The Island 16

Codex from the Order of the Rose

“When wings gather without song, the sky is speaking. Birds are its first breath, its quiet messenger. Where many eyes watch in stillness,
the Rose awakens its chosen.”

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They worked at the kiln in the late morning light. The fire had cooled enough for them to sit close, and the bowls and jars they had shaped the day before were lined up on a flat stone. Renate mixed the powdered pebbles with ash in small clay dishes, each color deepening as she stirred.

David dipped a brush into the blue mixture and drew a line along the rim of a jar. The glaze went on smooth and dark. Renate watched the line form.

“That looks good,” she said.

“Feels good,” David said. “Like it knows where it wants to go.”

Renate nodded. She dipped her own brush into the red mixture and began painting the side of a bowl. The brush moved easily, almost too easily, as if her hand remembered something her mind did not.

David paused. “What pattern is that?”

“I don’t know,” she said. “It just came to me.”

He leaned closer. The lines she had painted curved in spirals, then straightened into narrow vertical strokes. They looked familiar. Too familiar.

“Renate,” he said quietly, “that’s the pattern from the cave entrance.”

She stopped painting. “Is it?”

“And here,” he said, pointing to the bowl’s rim. “That’s from the stele.”

Renate stared at the bowl. “I didn’t mean to.”

“I know.”

She set the brush down. Her hands trembled slightly.

David watched her. “Are you all right?”

She didn’t answer. She pressed her hand to her shoulder, to the place where the rose‑vine lay beneath her skin.

“Renate,” he said, “what is it?”

She closed her eyes. “It’s waking.”

David felt the air shift. Something that moved through the space between them like a breath.

Renate pulled her hand away from her shoulder. The skin beneath her shirt glowed faintly, a soft, pulsing light, warm and alive.

David stared. “Renate, it’s glowing.”

She opened her eyes. “I feel my arm warming.”

The glow brightened, tracing the shape of the vine beneath her skin, the curling stem, the small leaves, the single rosebud near her shoulder. It pulsed once, twice, like a heartbeat.

Renate’s breath caught. “It hasn’t done this since we flew the ultralight to San Juan Capistrano with the swallows.”

David stepped closer. “Does it hurt?”

“No,” she whispered. “It feels like it’s listening.”

The forest around them grew quiet. Too quiet. Then, from the trees, came the soft flutter of wings.

A single bird landed on a branch above them. Then another. And another.

Within moments, the trees around the kiln were filled with small birds, bright birds, dark birds, all watching in stillness. Not singing or moving, only watching.

David looked up. “Renate.”

“I see them,” she said.

The rose‑vine glowed brighter, then steadied into a soft, constant light.

Renate looked at the bowl she had painted. “The patterns, they weren’t mine.”

David nodded. “The cave.”

She looked toward the forest. “It’s calling again.”

David felt it too, a gentle pull. A reassurance. A presence.

“Renate,” he said, “I think the island knows who you are.”

She swallowed. “I think you’re right.”

The birds remained silent in the branches, waiting.

Renate touched her shoulder again. The glow warmed her fingers.

“David,” she whispered, “I’m afraid.”

He took her hand. “I’m with you.”

The rose‑vine pulsed once more beneath her skin, and the birds shifted as one, as if acknowledging something neither of them could yet name.

The island seemed alive with jungle sounds around them.

And the cave waited.

22 responses to “The Island 16”

  1. Birds are very intuitive.
    They know when something is up.

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    1. They do, and they will go full Karen on you if you don’t pay attention to their messages of dire warning. I haven’t put out any bird seed lately and suddenly the birds have started pooping en masse on my vehicle.

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      1. They know who to blame.

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        1. They have a top view of all the shenanigans going on at ground level.

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          1. And act accordingly.

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            1. Yes, If you upset the bird population be prepared to buy a lot of Poo cleaner and shop towels. They make their displeasure known.

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  2. Beautiful images,Dan. Renate is truly a part of the island. It has chosen her though she is afraid of what that means. David seems fascinated by this process, forever protecting, he seems drawn into the process. Wonderful writing my friend. I’m enchanted.

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    1. There are so many undercurrents to this story swirling in my mind. Conveying all that in words is impossible. You have put it all in clear and concise comments. Renate is the epicenter and catalyst of change. At this point her experiences on the island are symbolic of what is necessary for her to fully accept life on the island and giving up her past. David sees nothing but the strengthening of their relationship. He is no longer the exuberant explorer of mystery, he is the anchor, the grounding point for their new life together. The island is happy and so they will be happy as well.

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      1. keep writing this beautiful romantic captivating mysterious story! Love it.

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        1. Thank you, Rene. I’ve really enjoyed writing this. It’s out to 31 chapters now so we are only halfway with posting. After that, I have either book 2 or we can go with a full length novel. I plan to post it in the Library as a download after it finishes so anyone interested can have the complete story in a downloadable book format.

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  3. Intriguing, Dan.

    I don’t know what’s happening, but as mysterious as it all sounds, I’m not getting a bad feeling.

    Of course I’m not on the island. Still Renate’s inner tattoo, and subconscious memory surfacing are piquing.

    Thanks for writing! I look forward to more!

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    1. Thank you, Resa. I think the island may be a scary-good story. I saw a video about glow in the dark tattoos and I was ruined after that. Next thing I know, Renate has a Glow-Too on her arm also. Naturally, they have to go back to the cave and caves are always full of surprises. 😳🦇

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      1. YES! ❦🕊

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  4. And the cave waited. Well-done cliffhanger

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    1. I’ve done very little caving but what I have done was create a long list of why I should be in there.

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      1. It’s a very good idea, creatively speaking. Not just A list, the list of why you would want to be there. Excellent.

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        1. Our area is one massive network of underground caves and rivers. The tiniest hole in the ground can lead to an underground Taj Mahal cavern. We have had a few newly built homes suddenly disappear when a cave roof collapses. Insurance it seems, doesn’t cover that.

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          1. The Tale of the Caved In House…
            Insurance don’t cover? Amazing. When has anyone ever heard something like that?

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            1. Indeed, Insurance only covers things not likely to happen and when it happens anyway, they have a reason not to pay.

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              1. They don’t cover mule farts, right?

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                1. I think mule farts fall into the uncovered natural events section.

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