The Island 18

Codex from the Order of the Rose

“Destiny does not arrive; it remembers.
Those who feel its pull are not being chosen,
they are being reminded.

MS Copilot AI generated image by the author

They continued to work at the kiln in silence. The birds had scattered into the sky, leaving the clearing strangely open, as if something had been lifted. Renate held her arm close to her body out of awareness, the way one protects a wound.

David watched her. “Does it still feel warm?”

“Yes,” she said. “But not like before. It’s listening.”

“To what?”

She looked at the trees. “Everything.”

The bowls and jars sat on the makeshift table ready for firing in the kiln, the glazes drying in the sun. Renate knelt beside the bowl she had painted earlier. The pattern she had traced unconsciously, the spirals, and the vertical lines seemed clearer now, as if the glaze had settled into its final shape.

David crouched beside her. “Does it mean something?”

“Yes,” she said. “But I don’t know what yet.”

She touched the bowl lightly. The moment her fingers brushed the glaze, the rose‑vine beneath her skin pulsed once, a soft, warm thrum.

David saw it. “Renate.”

“I feel it,” she whispered.

The glow spread slowly along the vine, tracing the stem, the leaves, the small rosebud near her shoulder. This time she didn’t pull away. She breathed into the moment, steady and calm.

“Renate,” David said, “what’s happening?”

She closed her eyes. “I’m not fighting it.”

The glow brightened, then steadied. The air around them shifted. The island was filled with an unusual silence.

Renate opened her eyes. “David… I can feel the cave.”

He swallowed. “What do you mean?”

“It’s not calling from far away anymore,” she said. “It’s calling from inside me.”

David felt a chill. “Are you okay?”

She shook her head. “Okay isn’t the right word. I’m scared.”

The rose‑vine pulsed again. This time the pulse moved outward, a faint ripple in the air, like heat rising from stone. The leaves in the trees trembled though there was no breeze.

David stepped closer. “Renate, can you stop it?”

She looked at him. “I don’t think I want to.”

He didn’t argue. He trusted her more than he trusted his fear.

Renate lifted her hand slowly, palm open. The glow followed the movement, rising along her arm like a soft current. She wasn’t forcing it. She wasn’t guiding it. She was simply allowing it.

The forest responded.

A single bird landed on a branch above them. Then another. Then three more. Not the silent gathering from before, this time they chirped softly, a gentle, questioning sound.

David looked up. “They’re not afraid.”

“No,” Renate said. “They’re answering.”

She lowered her hand. The glow dimmed but didn’t disappear. It settled into a quiet warmth beneath her skin, like a heartbeat she could finally hear.

David exhaled. “Renate, you controlled it.”

She shook her head. “I listened to it.”

He nodded slowly. “What did it tell you?”

She looked toward the forest, toward the hidden path that led to the carved cave mouth.

“That the island wants us,” she said. “And that it’s time we connect with it.”

David felt the truth of it settle in him like a stone settling into mortar.

“Then we go to the cave,” he said.

Renate looked at him, her eyes steady. “Yes. But this time with open minds.”

He took her hand. “We are going to do this together like we always have.”

The rose‑vine pulsed once beneath her skin, a soft, approving glow.

And the island came alive with the noise of the jungle and the trade winds moving through the trees in response.

Done for the day, they grabbed their packs and headed back to the Hut.

David spoke, breaking the silence. “Let’s get a good night’s sleep and head to the cave in the morning.”

“Good plan. I’m starting to feel like I have a fever.”

David felt her forehead and cheeks. “You’re burning up. You need some rest.”

12 responses to “The Island 18”

  1. The island is calling to Renate.
    And Renate answers the call.
    What will happen next?

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    1. Looks like our Dynamic Island explorers are going spelunking into the unknown.

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      1. A spelunking we will go,
        a spelunking we will go,
        High-ho the derry-oh
        A spelunking we will go

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        1. When they get there they find 7 dwarves and a sleeping beauty.

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  2. Fabulous.

    I hope Renate is burning up from rose vine fire, and not a viral fever.

    Then again… “That the island wants us” leads to several thoughts/ideas.

    Intriguing, thank you Dan!

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    1. Thank you, Resa. That fever is an important part of the next 28 chapters. The Island has it’s ways of introducing itself.

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  3. Such a spellbinding and powerful experience our couple is undergoing. They have made their decision and David as always is supportive and protective of his partner who is accepting and trusting the island with all its powerful pull and its mark on her. Dan, a beautiful captivating adventure. I’m hanging on to every moment.

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    1. The time has come and the adventure begins. Renate has always been the connection to ancient and spiritual things with an insightful wisdom. David is the safe haven that grounds her, goes with her, and remains her tether back to the temporal world. Jung is quoted as saying the cave we fear to enter holds the treasure we seek. This is what is happening to Renate. She must first let go of her shadow self constructed in the Sad Café of life experiences and embrace the new world she seeks. She inspires David and David builds the world she desires while she adds the beauty, symmetry, and synergy to his work. And now, the soul shattering transformation takes place that started in the Cave of the Cathedral to the Order of the Rose. I’m kinda glad to stay behind on this one.

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      1. This a deep and beautiful story. The sad Cafe leaves its mark as well and escape is not easy. The Island has found them and knows them. Can it save them from life’s consequences?

        Lovely work right here , Dan. 🥂

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        1. Thank you, Rene. The Sad Café and the spin offs from the Café really hit deep for me. There is something between the love and loss, hope and illusion that speaks so well of the quest to love and be loved. What we won’t do, what we accept, and how hard we’ll try to find love and to make love work is foundational to the human spirit for all of history. I connect so well with the story it’s almost like it’s a part of my deepest memories. In Senegal, what started as a sweeping vista of nature and people still kept its elements of the Café and we saw Renate and David transform in their relationship with each other and their world. Now, we see them accepting the Island and the Island accepting them, which is a kind of final step into a paradise where all the trappings of secular life are no longer present or even valid. How should such a dramatic change be represented or play out? The Island and Renate and David’s secure love for each other is one way to show such a dramatic life event.

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