalem is a city filled with more love than hate because this 5,023 year old city is jam packed with 983 thousand people. Somebody, somewhere is making a lot of whoopee. Amir probably doesn’t want to be left off that list. Layla, being from Egypt, is far from home and no doubt could use some help in the herb garden.

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      1. I’ve never thought of Jerusalem as a city of whoopee before but you’re right with that size population it must have taken place.

        Amir is right not to want to be left off that list.

        And Layla probably could use some help in the herb garden.

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        1. I think when relationships are built on practical and shared responsibilities it works out fine, half the time. 🤔

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          1. Hi Daniel, I thought I’d let you know here that I just wrote a New Year’s email to both you and Sherry.

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            1. Thank you Chris. I’ll deep dive into the clutter of my email and dig you outta there 😆

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                1. I left you a comment of great wisdom on your blog and prayers are now ongoing.

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                    1. You are very welcome Chris.

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  2. His family has taught him what’s important in life and to help others. No doubt they will meet again.

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    1. They definitely will meet again, M.

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      1. I can see him as a family man.

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        1. He’d be a good dad. He is a dutiful son and has his eyes in the right direction. What could go wrong?

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            1. Yep, that’s right 🫣

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              1. Have a blessed Christmas in case you take a break for a couple of days. 🙂

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                1. Thank you M! I wish the same for you, David, and all your loved ones. I will be taking a break. I have several surgeries scheduled to fix old and broken parts in January and so I will be transformed from an old rusty farm implement into a shiny new antique. Or not. It depends on how well it all goes.

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                  1. I have surgery on the 30th but it’s an easy one. I hope it’s not to painful and your able to care for yourself. Sending you hugs!

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                    1. I don’t think it’s too painful but long recovery. I need four operations but can only do one at a time, heal, then go on to the next. Life should be easier after its all over.

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                    2. Is this from injuries that have built up or good ole wear and tear?

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  3. Don’t make me draw a red circle around AI’s crazy phallic bread🤣🤣🤣🙈

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    1. I wasn’t going to say a thing about Amir’s mistreatment of the bread 🥖. I’m starting to catch on to the AI’s naughty sense of humor. It’s the highlight of the show now. From now on, Every chapter will have a graphic Easter egg for readers to look for. 😳🫣😂

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      1. Yo Amir. Is that a loaf in your basket or are you just glad to see me. I had a character who was a commercial graphic artist. “You know all the things you can do with cucumbers? Peaches? Fruit and veg across the board? I slipped so much past the the art directors…

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        1. Waa haaa haaa! Now we have AI and emoji’s to save time and effort with our mischief making. Remember the old days? If you wanted some good mischief done, you had to do it all yourself. Now we have help. 😂

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  4. So many lovely depictions of Amir’s infatuation with the stranger, such breathtaking images ; ripened grains of wheat writhing in the wind like waves on a restless sea! Beautiful!

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    1. The waving wheat
      Can sure smell sweet
      When the wind comes
      Right behind the rain🤣

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      1. Bravo! Can I use this. 😂

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      2. Can I use this?😂

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        1. Oh, look I asked twice! That is special.

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          1. You have to use it now. 😁

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            1. I’ll need that in writing. 😁

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              1. LOL! 😆 📝

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                1. It’s hard to find good stuff to steal any more. Everyone’s all litigious 🥹

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                  1. Yep. I’m reminded of the enterprising young porn star that sells poots in a jar for $25. She’s a millionaire now and fully qualified to run for public office. Just think of the poor judge who has to defend her copyright infringement lawsuits. How many young entrepreneurs will find themselves in financial purgatory for copycatting on social media. Nancy Grace will have years of solid material to go after on her show. The ultimate disgrace is when we find out in trial that the Head Clown owns 137 jars of controlling stock in her company.

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                    1. No one deserves it more. It’s hard to get away with any copyright infringement on WP with all the elves working diligently to assure all goes smoothly. Oh wait , no that’s not it.

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                    2. LOL! Copyrights on the internet just doesn’t seem logical. But, no one deserves to lose ownership of their hard work and creative talent by sharing. I’m sure all the AIs reading the internet are reaching a point where they’ve seen every combination of every word and figured out what’s going on out there cyberspace.

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          2. I “borrowed” it from Rodgers and Hammerstein. But as I always tell people, the two best things to come out of Oklahoma are me an Interstate 40, so I figure that gives me some un-attributed interpolation rights for personal use so long as there is no deliberate or undisclosed intent of receiving any reward.

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            1. I agree, Phil. You and I40 are endlessly entertaining and since all combinations of all words in all languages have already been spoken, we might as well reuse the best ones. There is that attribution or pay royalties thing if we plan to profit but nobody is really doing that here. I’ve noticed all my best ideas were patented by my coworkers and they have convinced themselves my life’s work was their own idea and that is how I intended it. Now, if anyone steals my functional quantum layering design to cure cancer and excessive flatulence, somebody else can fight about it. I’m on to using cyclic dark energy to create eternal batteries so my damn iPad will stop shutting down on me in the middle of the night when I imagine my best work. 🤔💫💻

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              1. Man, over time the iPad has gone to shit. Every update seems to shorten battery life. I have an old first gen 64 bit (4 key passcode) and a much newer one, like ’22 and neither hold a charge worth a damn. I have an ancient Surface Pro 1 that has to be 12 years old, heavy as a brick, but it works and was and is still my go-to middle of the night touch screen. iPad for email and web and some WordPress. I have a keyboard/cover, stylus and BT mouse thinking Ah, this will work while I wait out volleyball practice. Nope. Plus they get hot as hell. There’s a much longer story about me and found laptops, but a small touch screen laptop kicks an iPad’s ass.

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                1. I feel you Phil. I was tricked by the serpent to bite the Apple and immediately found myself spending way too much money to continue on the path of computing doom. My back up is a 2011 Dell Windows 10 laptop with no battery. Works like a champ every time. I need to get a small touch screen laptop too and call it done. I was a Linux Ubuntu fan for a long time but eventually succumbed to the mainstream Apple scam. My retirement funds are a lot smaller because of that mistake. 💸😢

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                  1. I keep “acquiring” cast off laptops. And have found a way to get Windows 11 on the “unacceptable” devices. Computer and OS companies are allowed to practice their technology based racism/classism/ageism without consequence. As we are denied choice in “entertainment” so we are forced to “keep up”. I love standing in the self checkout line behind someone brandishing state and fed subsidy cards and a brand new iPhone while I pay cash and my iPhone is the equivalent of eyeglasses with the temple piece held on by a bandaid.

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                    1. You are a champion of us older generation, Phil. My grandfather and father never went to a store for anything except chewing tobacco and beer. They fixed everything themselves with whatever was lurking in the garage or a kitchen drawer. I could always tell when something was testing the limit of their invention. They uttered three curse words and spit tobacco juice on it. That was my cue to skeedaddle.

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      3. It does rain around the Persian Gulf during winter when the temps drop to a chilly 90 degrees. A day later the entire desert is covered in grass. Of course, that’s when you discover where all the sheep and camel dung was hiding.

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    2. Amir is a poet at heart. Poor Layla hasn’t done anything to encourage him but there he is totally infatuated. When they start meeting at the Café, you know it’s serious. 😉 💞

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      1. I do hope the infatuation is not in vain. All lovers and prospective lovers are welcome at the café 🤗

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        1. After a few fateful interruptions, They know they found their soulmate. I’m even growing to like Layla.

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          1. It’s the real thing for Amir. I need more information on Layla. Just how much bread does she eat?

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            1. Layla is that kind woman who keeps to herself but feeds all the poor kids in the neighborhood. Now that she found a good source of cheap day old bread, she’ll be able to feed a lot more kids. It’s also a main ingredient in homemade explosives. 🧨 🍞.

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  5. Excellent Dan!

    Layla is a terrific character. Amir is in love, I think. She … and he may not know it. It seems there is a journey beginning here!

    I look forward to the next chapter!

    HAPPY NEW YEAR

    🕊🤍

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  6. I’m gonna have to catch up. Looks promising.

    My very best wishes to you and yours, Dan.

    As I go round all the wonderful E-Friends, I am beginning to hope that 2025 might surprise us. If the outlook is so grim, maybe it will be better than we (I) imagine?

    Ye be good naw, ye hear? (😉)

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    1. Glad tidings my friend. I hope the New Year has started well for you. I do believe this world offers us much to be concerned about and I do hope with all my heart that we will not succumb to a dreadful fear of what has not come to us, but be ever vigilant of that which has come to us. The great enemy of fear of the unknown is more devastating than the fear of what is known. In the mean time, I’m polishing my armor and tuning up the old broad sword just in case the zombie apocalypse gets out of control. ⚔️ 🙅🏻‍♂️

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      1. Likewise Dan. I hadn’t thought about the sword. Made me remember my 19th century education: Homeschooling, fencing and riding. I really liked all three. Particularly foil and saber…
        Take care…

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        1. You had the best education. I’m a tad jealous. I’m a big advocate for homeschooling provided it’s done well. And to learn fencing and riding was a true aristocratic art. I elected to study the staff as it seemed more useable in my lowly peasant stage of life. Silly me, I truly didn’t understand the art of the blade at the time and I missed out on a great education. Of course, I more than likely would have lost some important body parts due to a lack of discipline and coordination. So, I count my blessings. And many blessing to you, Brian.

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          1. Thank you Dan. Staff makes me think of Robin Hood. Very commendable… Fencing was really great. I continued up to the army if you can believe that. There was a fencing hall at our our regiment. I found every possible excuse with my adjudant to switch duties for fencing. (He was a cool guy.) Blessings counted indeed…
            And many blessings to you, Dan my dear friend…
            Be good.

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            1. I could listen to your adventures all day long. What a fascinating life you have had and still going strong. I look forward to reading more.

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              1. You’re only too kind. Take care.

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                1. And you as well, Brian.

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    Dearest Daniel;

    I have not been here for the longest time. Just post up my YT Vlog and life has been good to me lately. Took almost a year off from everything and last year I was busy renovationg, travel a lot and took time wisely, spending every minute to concentrate on healthwise and my well-being.

    It was the best year for me and I do hope that this year will prosper as well.

    I will come here in time to read your stories and be immerse in it. I really miss your story and I miss Chris’s stories as well. There is time for everything, isn’t it?

    Hope you are doing well, my friend!

    Hugs.

    Sherrie

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    1. HI Sherry, so great to hear from you. I’ve been busy trying to keep my old carcass alive and dancing. I remain rigidly flexible as always taking the good with the bad and seeing what fun can be had under the circumstances. So glad you were able to have some rest and respite. I’m hoping it renewed your spirit and infinite talents. I’m not very active on the web but do hop by from time to time. You are always welcome when ever you have time.

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  8. I love the kindness.

    Love that wants to be, but does not ask for a return.

    Thanks Dan!

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    1. Thank you Resa. This was supposed to be a key moment in the story where the two characters form an unspoken bond that eventually saves them both. I’ve not posted on the story recently.

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      1. Well, I like what you’ve done so far! It’s working.

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        1. Thank you so much Resa! I wondered if the timing wasn’t right to tell a story about good human virtues winning over evil. I’ve heard it isn’t a good idea to sing happy songs in the dungeon. The guards get aggravated. 🫢🎶😡

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          1. Lol! We must move forward, persevere.
            If not, then what? Lay down and die?

            Dan, the timing is always right to tell a story about good human virtues winning over evil.
            I will say, however –
            Right now, America needs some POWERFUL stories about good human virtues winning over evil.
            ❦❦🌸🍒❦❦

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            1. I totally agree. I’m in a constant state of shock how we have fallen into chaos and evil. It will take some real work to back out of this hole. I appreciate the support, inspiration, and wide words of hope. We must move forward. The alternatives will serve no one well.

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              1. Agree!!!!

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          2. American stories that Americans can relate to, and take heart from.

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            1. A great place to start. We need unity, redemption, and hope.

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              1. I’m hoping for. the best. He’s killing us all who are not powerful or ultra rich.

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                1. I’m hoping the world learns something and steps back from the precipice or we are all going to have to learn a new way of living. All across the world, the slums of human misery have gotten larger while the grand mansions, like castles, have grown in ever increasing numbers.

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                  1. It’s true!
                    And you are right, we are on the precipice.

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                    1. I’m desperately trying to anchor myself outside the ring of insanity. I can tell I’m slipping. I’m starting to laugh at things that aren’t funny.

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                    2. Lol!
                      I get that.
                      It’s a form of self preservation. Be well.
                      Since I left the comment, things have gotten much worse. SIGH!

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                    3. We may be well past the edge of the precipice. 😳

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                    4. Maybe!

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  9. This story beautifully highlights the power of faith and compassion, showing how small acts of kindness can bring hope and healing amid hardship. Amir and Layla’s encounter is a touching reminder of humanity’s shared strength in times of struggle.

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    1. Thank you Mr. Ravindre. You have perfectly stated the theme of this story. The Characters face difficult and uncertain times and it is only through love, compassion, faith, and shared strength that they find the means not just to survive but to thrive. Much like today, we must learn these lessons again.

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  10. Hi Dan. I hope you can stay away from the current wind of madness.

    Be good my friend.

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    1. Thank you my Friend. I’m appalled daily. But holding up the standard. I may need to dig a foxhole to avoid any fragments of evil flying around.

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      1. Apalled is the correct word. So am I. (And I suspect most or all of our common friends…) I sometimes wonder whether the best option wouldn’t be to wait till he croaks… But Evil can last forever…

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        1. I’m hoping this is a one off anomaly, but as you say, evil can last forever. It’s what comes after the empire crumbles that I consider. It can be an era of positive reform, or the last nail in the coffin. We won’t know until we get there. I’m sure we’ll have a few hints along the way.

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          1. You’re absolutely right. About the possible alternative. I feel 🎃’s minions are evil, but not strong enough to hold on after the Moron-in-chief goes away. The bearded vizier just sucks up to the Chief. Hopefully, none can survive. 🤞🏻

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            1. In the Wizard of Oz, the evil wicked witch of the west had a house drop on her. With the weather the way it has been lately, who knows, we might get lucky. Heh, heh, heh. 😁

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              1. Can you believe I don’t remember the details of the Wizard of Oz? I think I might have seen it when I was very little… A blank… Having said that we might get lucky… 🤞🏻

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                1. LOL! I only remember it because it is burned into my psyche. I watched it as a child under the couch because it scared the mischief right out of me.

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                  1. Wow… Another of your grandpa’s schemes to put you in the right path after your close encounter with the mule? (Greetings from Paris.)

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  11. Indeed, I think they had a plan all along. Grandma had me read Dante’s Divine Comedy and Milton’s Paradise Lost and right when I was finally adjusting to my fate, Along came The Wizard of Oz. I think it was a clever exorcism. Ah, Say hello to Paris for me. Enjoy your stay, Brian.

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