The Island 1

“A man searching for paradise lost can seem a fool to those who never sought the other world.” ― James Douglas Morrison

AI generated image from MS Copilot by the author

The pear wine caught the last of the light, turning gold in David’s glass as the sailboat eased along at three steady knots. The sea murmured against the hull—soft, rhythmic, almost like it was breathing with them. Evening had settled gently, not with darkness but with color, the sky outside the open cabin windows burning in shades of molten orange and rose.

Renate leaned back on the cushioned bench, her bare feet braced against a padded footstool, her glass cradled loosely in her hands. “You picked a good night for this,” she said, her voice warm and low, softened by the wine and the slow roll of the waves.

David smiled. “I’d like to take credit, but I think the universe just felt generous.”

Through the windows, the horizon glowed like a forge. Beneath the sinking sun stretched the dark silhouette of an uninhabited island—long, low, and untouched. Waves raced to the shore as if called. The sailboat followed close behind.

Renate followed his gaze. “Hard to believe places like that still exist.”

“Hard to believe we made it out here,” David said.

She glanced at him, amused. “We’ve crossed worse seas.”

“Not talking about the water.”

She didn’t answer right away. The boat creaked softly, the mast humming with the wind. Pear wine perfumed the air between them.

David took a slow sip, letting the sweetness linger. “Do you remember that winter in Paris? When the heater broke, and we spent a week living under every blanket we owned?”

Renate laughed, the sound bright in the dim cabin. “You mean when you insisted we could fix it ourselves?”

“I maintain we almost did.”

“We nearly set the apartment on fire.”

“Details,” he said, waving a hand.

Her smile softened. “Yeah. I remember.”

He watched her in the fading light—her hair pulled back loosely, her face touched by years but made more beautiful by them. Time had etched its own story there, one he’d been lucky enough to read as it unfolded.

“You ever think about how far we’ve come?” he asked.

Renate tilted her head. “From where?”

“From everything,” he said. “From our careers, South America in our Piper Cub, and the balloon ride across Southeast Asia. What about that crazy flight in the ultralight to Capistrano with all those swallows? Our time in Paris on the Seine and London. The nights we didn’t know what came next. I mean, look at us now.”

She looked around the cabin—the warm wood, the gentle sway, the open windows framing a sky on fire. “Yeah,” she said quietly. “We did alright.”

For a moment, neither spoke. The world outside was too beautiful to interrupt. The sun sank lower, brushing the island’s outline with a thin rim of gold. The sea caught the colors and scattered them in ripples.

David set his glass down. “Renate?”

She turned toward him, eyebrows raised.

He hesitated—not out of fear, but because some moments deserved care. “I don’t say it enough,” he began. “But I’m glad you’re here. With me. On this boat. On this… whatever this life is.”

Her expression softened, the kind of softness that comes from years of knowing someone deeply. “I’m glad too,” she said. “More than you know.”

He stood, bracing himself against the boat’s sway, and crossed the small space between them. The cabin light flickered across his face as he leaned down slightly.

“Come see the sunset from the deck,” he said. “It’s too good to waste from inside.”

But before she could rise, he paused—just long enough to say her name.

“Renate.”

She looked up.

Her eyes lit with recognition so warm it felt like stepping into a memory they’d both been carrying. A spark. A welcome. A doorway back through all the years they’d weathered together.

She reached for his hand.

“Let’s go,” she said.

Together, they climbed into the glow of the dying sun, the sailboat gliding toward the dark, untouched island as the sky burned brilliantly above them.

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This series is dedicated to House of Heart’s Sad Cafe (downloadable on Hyperion’s Library, see the link in the menu) and poetry collection. Check out Holly’s blog for more.

68 responses to “The Island 1”

  1. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

    You’ve always been such a powerful poetic prose master of description, Daniel.

    This latest post from you is proof of that.

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Thank you so much Chris. While editors will deflesh my bones for descriptive narration, that’s my favorite part. Call me a Word-Rebel, I do break the rules quite often.

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      1. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

        So you do, my friend 😄

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        1. Hyperion Avatar

          It might be due to falling too much on my face while learning to walk ever intent on finding the cookie jar.

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          1. Dracul Van Helsing Avatar

            The face that broke a thousand cookie 🍪 jars.
            How Homer’s Iliad would have been different if he had started his epic with those words.

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            1. Hyperion Avatar

              LOL! 😂. I have a copy of the Iliad and the Odyssey. I haven’t read them since the 70’s. Maybe, I’ll take them up again but this time I’ll pen this quote into the margin at the beginning.

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  2. House of Heart Avatar

    A lovely metaphor of escape from the reality of the present to an island paradise of peace and beauty. Adore the sweetness of their past memories , the undying love and affection they share. The Island … such a beautiful escape. Wonderfully written , Dan.

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Thank you Rene, You are a huge part of the creative effort behind this little series. It wouldn’t exist except for the thousands of scenes played out in comments and dreams of a better world. I hope to honor this timeless couple that believes in the power of love, kindness, and virtue meeting every challenge with determination and hope. Life was meant to break us and for those who survive the breaking, remake us into something that achieves wisdom through experience and in turn be an example to those entering the maelstrom behind us. Few will make it through all their trials and fewer still will realize their full potential. But, for those that do, the lives they touch will smile more, hope harder, love stronger, and pass their challenges with mental strength and courage.

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      1. House of Heart Avatar

        Beautifully expressed , dear friend. I love the quote you’ve chosen for this and the pear wine is Perfection. Everyone needs an island to escape to . 🥂🌅

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        1. House of Heart Avatar

          please link back to HoH. The reblog did not work for me. 🙏

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        2. Hyperion Avatar

          Totally agree. I’m actually throwing a lot of creative writing rules out the window to lean into that part of all of us that wants to live in peace and quiet but forced to move inside our minds to find that paradise. Inside my head is a magnificently detailed and slightly illogical world of bright colors, strong light, and plenty of cool shadow. The feel of sand wiggling out from under my toes in the surf is as real to me today as the last time I experienced it. Sharing that with others is a challenge I accept. We need peace of mind now more than ever.

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          1. House of Heart Avatar

            Like most writers we are fortunate to be able to awaken illusions and bring fantasies to life. Hear the surf pounding the shore or softly sweeping inland , the warm damp sand beneath one’s feet , palm fronds swaying in the salty breeze. Life is good on the island.

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            1. Hyperion Avatar

              I think what makes it so magical and real is a lot of the descriptive parts come from real memories of things seen and admired in the past, so its much easier to put a scene together for those who see this as a new experience. I remember, the different palm trees on our St. Marks River property in the wild sub-tropical head springs that emptied into the gulf through a tide water marsh complete with old Spanish Fort. I have a picture of my brother’s son throwing my youngest sister’s son into the water next to a DO NOT FEED the ALIGATORS sign. We had fun like that. But the land was so wild and spectacular, It serves for a lot of my wilderness island visions.

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              1. House of Heart Avatar

                As a kid visiting my grandparents farm there was a river , my favorite swimming spot in the summer. An old wooden bridge on a dirt road passed over it, it was closed to traffic. There was such natural beauty there ,Never forget it!

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                1. Hyperion Avatar

                  What a beautiful memory Rene. Such memories have kept me engaged with nature. It’s where I go to get my Zen replenished.

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  3. hitandrun1964 Avatar

    It’s all there. Love, respect, generosity, appreciation, beauty, memories and happiness. A dream come true in words.

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      That is exactly what this wee story is about. Rene HoH and I often talk of escaping the madness by taking up island life. Some actually have done it and post their adventures on YouTube. It’s strange how we are confronted with so much chaos, it makes one think the whole world has gone mad. However, I do think the majority of the population would just like a little peace and quiet.

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  4. Phil Huston Avatar

    Wait, let me get this straight. The sky. It was gold, right? I almost missed that 🤣 I give. If there is a Chandler simile trophy, it’s yours.

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Waaa haaa haaa! It is gonna get worse, no doubt. But, don’t give up too quick. There is some back room editing going on to fix the story created out of these “stubs.” Your comments and a few others always help find the rat poo among the Easter eggs. If you want to test your ability to hold down lunch with iron clad determination, the second scene, when posted, should give you that opportunity. Especially when you see what the AI image generator came up with. The image will tell you more about the story than the words will. But, composition aside, it’s really about escaping the real world and turning to the inner paradise. This is a sign of people shutting down due to overpopulation and the bad behavior that comes with it. I first read about this in the mid 60’s. Now it has become a fulfilled prophecy. Remember the ole slogan Turn on and tune out? Yep, we are back again.

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  5. House of Heart Avatar

    Yay! I was able to reblog this. 🥂☀️

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Awesome. I was having a lot of problems with WP’s connection. Sunspots? GOO’s Discombobulator?

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      1. House of Heart Avatar

        I’m having a lot of issues with posting . The Hapoy Engineers are stumped. 🤔

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        1. Hyperion Avatar

          Ah, they must be improving the user experience again. I was responding to a comment and suddenly WP shuddered and I no longer had comments or a blog reader. Lost the comment I was writing, but the reader and comments came back later. Happiness Engineers are probably all out of happiness because it was shipped out of China and they lost a lot of their ghost ships. I’m really hoping our WP Happiness isn’t on the bottom of the ocean.

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          1. House of Heart Avatar

            It’s a mystery what’s going on behind the WP scenes. 😊

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            1. Hyperion Avatar

              LOL! It’s so mysterious even WP doesn’t know what’s going on. With all the glitches we endure in software and apps, it’s a wonder why the engineers are surprised when their AI agent in their robot suddenly goes insane.

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              1. House of Heart Avatar

                My key board is covering up my work space. I may have to go back to my PC.

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                1. Hyperion Avatar

                  I bought an IPad and the keyboard that goes with it and almost never use my MacBook anymore. One day I’ll try to use it and it will probably be dead as a doornail. But, iPad even with a keyboard doesn’t do everything a PC can do. Every year, technology leaves me further behind.

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    2. Hyperion Avatar

      Thank you so much, Rene. The power of your blog is spreading the word, which is offered in peace.

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      1. House of Heart Avatar

        It’s my honor, Dan. Such a beautiful and meaningful tribute to peace and harmony and the quest for world and inner peace. I So appreciate the opportunity to share this journey of Renate and David in the quest for love and joy. You’re writing is elegant and inspiring. Long may you continue to offer a positive energy and a wonderful experience on the journey to peace. 🙏❤️

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        1. Hyperion Avatar

          Have we found a true purpose? It seems the time is perfect to refocus on R & D as they show us the way to inner peace. They have lived within our blogs for several years now and evolved through a positive vision that seems clear from the start. I love the message they bring and the example they set. They are timeless and represent something we can all feel if we have a heart.

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          1. House of Heart Avatar

            There’s no time like the present to resume their journey filled with adventure and lovely distractions from the rest of the world’s turmoil. They survive in a world apart this reality of anxiety and fear. Bring the wine 🍐and let’s sail away with these two delightful creatures.

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            1. Hyperion Avatar

              Weighing anchor. This isn’t going to be a hurried vacation with schedules, preselected sites, and a set menu. It’s going to be what we were invented for. Living instead of existing. Welcome aboard. Next, landfall.

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              1. House of Heart Avatar

                Aye, matey… spontaneity …“ when the tide is low, we shall slip our moorings and sail away”. Living instead of existing, indeed.

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                1. Hyperion Avatar

                  Very much excited about this. Leaving the port under ship’s power. We really should give her a name besides U.S 1134926. That seems a bit too impersonal. How about a Celtic Goddess name?

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                  1. House of Heart Avatar

                    I’ll be giving that some thought. She definitely needs a special name.

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                    1. Hyperion Avatar

                      I agree. Only the best for our sailboat. I’m sure David has fixed it up with all kinds of gadgets and things.

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  6. Dale Avatar

    This is a beautiful piece, Dan. So glad Holly led me here!

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Thank you, Dale. After a long hiatus, I decided to come back and offer a little peace and joy for the weary.

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      1. Dale Avatar

        You came back with a beauty!

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        1. Hyperion Avatar

          I did sit on the nest for a while. And this story is what broke out of the shell. Wonder what comes next? 🤔

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          1. Dale Avatar

            Cannot wait to see!

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            1. Hyperion Avatar

              I’m positive you won’t have to wait long. 😊

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  7. Liz Gauffreau Avatar

    A lovely story, beautifully written. I felt as if I were right there on that sailboat.

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Thank you, Liz. This is the highest compliment I could receive. The story is one of peace, love, and joy. If you felt a part of it, I am encouraged to continue because we all could use a break from the chaos.

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      1. Liz Gauffreau Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  8. George F. Avatar

    All the accolades already posted are true. You’ve had one helluva romantic life my friend. If I were to rewrite one of your passages with my “realism” is would go from this: ““From everything,” he said. “From our careers, South America in our Piper Cub, and the balloon ride across Southeast Asia. What about that crazy flight in the ultralight to Capistrano with all those swallows? Our time in Paris on the Seine and London. The nights we didn’t know what came next. I mean, look at us now.” To this: “From everything,” he said. “From the time when I lost all our money in the stock market, got fired from my job and were desperate for a place to live…Our time in Silicon Valley and San Francisco…nearly on the streets with two kids and couldn’t afford to buy a home…the nights we didn’t know what came next. I mean, look at us now…finally safe from Capitalism.”

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    1. George F. Avatar

      I’m sharing my anxiety dreams.

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      1. Hyperion Avatar

        Don’t stop kicking your feet, bro. Anxiety is the real pandemic. Our world has become a cesspool and nobody likes it and nobody accepts responsibility for it. While we dunk all of those around us to keep our own head above the thick digestive stuff, beneath us are living capitalist poo sharks waiting for us to descend. Keep treading bro, kick them feet.

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    2. Hyperion Avatar

      The comparison from fantasy to realism is a genuine window into what we wish for and what we get. If I had a mulligan, I’d become a Benedictine monk out of high school and volunteer to reside at a remote monastery among the peaks in the Italian Dolomites. Then I’d be safe from capitalism and reality. As it turns out, I got my butt whipped by both because I declined monkery for debauchery. I just wanted to be like everybody else. What a poor decision that was.

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      1. George F. Avatar

        Ah, I realized way to late you aint gonna get no mulligans. I’m good now…but NOW that I’ve had time to reflect, I’m perfectly aware I got here by the skin of my teeth. Luck. Swinging through the vines. A gnome on my shoulder making things happen. All My “hard work” was not totally pointless tho. And I made sure I had fun along the way. At least I convinced myself it was “fun” as I had little choice in the matter.

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        1. George F. Avatar

          “too late…”

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          1. Hyperion Avatar

            LOL! Yep. The water is under the bridge and out to sea.

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        2. Hyperion Avatar

          My last two posts have a hint of aging gracefully in it. My biggest fear early in life was that I would die without my dignity. Then I realized dignity is way overrated and nobody pays attention to it anymore. That made life easier when I gave up on dignity and accepted that life is a lot like flatulence. It is quite startling at first then it just goes away.

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  9. Resa Avatar

    Absolutely lovely, Dan, you ol’ romantic.

    Yes… on whatever this earth ride is, if one has a hand they can hold during a sunset, one has done well.

    I see why this is dedicated to Holly and the Sad Cafe. Very nice.

    Thank you!

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Thank you Resa. LOL! I never thought of myself as romantic. I usually score myself around the embarrassingly sentimental range. Rene and I have collaborated on the characters of David and Renate in the Sad Café series for close to three years. We’ve compiled about 5 novellas along with Rene’s original series. The stories have followed David and Renate through their young beginnings to now somewhere in their early 40’s. The island represents the deep desire to turn away from the chaos of today and find a simple more enjoyable existence. The heartfelt poignancy of the early series was like a spiritual journey and now the reward of the island for having endured. I originally wanted to publish the stories but We decided to just let them find their own way through our blogs. For me personally, I am torn by the horrific experiences of war and conflict in the first half of my life and the desire to never be near such emotions ever again but the world has become so hateful and divided that the 38 conflicts raging across the world today threaten to merge into the conflict we have feared forever. It’s no longer a nation against nation as in Ukraine, it is all of us choosing sides, the boundaries drawn across politics and ideologies of hate and confrontation. The Island refuses to join sides and it offers genuine love, joy, peace, liberty and freedom. It’s about a dream we hope comes true.

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Thank you Derrick. I hope to continue this simple story. A little desktop story to read after a long day or with breakfast preparing for the new day.

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  11. equinoxio21 Avatar

    Cheers to the islands of yesteryear…

    (And the islands of tomorrow.) 🌴

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      Island living has really taken off in the last few years. The original owners are throwing in the towel and new owners are snapping them up with fresh plans. I recommend building on stilts.

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      1. equinoxio21 Avatar

        Stilts? very true. There’s been a lot of building on all the French coast in the past… 50 years… Now? thousands of houses are condemned… Some were built on cliffs in Normandy in particular. And the sea is just eating up the cliff… And I hear insurance says “too bad”.

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        1. Hyperion Avatar

          California is famous for charging millions of dollars for a seaside view from a shack. The buyers don’t understand that little clause on the contract that says pay for 30 years even if the sea eats your home on year 2. And insurance says that $7000 a year bill covers you until something happens. I’ll take my little abode in Bama sitting on an ancient glacier field. If we have another Ice Age, I’m on ground zero.

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          1. equinoxio21 Avatar

            Ground Zero ‘Bama? Roll Tide!

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            1. Hyperion Avatar

              LOL! We’ll adapt by changing our charging Elephant to a Charging Wooly Mammoth.

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  12. Woodsy Avatar

    Million things I might wish to reply with here, but today is one of those days that swallowed them all.

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    1. Hyperion Avatar

      There is always another day Woodsy. And another day on the island. Jump in with both feet and a long stick anytime you feel like it.

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