The Island 3

And someday there will be nothing left of everything that has twisted my life and grieved it and filled me so often with such anguish. -Herman Hesse

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The morning was hot and still. The air hung heavy over the island, and the sea beyond the trees looked flat and white under the sun. David and Renate worked in silence, cutting down small trees with the axe and clearing brush with the machete. The sound of the blades was sharp and steady, echoing through the grove.

Renate wiped sweat from her face. “It’s going to be a long day,” she said.

David nodded. “We’ll get the clearing done.”

The trees fell with a lot of effort. The wood was dense and hard. They dragged the trunks to the edge of the clearing and stacked them for later. They paused for a moment to wipe the sweat from their eyes, inhaling the scent of aromatic wood resin and crushed leaves. The sun climbed higher, burning through the canopy.

Renate stopped and looked toward the hills. “We should rest,” she said.

David leaned on the axe handle. “Stream’s not far.”

They walked through the trees until they heard the water. It ran clear and cold over smooth stones, winding through the shade. Renate knelt and dipped her hands in. “It’s perfect,” she said.

David crouched beside her. “Let’s get in.”

David took off his shirt and shoes. Renate removed her sweat-soaked boots and socks, and they stepped into the stream. The water was cold enough to make them gasp. They sat in the shallows, the current moving around their legs. Little minnows investigated their feet, and Renate let out a squeal, making David laugh. The heat left their bodies slowly, replaced by a clean, quiet calm.

Renate leaned back on her hands. “We could live here,” she said.

David looked at her. “You mean it?”

She nodded. “We have water. Wood. The sea for fish. If we catch a few goats we’ll have milk and cheese. A garden. We could make it work.”

He watched the sunlight flicker on the water. “It wouldn’t be easy.”

“Nothing worth doing ever is.”

He smiled faintly. “You sound like my father.”

She laughed. “Maybe your father was right.”

They sat in silence for a while. The forest hummed around them—birds calling, insects buzzing, the steady whisper of the stream. Renate reached for his hand under the water.

“I don’t want to go back,” she said.

David looked at her hand in his. “Then we won’t.”

She turned her head toward him. “You mean that?”

He nodded. “We’ll stay until we can’t.”

The sun shifted, and the light through the trees turned gold. They climbed out of the stream and dried in the warm air. The world felt new again, fresh and simple.

By evening, they were back aboard the sailboat. The harbor was quiet, the cliffs dark against the fading sky. David cooked rice and tinned fish on the small stove. Renate sliced fruit and poured water into tin cups.

They ate in silence, listening to the soft slap of waves against the hull. The air smelled of salt, oiled wood of the cabin, damp cloth, and the remains of dinner.

Renate said, “Tomorrow we start the frame.”

David nodded. “We’ll need rope for the beams.”

“I’ll weave some from the palm trunks.”

He smiled. “You think of everything.”

She shrugged. “I’ve had practice.”

They finished eating and cleaned the dishes in the small sink. The cabin was warm and dim, lit by the lantern hanging from the beam. Outside, the stars were sharp and bright.

Renate lay down on the bunk. “Come here,” she said.

David stretched out beside her. The boat rocked gently under them. He could hear the sea moving against the hull and the faint rustle of the forest beyond the cliffs.

Renate turned toward him. “Do you think we’ll really stay?”

He looked at her face in the lantern light. “I think we already have.”

She smiled and closed her eyes. “Good.”

He put his arm around her, feeling the slow rhythm of her breathing. The night was quiet except for the sea and the wind in the rigging. The world outside was wide and empty, but inside the cabin it felt full of warmth, of peace, of something that might last.

They slept like that, together, while the boat rocked gently in the hidden harbor.

32 responses to “The Island 3”

  1. It is always nice to find a place where one feels at home.

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    1. I think feeling at home is essential for our feelings of well being.

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        1. I hope to build a nice, quiet island paradise where we all feel at home instead of running into anti-aesthetic beings around every corner.

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          1. A most delightful paradise indeed by the sounds of it, Daniel.

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            1. Whenever the Uglos get you down, pop on over to the island for some surf and sun. It’s an Island so there has to be good spiced rum and healthy food.

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              1. Spiced rum and healthy food.
                Harry Belafonte and Secretary of Health Robert F. Kennedy Jr. would approve.

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                1. I’ve read where the British Empire conquered the known world on rum and viking wanderlust. It wasn’t until they cut back on their rum fueled debauchery and tried democracy and good social manners that they began to lose their conquered lands. Along came America thoroughly besotted with high quality Canadian whisky and an overwhelming desire to impregnate women of all cultures and lands to fill the gaps. No pun intended. Both empires have fallen to the depths of impotence desperately trying to find a cure for their erectile dysfunction. America has rediscovered the insatiable lust of bombing, shooting, and clandestine blundering to try to recapture the glory of the past. Unfortunately, there are no more manly men and alluring women to sustain the debauchery needed to conquer and pillage. I fear this is why Pan Goatee and Sherrielock Holmes are facing an endless parade of unaesthetic and naughty people.

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                  1. That is probably the best and most accurate summing up of the Fall of the British and American Empires that I have ever read.

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                    1. Sometimes, not often, but sometimes I get it right.

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                    2. It’s certainly a lot more succinct and shorter than Edward Gibbons’ six volume The History of The Decline and Fall of The Roman Empire.
                      You’d have to have the worst case of constipation in all recorded history to read all that in one bathroom sitting.

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                    3. I think the seat would ionically bond with my behind and become a permanent fixture.

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                    4. ROTFLMAO 🤣
                      Something you’ll have to try if that happens.

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                    5. Waaa haaa haaa! 😳🚽

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  2. I love this beautiful , serene glimpse into paradise , away from the anxiety of life’s realities. The illustration you’ve provided is perfection for this story of love and the search for happiness. I look forward to following the adventures of R and D, written so wonderfully, Dan. I think most of us imagine a peaceful escape, thank you for providing such a beautiful journey.

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    1. I am enjoying doing this although I didn’t mean or intend to steal Renate or the story from you. Feel free to jump right in at anytime. The number one thing is to build that escape by creating a nice world with some adventure and mystery to keep our dynamic duo busy otherwise, when they climb into the hammock with their pear wine, that’s the end of the story because it can’t get better than that.

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      1. Renate and David have been through endless adventures, hot air balloons, 🎈 sailed the seas on a schooner, flew around the world in a piper cub , it’s a fine experience to find them settling down on a faraway island paradise and putting down roots, finding contentment . I suspect not far is a brilliant waterfall and a forest of exotic birds that they will name and learn to communicate with. This is not your ordinary island. 🏝️

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        1. We do share a common vision of our free spirited couple. I’ve focused on them building their life together on the island and getting established, adding just a little mystery as a hint the island has a long and glorious history. They haven’t had time to explore much because of their hard work. But eventually they will need a break to go explore. This time, instead of silly misadventure for David due to his incurable curiosity, They rediscover what has always kept them moving and that is the magnificence of nature and now they are finally connected to it, not as casual observers but an integral part of the cycle of life. I’m not planning too much, more following my inner voice allowing David and Renate to narrate their experience. The story will write itself.

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    1. It is, isn’t it, M. On the island, there is no sickness, toil, or trouble. Only good vibes and the occasional pirate parrot with potty mouth.

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      1. I’m glad to see you writing, it must feel awesome.

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        1. I had a long break. And decided to do this little idyllic feel good story for all those who think the world is going straight to Hell, maybe this is a little relief.

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          1. It’s a relief for sure!

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            1. Yes. Not feeling any pressure to pump something out. I have a ton of stories that I need to finish up. I just lack the energy sometimes.

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  3. Nice fantasy. What will change? A mind will change first. Not the landscape.

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    1. Excellent insight, George. In this story we are hoping to change from rat race mentality, which requires enormous amounts of cortisol, to mahalo. Good vibes, Bro. Notice, we are three posts in and not one has a smart phone or social media mentioned. In future posts, we suspend reality and have all needs met just by poking around on the island.

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      1. Being in the moment without distraction. Sounds like the way things were.

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        1. I spent a couple of weeks in Hawaii for a work project a few years ago and before I returned back to the rat race, I was hanging loose and hanging out and wearing baggy shorts and flip flops. Island life can sap all the stress out of your life if you aren’t careful.

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  4. I feel really sorry for trees when they expend a great deal of effort to fall. I read around on the internet and everyone opens with the weather and I gotta read an elaborate authorial postcard before I find any people…must be a trend.

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    1. Yes, a statistical analysis was done by Claude and Grok that found weather and postcard openings are the most preferred openings hitting the 98 percentile by neophyte writers or cobblers. The other 2 percentile could be grouped into action settings. I’ve read where this can really bug readers. An interesting thing happens on the Island. After the characters have been there a while, they don’t notice the weather or scenery. They are pretty much deaf to the jungle sounds, and they become more and more clothing optional. So naturally, the scenes will open from new perspectives finally providing Claude and Grok with some newer categories to consider. Regarding the tress. Sometimes it’s best not to portray reality because no one believes reality anymore. I think the final will just have the trees appear in a neat pile so the characters can talk about building a hut and the next scene it’s finished. Less boring, probably, and we can get to the good stuff quicker.

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  5. Don’t we all wish a Treasure island?

    In Stevenson’s Island, the treasure wasn’t important, the Island was the Treasure.

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    1. I really enjoyed reading that book a long time ago. I also read Robinson Crusoe as required reading and liked it too. The islands are out there waiting and will probably be the last hold-outs for a crowded earth.

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