The Island 4

I learned to look more upon the bright side of my condition, and less upon the dark side, and to consider what I enjoyed, rather than what I wanted -Daniel Defoe, Robinson Crusoe

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The frame of the pole house stood steady and straight against the late afternoon sky. The stilts were sunk deep in the ground, and the crossbeams held firm where David had lashed them with braided rope. The palm‑frond bundles lay stacked nearby, ready for the roof. Renate stood with her hands on her hips, looking up at the structure the way a person looks at something hard earned.

“It’s good,” she said. “Better than I thought it would be.”

David nodded. “It’ll hold through anything short of a hurricane.”

She smiled. “Then we’ll hope the island is not in the way of any hurricanes or typhoons.”

They walked around the base of the house, stepping over the trimmed ends of poles and the curls of shaved wood. Renate’s woven mats were rolled up and propped against a tree, their fibers tight and even. She had spent days stripping the palm wood, drying it, twisting it into a cord, and then weaving. The mats were strong and smelled faintly woody.

“You did fine work,” David said, admiring one of the rolls.

“So did you,” she said. “Those fronds won’t leak a drop.”

He shrugged. “Palm fronds should last a year at least. Those mats are going to make excellent sides for the hut and carpets.”

They sat on a fallen log in the shade. The air was warm but softening as the sun dipped lower. Renate picked up one of the coconut bowls they had made. The inside was smooth from scraping and sanding.

“Hard to believe this was hanging in a tree a week ago,” she said.

David accepted it from her and turned it in his hands. “We’ll need more. Maybe bigger ones for water.”

“We could try making jars,” she said. “Clay ones. If we can find good clay.”

He nodded. “A kiln too. Something simple.”

She leaned back and looked at the half-built house. “We’re really doing this.”

“We are, and doing a good job of it.”

There was no hesitation in his voice. She heard David’s commitment in his short reply and let it settle inside her.

“We’ll need a bathroom,” she said. “A real one. Not just a place behind the rocks.”

David laughed. “A tub, a shower, a toilet. We want the whole thing.”

“Why not? We have water. We can heat it. We can make pipes from bamboo.”

He nodded slowly. “We could. And a drain field. And a tank.”

She nudged him with her shoulder. “You’re thinking like an engineer again.”

“It’s a terrible habit, sorry.”

They sat quietly for a moment. The forest hummed around them. A bird called from high in the canopy, and the breeze carried the fragrance of exotic flowers.

“We should build a fireplace too,” she said. “For cooking. Something with a chimney.”

“And a slip.”

She turned to him. “A slip?”

“For the boat,” he said. “We could bring her closer to shore. Build a little dock. Make it easier to load and unload things. Easier to sleep aboard if we need to.”

Renate considered it. “That’s a big job.”

“So is everything else.”

She smiled. “You’re right.”

“Well, we might get old but we certainly won’t get fat. There’s enough to do to keep us busy. I haven’t missed the chaos of the city once since we sailed.” David said.

The light began to fade, turning the clearing the color of rose gold. The shadows stretched long across the ground. The frame of the house stood tall and quiet, like it had always been there.

“We should stay tonight,” Renate said. “In the hut.”

“There’s no roof yet.”

“We have mats. And blankets. And each other.”

David looked at the frame again. “All right.”

They went to the sailboat and gathered their things—two blankets, a lantern, and a small bag of food. They climbed the ladder David made from split wood. The platform creaked under their weight but held firm.

Renate spread one of the mats on the floor. The woven fibers were warm from the day’s sun. David lit the lantern and set it near the center post. Its glow filled the unfinished space with a soft, amber light.

“It feels different up here,” she said.

“Cooler,” he said. “A lot more room than a hammock.”

They sat close, sharing their dinner and water from one the coconut cups. The forest darkened around them, and the sounds of the island changed—the daytime birds quieting, the night insects buzzing in the forest.

Renate leaned her head on his shoulder. “We’re really staying.”

David put his arm around her. “We are.”

The breeze moved through the open frame, carrying the smell of the sea and the faint sweetness of cut palm. The lantern flickered. The world outside was wide and wild, but the small circle of light in David and Renate’s new hut felt like home.

They lay down on the mats, the blankets pulled over them. The structure held steady in the wind, anchored to the earth. Renate curled against him, warm and tired.

“Tomorrow,” she murmured, “we start the roof.”

“Tomorrow, another glorious day,” he said.

They fell asleep in the half-built house on stilts, the island’s nightlife buzzing quietly around them as the night settled in.

8 responses to “The Island 4”

  1. And so the house on the island is being built.
    And no government around to tell them they can’t build there.

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    1. I’m hoping the government of Bora Bora doesn’t roll up and ask where their building permit is.

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      1. That’s always a pain when that happens.

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        1. One could find themselves voted off the island by the Island counsel.

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  2. Beautiful, beautiful. A dream. Romantic and sexy. But soon, chaos descends, and it will be moe like “Lord of the Flies.” With more than one human involved, that’s inevitable.

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    1. I pictured this in the Islands chain near Bora Bora, Vanuatu, and Bougainville. So, other local islanders must know where this island is but don’t visit often since it is uninhabited. But, there could be a Luau in their future. They have yet to explore very far and when they do, there is great mysteries of every era waiting for them. What a disappointment it would be if there were a commercial coconut milk factory on the other side run by retired canoe rental tycoons.

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  3. It’s too, good. Something harsh is going to happen.

    Well, I will see. Perhaps it’s not a story so much as a survival guide… and hope.

    Thanks Dan!

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