The Island 4

I learned to look more upon the bright side of my condition, and less upon the dark side, and to consider what I enjoyed, rather than what I wanted -Daniel Defoe, Robinson Crusoe

MS Copilot AI generated image by the author

The frame of the pole house stood steady and straight against the late afternoon sky. The stilts were sunk deep in the ground, and the crossbeams held firm where David had lashed them with braided rope. The palm‑frond bundles lay stacked nearby, ready for the roof. Renate stood with her hands on her hips, looking up at the structure the way a person looks at something hard earned.

“It’s good,” she said. “Better than I thought it would be.”

David nodded. “It’ll hold through anything short of a hurricane.”

She smiled. “Then we’ll hope the island is not in the way of any hurricanes or typhoons.”

They walked around the base of the house, stepping over the trimmed ends of poles and the curls of shaved wood. Renate’s woven mats were rolled up and propped against a tree, their fibers tight and even. She had spent days stripping the palm wood, drying it, twisting it into a cord, and then weaving. The mats were strong and smelled faintly woody.

“You did fine work,” David said, admiring one of the rolls.

“So did you,” she said. “Those fronds won’t leak a drop.”

He shrugged. “Palm fronds should last a year at least. Those mats are going to make excellent sides for the hut and carpets.”

They sat on a fallen log in the shade. The air was warm but softening as the sun dipped lower. Renate picked up one of the coconut bowls they had made. The inside was smooth from scraping and sanding.

“Hard to believe this was hanging in a tree a week ago,” she said.

David accepted it from her and turned it in his hands. “We’ll need more. Maybe bigger ones for water.”

“We could try making jars,” she said. “Clay ones. If we can find good clay.”

He nodded. “A kiln too. Something simple.”

She leaned back and looked at the half-built house. “We’re really doing this.”

“We are, and doing a good job of it.”

There was no hesitation in his voice. She heard David’s commitment in his short reply and let it settle inside her.

“We’ll need a bathroom,” she said. “A real one. Not just a place behind the rocks.”

David laughed. “A tub, a shower, a toilet. We want the whole thing.”

“Why not? We have water. We can heat it. We can make pipes from bamboo.”

He nodded slowly. “We could. And a drain field. And a tank.”

She nudged him with her shoulder. “You’re thinking like an engineer again.”

“It’s a terrible habit, sorry.”

They sat quietly for a moment. The forest hummed around them. A bird called from high in the canopy, and the breeze carried the fragrance of exotic flowers.

“We should build a fireplace too,” she said. “For cooking. Something with a chimney.”

“And a slip.”

She turned to him. “A slip?”

“For the boat,” he said. “We could bring her closer to shore. Build a little dock. Make it easier to load and unload things. Easier to sleep aboard if we need to.”

Renate considered it. “That’s a big job.”

“So is everything else.”

She smiled. “You’re right.”

“Well, we might get old but we certainly won’t get fat. There’s enough to do to keep us busy. I haven’t missed the chaos of the city once since we sailed.” David said.

The light began to fade, turning the clearing the color of rose gold. The shadows stretched long across the ground. The frame of the house stood tall and quiet, like it had always been there.

“We should stay tonight,” Renate said. “In the hut.”

“There’s no roof yet.”

“We have mats. And blankets. And each other.”

David looked at the frame again. “All right.”

They went to the sailboat and gathered their things—two blankets, a lantern, and a small bag of food. They climbed the ladder David made from split wood. The platform creaked under their weight but held firm.

Renate spread one of the mats on the floor. The woven fibers were warm from the day’s sun. David lit the lantern and set it near the center post. Its glow filled the unfinished space with a soft, amber light.

“It feels different up here,” she said.

“Cooler,” he said. “A lot more room than a hammock.”

They sat close, sharing their dinner and water from one the coconut cups. The forest darkened around them, and the sounds of the island changed—the daytime birds quieting, the night insects buzzing in the forest.

Renate leaned her head on his shoulder. “We’re really staying.”

David put his arm around her. “We are.”

The breeze moved through the open frame, carrying the smell of the sea and the faint sweetness of cut palm. The lantern flickered. The world outside was wide and wild, but the small circle of light in David and Renate’s new hut felt like home.

They lay down on the mats, the blankets pulled over them. The structure held steady in the wind, anchored to the earth. Renate curled against him, warm and tired.

“Tomorrow,” she murmured, “we start the roof.”

“Tomorrow, another glorious day,” he said.

They fell asleep in the half-built house on stilts, the island’s nightlife buzzing quietly around them as the night settled in.

36 responses to “The Island 4”

  1. And so the house on the island is being built.
    And no government around to tell them they can’t build there.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I’m hoping the government of Bora Bora doesn’t roll up and ask where their building permit is.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. That’s always a pain when that happens.

        Liked by 1 person

        1. One could find themselves voted off the island by the Island counsel.

          Like

  2. Beautiful, beautiful. A dream. Romantic and sexy. But soon, chaos descends, and it will be moe like “Lord of the Flies.” With more than one human involved, that’s inevitable.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I pictured this in the Islands chain near Bora Bora, Vanuatu, and Bougainville. So, other local islanders must know where this island is but don’t visit often since it is uninhabited. But, there could be a Luau in their future. They have yet to explore very far and when they do, there is great mysteries of every era waiting for them. What a disappointment it would be if there were a commercial coconut milk factory on the other side run by retired canoe rental tycoons.

      Liked by 1 person

  3. It’s too, good. Something harsh is going to happen.

    Well, I will see. Perhaps it’s not a story so much as a survival guide… and hope.

    Thanks Dan!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Hi Resa! I’m breaking away from my usual dark plotting. Nothing bad will happen on this magical island, Our intrepid duo will find the life they wanted away from the chaos, but they will have to work for it and they will become liberated and spiritually free through their effort. Of course, there may be the usual hidden lessons in philosophy of life, circle of life, and the music of the spheres. I just can’t imagine living on a beautiful island that provides everything one needs without a little mysticism thrown in. I hope you will enjoy it.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. It sounds fab, Dan!

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Hope you like it. I’ll post twice a week until it runs its course.

          Like

  4. This was a delight to read.

    Sounds so dreamy; although reality must be waaay more than just that. Like you mentioned, lot of work that still needs to be done by this pair to make it a comfortable stay.
    I don’t know why I was expecting them to make love under the stars at the end of this.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Hi, what a great pleasure to have you join my writing laboratory, Shruti. You appear to be quite prescient regarding David and Renate. In their past adventures they did indeed express their love under the stars all over the planet. You can read their origin story, The Sad Café by following the link to Hyperion’s Library in the main menu. This was a collaboration between myself and Holly Rene Hunter of House of Heart. It’s not a novel, but a written oral story that has gone on for many years now. The Island is also a collaboration we discussed in detail for a couple of years and now It’s being shared with all our followers. Rene and I believe that genuine love is the dark force that holds the universe together (including we humans)

      Liked by 1 person

      1. I hope you got my msg. It’s not here but I left it. 🏝️

        Liked by 1 person

        1. I caught up in this beautiful story , Dan. This industrious couple has made the escape and building there island home with love and faith for a serene and peaceful future away from the harsh realities of the civilized ( hmmm?) world. These two have encountered indigenous peoples before and managed to befriend and perhaps join in on a luau or two , completely accepted by the natives. But there’s is a simple life of togetherness, of love, willingness to work hard for their dream. Thank you for this beautiful story. 🏝️🙏

          Liked by 1 person

          1. You are most welcome and most deserving, Rene. Every word attempts to be true to that long held dream for relief where positive virtue free of labels rules every hour or every day.

            Like

        2. I do believe I did receive your message, Rene. Thank you. We spent a lot of time discussing this island. I want to make sure I capture our shared dream of a better life for ourselves and others beyond the enclaves of anger and untouchable by disappointment. The Island is that hope.

          Liked by 1 person

          1. It’s a dream of a story Dan.

            Liked by 1 person

            1. I just finished a complete rewrite of a story I published previously on the website. It’s an action packed thriller but with a sweet romance thrown in. I actually teared up at my own writing in some scenes. That never happens. I must be getting totally encapsulated with this singular notion of escaping the demonic world and finding a lovely paradise to lounge around in when not working to improve the living conditions. I have a vision that is very concrete, it evolves continuously but the theme never changes. Just putting the shovel down and relaxing in a clear stream is like a little reward for being there.

              Liked by 1 person

              1. That’s amazing. Is that anywhere I might read it? Would like to.

                Liked by 1 person

                1. I think I’ll have it formatted into a Kindle ebook and PDF up on the Hyperion library this week. I have 15 novels total. 5 are a series. I posted the first drafts on my various WP blogs and then did the mind numbing editing, rewrites, and formatting. If you read them on the website they will seem familiar but are like new stories now. They will be free to download, read, circulate, enjoy or delete in absolute disgust. That’s empowering.

                  Liked by 1 person

                  1. I can’t wait to read them , Dan. It will be wonderful if you make them available. I definitely will read them. You’re writing is ajways an escape to another dimension.

                    Liked by 1 person

                    1. Thank you so much, Rene. I’ve always been fascinated by works that have a deep psychological impact through slow revelation. Sort of like human emotion and awareness evolving until the character finally steps out of their chrysalis fully aware and fully formed. I’m going to remodel the library page on Hyperion sky blog. I hope to clean it up a little and make the books more accessible. One of the stories I’m completely redoing is Whispers in the Desert and focusing on the magic between Amir and the mysterious Layla. And of course, The Island will get a little polishing and then it will be a complete works available to download. The plan is to have them in a final finished book format and then turn them loose on the world. I have as of last night 20 books to publish. However, some may not be salvageable, but I’ll at least try.

                      Liked by 1 person

                  2. You are an amazing omg writer and prolific beyond my comprehension! Please do share your work with us. I am eager to die load and read your book. 📚🥂

                    Liked by 1 person

                    1. Just finished up Whispers of the Desert. This story is so crammed full of symbology, I may post the guide to the story. It’s packed with adventure and scary moments but in a new style of writing. Instead of elaborate exposition, I’m moving more to inner and outer dialogue to tell the story. I guess when I get the bug, I get it bad. The muse is raging at the moment and I’m just trying to keep up.

                      Liked by 1 person

                    2. I’m incredibly intrigued and dying to read your story. When the Muse whispers … pass it on.

                      Liked by 1 person

                    3. I have one more read through to make sure the compile process didn’t trash the manuscripts and then format for publish and I may actually have an online library in the near future. I’ll send you personal copies as soon as possible.

                      Liked by 1 person

                    4. Wonderful. Patiently waiting!

                      Like

      2. Thank you so much!
        I’ll be sure to check the rest of the series out ☺️🤍

        Have a lovely day!

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Thank you, and enjoy your weekend as well.

          Liked by 1 person

          1. Hi Daniel,

            Your comments that you and Shruti and Judy made about what the Krakeneti should have on his forehead I’ve just incorporated into my latest blog post which stars Pan Goatee and Justin Trudeau and Katy Perry with a cameo appearance by the ghost of singer-songwriter Jimmy Buffett.

            Liked by 1 person

            1. I love it Chris. Only you have the skill to bring our musings to full fruition. I’m on my way. . . >

              Liked by 1 person

              1. Did you comment on the right post, Daniel?
                There was a reply to my comment on the walls of Jericho (which I mistakenly called the walks of Jericho) in my last Friday’s post where we were discussing Bill Gates judging a flatulence contest between Joe Biden and Chief Breaking Wind.
                You mentioned Bending Over Screeching in Agony and Getting Testicles On His Forehead Bitten Off By Cerberus For Wrecking Canada.
                And I remember thinking this applies more to Justin Trudeau than Bill Gates.
                The name of the post was Pan Goatee Beheads A Fat Ugly Blimp in Early May While Justin Trudeau Wears A Hollowed Out Half Gourd On His Head.
                Because I notice on that post, there’s not a like or comment from you on it.
                Unless WP gremlins erased them.

                Liked by 1 person

                1. Geez, WordPress has led me astray. Let me double back and see if I can find myself.

                  Liked by 1 person

  5.  Avatar
    Anonymous

    I’m swept away by this, Dan. The hard work will pay off with serenity and a peaceful life away from the harsh realities of the civilized world. These are an industrious pair ready to sacrifice whatever it takes to build this island paradise. They have encountered indigenous peoples before but somehow managed to remain secluded but willing and welcome to join and enjoy a luau or two. They are working hard but the peaceful sound of the night lulls them into a deep sweet sleep.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you for this very insightful comment. I am solely focused on describing a dream come true. If we all worked so hard to live a common dream together, how wonderful the world would be and how our sense of purpose and accomplishment would be rewarded. I’ll bet love could take root and grow strong in such circumstances.

      Like

Leave a reply to Resa Cancel reply