THE ISLAND 17

Codex from the Order of the Rose

β€œSome worlds do not awaken β€” they are already awake. Their stones are fragments of a greater mind, their winds the breath of a memory older than stars. To be recognized by such a place is no small fate: it means the cosmos has turned its attention toward you.”

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The birds stayed in the branches long after the glow beneath Renate’s skin faded. They didn’t sing. They didn’t move. They only watched.

Renate stood very still. David could see her breathing change, become slower, and deeper, as if she were listening to something far away.

β€œDavid,” she said quietly, β€œthe island knows a lot of secrets.”

He didn’t ask what she meant. He felt it too, a pressure in the air, soft but present, like the moment before a storm breaks, except there was no storm. Only sunlight and the rustle of leaves.

Renate looked down at the bowl she had painted. β€œThese patterns, they weren’t memories. They were instructions.”

David frowned. β€œFrom the cave?”

β€œFrom the island,” she said. β€œThe cave is just where it speaks.”

She touched her shoulder again. The rose‑vine didn’t glow now, but he could see the faint shimmer beneath her skin, like embers cooling.

David stepped closer. β€œWhat did you feel a moment ago?”

Renate hesitated. β€œRecognition. Like something old was opening its eyes.”

He nodded slowly. β€œThe Order?”

β€œOlder than the Order,” she said. β€œThe monks didn’t create the rose‑vine. They only tended it. They said it was a gift from a place that remembered more than people ever could.”

David looked toward the forest. β€œThis place.”

Renate nodded. β€œYes, and probably more. Like the wall glyphs we saw in Terra del Fuego, or the abandoned city in the Ecuador forest where you found the underground treasury.”

David’s eyes opened wider as he remembered those past experiences. β€œThose strange lizards that guarded the tunnels.”

Renate nodded slowly, remembering. β€œYes, they almost got you.”

The birds shifted all at once, a soft ripple of feathers. Renate turned toward them.

β€œThey’re waiting,” she said.

β€œFor what?” David asked.

β€œFor us to go to the cave.”

He didn’t like the sound of that, but he didn’t say so. Instead he picked up one of the glazed jars. The blue line he painted earlier had darkened, deepened, and was almost dry.

β€œRenate, look at this.”

She stepped closer. The glaze had dripped and formed a pattern he hadn’t painted, a branching line, curling like a vine.

Renate touched it lightly. β€œIt’s the same shape.”

β€œThe rose‑vine?” he asked.

β€œIt does look like it,” she said. β€œThe island’s memory is becoming our reality the longer we stay.”

David looked at her. β€œHow can a place have memory?”

Renate didn’t answer right away. She looked toward the trees, toward the hidden path that led to the carved cave mouth.

β€œWhen the monks brought me into the Cathedral, they told me the rose‑vine wasn’t a mark of power or identity. It was a mark of connection. A way of feeling what most people cannot.”

David waited.

β€œThey said the world has places where earth’s memory gathers,” she continued. β€œPlaces where time folds. Places that remember everything that’s ever touched or happened to them. People have learned how to read the history of a place through the geologic record but we never think of it as the land’s memory of its existence.”

David felt a chill. β€œAnd this island is one of those places.”

Renate nodded. β€œMaybe the strongest one.”

The birds rustled again. A few hopped to lower branches, closer to them.

David swallowed. β€œRenate, what does the island want?”

She closed her eyes. β€œI feel it wants connection with us.”

β€œWhy?” he asked.

She opened her eyes. β€œBecause we seem to be the first people to stay here in a long time and act like good stewards to the islands plants, wildlife, and resources.”

David stared at her. β€œIs this connection to the island possible?”

Renate shook her head. β€œI don’t know. The island doesn’t measure time or connection the way we do.” Holding the glazed bowl as if trying to read it, Renate continued. β€œWe have always respected the land we visited and it has always revealed its secrets to us, given us its bounty for us to use. The island is the same and even more so. Because we made this our home, it has rewarded us with all we need to live here.”

He didn’t know what to say to that. He only knew the truth of her voice, the certainty in it.

Renate looked at her shoulder again. β€œThe rose‑vine woke because the island recognized me.”

β€œWhere would I fit in?” David asked.

She looked at him, her expression softening. β€œIt recognized you first because you gather the resources and we build almost everything by hand. It’s like we are already connected to the island and depend on it.”

The birds fell silent again. The air grew still.

David felt the pull, gentle, steady, unmistakable.

β€œThe cave,” he said.

Renate nodded. β€œIt’s calling stronger now.”

David took her hand. β€œAre you ready?”

β€œNo, but I think we have to go anyway.”

He squeezed her hand. β€œThen we go together.”

The birds lifted from the branches all at once, rising in a single sweeping motion, circling above them like a sign.

Renate watched them. β€œThe island wants to connect with us on a deeper level.”

David looked toward the forest. β€œThen we should see what this mysterious cave wants to show us.”

36 responses to “THE ISLAND 17”

  1. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

    And now it looks like we’re heading towards the climax of the story.

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Quite possibly the first of several climaxes. First, we have to get the ancient Alien plasmoid people who trained the Annunaki and control the oceans satisfied, then we can move on to pirates, pygmies, and cannibals. You know, typical deserted island activities. I want to try to keep it organic. No corporate take overs, or doomsday weapon testing.

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      1. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

        Doomsday weapons testing was a very late 20th Century American and French thing on deserted islands.
        Now corporate takeovers are a very 21st Century thing on deserted islands.

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        1. Hyperion Avatar

          I’m actually surprised at how intrusive those two centuries of human folly have affected the islands of the world. IT would be quite the discovery to find an inhabitable island that wasn’t somehow affected by radioactivity or farming. Most of the islands that can grow coconut palms are now farmed by growing coconut palms in machine manageable rows. The entire useable area is a coconut grove with the sole purpose of enriching the oligarchs and satisfying the world’s hunger for coconut oil, milk, meat, and water. Of course there are almost no islands left, no matter how remote whose beaches are not choked with garbage dumped in the oceans.

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          1. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

            Yes, I guess David and Renate in your story have found such an island 🏝️.
            It is a catastrophic tragedy what has happened to the world’s islands and oceans 🌊.

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            1. Hyperion Avatar

              I agree. I think in my many discussions of that lost paradise we all wish we could live in, this story is a metaphor for finding peace, and contentment. And, I take it a bit into the metaphysical world where we see the island awakens, recognizes Renate and David as its caretaker, and offers them the bounty of nature as their reward. A tiny wink to Genesis and Milton’s Paradise Found, we have Renate and David escaping the temporal world to that place we all hoped to go when the struggle is over.

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              1. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

                Very well put, Daniel.
                Your story is an excellent analogy of our search for this paradise.

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                1. Hyperion Avatar

                  I also borrow heavily from Isaiah’s fantastical views of God in his chariot of fire and the mystical multi-headed and multi-winged creatures that accompany him. They all parked thier stuff in the cave.

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                  1. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

                    The Book of Isaiah is full of fantastic imagery.

                    Glad you found it inspirational.

                    Glad to hear they parked their stuff in the cave.

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                    1. Hyperion Avatar

                      In the corner of the last chamber they visit is a Sumerian cuneiform tablet that reads, Gilgamesh was here.

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                    2. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

                      Well, that clinches it, doesn’t it? πŸ˜‚

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                    3. Hyperion Avatar

                      No doubt who was the first settler on the island. πŸ˜‰

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                    4. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

                      Gilgamesh’s Island.
                      It might make for a great TV series.

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                    5. Hyperion Avatar

                      LMAO! I have no doubts it will be quite popular with the Boomers and maybe a new experience for Gen’s X, Y, and Z

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                    6. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

                      It will πŸ˜€

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  2. Shruti pandey Avatar

    I love this turn of events. So intriguing!

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Thank you Shruti. I am posting these scenes in small bites but began to worry that drags it out too long. We should pick up the pace a little very soon.

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      1. Shruti pandey Avatar

        Sounds promising. This could very well be a comic, illustrations and all. Very well done.

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        1. Hyperion Avatar

          Thank you Shruti. I hadn’t thought of an illustrated comic. Brilliant idea. When I convert this to a digital book in my online library for download, I’m going to try to do that and see how it goes.

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  3. Resa Avatar

    Okay! I’m in. To the cave we go.

    Not sure why, but my eyes just turned cave around. evac

    Fab writing Dan, thank you!

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Uh Oh! The cave is modulating your mind back in reverse. Thank you Resa. When I read the cave scenes I actually get excited about it and I wrote it. I must be emotionally along for the ride. Although the cave holds a lot of bizarre secrets according to Renate, not one bat ever shows up. At least there is that.

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  4. equinoxio21 Avatar

    All right. let’s go to the darn cave! Now! πŸ˜‰

    (So I’ve caught up it seems?)

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      You made it Brian! Some are still catching up and I love the comments. Everyone has figured out this darn cave is begging for attention.

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  5. House of Heart Avatar

    The inevitable is happening! What awaits for them , calls to them? It’s very intense and intriguing Dan. I have my own thoughts on this, I’m waiting to find out what lies beyond the cave.

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      You might recognize how we talked about the island as a mental as well as a physical refuge. A place to heal and reset to a peaceful existence. Niburu was also a parallel refuge. So, with that in mind, the Island is making itself known. The other side of the cave is where the real action starts (in a good way of course)

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      1. House of Heart Avatar

        I like the mystery Dan. Much anticipation. πŸ•ŠοΈ

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        1. Hyperion Avatar

          After chapter 18 on Friday, We go caving into the mystery of the island’s inner world.

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          1. House of Heart Avatar

            I’m very excited about that and can’t wait to read it. 😊

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            1. Hyperion Avatar

              This is going to be a typical R & D adventure once they get in the cave. Only this time, David completely behaves himself and doesn’t act recklessly. The Cave adventure is the end of Part 1. Part 2 will start a new Island adventure. I have an outline that could take us through their entire time on the island. It’s like the Sad CafΓ©, there is always another day and another magical moment. I’m interested to see where the island takes us and R & D.

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                Anonymous

                I like that plan, I’m very interested excited too !

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                1. Hyperion Avatar

                  This evening, we find out if Renate and David go to the Cave, or skip it for the waterfall.

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              2. House of Heart Avatar

                Can’t wait to read the upcoming episodes!

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                1. Hyperion Avatar

                  I feel like a cheater. I’ve read all the chapters and I want to go find a monastery from the Order of the Rose.

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                  1. House of Heart Avatar

                    Don’t wander too far. If you find a monastery let us know.

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                    1. Hyperion Avatar

                      I think that would be fun to spend a few days at a monastery bed and breakfast. OH, btw, Island 18 dropped for your reading pleasure.

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                    2. House of Heart Avatar

                      Not so Durant the monastery πŸ˜‰. Running over to Hyperion!

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