The Island 5

“Simplicity, patience, compassion.
These three are your greatest treasures. -Lao Tzu, Tao Te Ching

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The morning came soft and blue, with a breeze that moved gently through the palms and carried the smell of sea-soaked sand and long grass into the hut. David woke. He lay still for a moment, listening to the island breathe. Renate stirred beside him and opened her eyes. She smiled and stretched in that quiet way she had when the world felt right.

“It’s a good day,” she said.

“It is. I can’t wait to get going.”

After breakfast, they climbed down from the hut and stood barefoot in the clearing. The air was warm already, but not heavy. The sky was clear. The decision they had made—to stay, to build, to live here—seemed to settle over them like a blessing.

Renate stretched her arms overhead. “Let’s finish the roof before the sun gets too high.”

David grinned. “You love the shade.”

“I want a house,” she said. “Shade is a bonus.”

They worked together, carrying the bundles of palm fronds up the ladder. David tied them down in overlapping rows, each one angled to shed rain. Renate passed them up to him and teased him when he dropped one.

“You’re getting sloppy,” she said.

“I’m getting hungry,” he said.

“You’re always hungry.”

“That’s because you work me like a rented mule.”

She laughed, and the sound carried through the trees.

By midday, the roof was finished. It cast a cool shadow across the platform, and the hut felt more like a home. They sat beneath it for a moment, drinking water from a coconut bowl.

“Your turn,” David said.

Renate stood and brushed off her hands. “Let’s close the sides.”

She lifted the woven mats one by one and handed them up to him. He tied them to the frame with cordage. The mats fit snugly, their fibers tight and strong. The hut grew darker and cooler as each wall went up.

When they finished making the window openings, they stepped back and looked at it. The roof was clean and even. The walls were straight. The stilts held firm.

“It’s beautiful,” Renate said.

“It’s our new home,” David said.

They ate a small lunch Renate made on the ship’s stove. They sat in the shade of the hut. The afternoon was still, and the forest was alive with sound.

“We should look for the goats,” Renate said. “If they’re really here, we’ll need to know where.”

David nodded. “Saddle up, cowgirl. Let’s go.”

They walked inland, following faint trails through the undergrowth. The forest grew thicker, then opened into patches of sunlight. After an hour, they found signs—droppings, hoofprints, and the stripped bark of young trees.

“They’re close,” David said.

Renate pointed ahead. “Look.”

The trees thinned, and they stepped into a small field. The grass was short and even, as if trimmed by careful hands. The air was still. The place felt tended, though no one had tended it for a long time.

Then they saw the goats—six of them, grazing quietly. Their coats were rough but healthy. They lifted their heads and watched David and Renate without fear.

Renate whispered, “They’re beautiful.”

David nodded. “They’ve been here a long time.”

She took a few steps forward, slowly and gently. The goats didn’t run. One flicked its ears and went back to grazing.

Then David noticed the edge of the field. “Renate. Look at this.”

She turned. The field was enclosed by a low fence made of living hedges, twisted and woven together. The branches had grown together over the years, maybe decades. It was old, but strong. They could make out what looked like an open gate letting the goats come and go as they pleased.

“Someone made this,” she said.

“A long time ago.”

They walked along the hedge, touching the thick, braided branches. The goats moved with them, curious but calm.

Renate looked toward the far side of the field. “If there’s a fence, there might have been a house. Or a farm.”

“Or people,” David said.

She nodded. “We should come back in the morning. When the light’s better.”

David looked at the goats again. “And see what else is here.”

The sun was sinking, turning the tops of the trees golden hued. They started back toward their hut, following the trail through the forest. The air cooled as the shadows lengthened.

When they reached the clearing, the hut stood quiet and strong on its stilts, the new roof catching the last light of day.

Renate touched David’s arm. “We’re building something real.”

“We are, and it feels so right, so natural for us, like we were always meant to be here.”

They climbed the ladder and settled inside as the sky darkened. The island hummed around them, steady and alive. They lay close together, listening to the night. Somewhere in the forest, a boreal creature called to its mate.

Tomorrow would bring more work, more discoveries, more life. And they were ready for all of it.

41 responses to “The Island 5”

  1. I need insulin, Bob said. What for Kate asked. I’m afraid of catching diabetes, he said. From what? She asked. Reading Hallmark moments masquerading as fiction, he said. Oh, you silly. People eat this shit up, she said. I know, but there’s not a drug for that he said. Plus, he added, I’m allergic to tags when attribution is obvious. Marijuana! She exclaimed! That’s what we need. Let’s plow a field for it with rustic tools and wild animals, she said. We don’t have any seeds and I’m sure this will be over before we could harvest it, even if we had seeds, he said. It’s always something with you, isn’t it, she said. First it was how does AI shave my legs for me on this desolate stretch of paradise, now it’s fantasy and attribution. she said. And when they were through grousing she miraculously produced a SAT phone from he (ahem). Amazon will have your seeds here tomorrow, whiner. I can’t help you with the rest she said. And lifted the entire pole house on her shoulders and walked away. What about me? he asked Sleep in the outhouse for all I care she said. When will you come back? he asked. Build us a fucking shower and put a ;little more Vaseline on the lens and I’ll think about it, she said. And then

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    1. Dang Phil, you just wrote an entire modern Novel. Hemingway Lite is what I’m calling it. The kids will be able to read it because they can make real progress real fast before their attention span collapses on the other side of their sugar spike. As a form of contrition, I completed the Whispers in The Desert Novel backstage. 41,000 words and 247 pages in paragraphs as short as sentences and sentences as short as grunting noises. One tag every other conversation and 85% of the novel is dialog. My secret is I only write enough to activate the readers imagination and then they fill in the bulk of the novel’s laborious exposition and description. Let them figure out how a goat and a plow share plowed 12 acres of prime beach sand and nobody on the island got a blister or stepped on a goat turd. I’ll decode this and make adjustments – backstage. 😉

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  2. Another great chapter.

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    1. Thank you M.

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  3. A dream of a tale, Dan. It’s a joy to follow this devoted couple into a world far from the darkness that envelops our world today. A lovely fantasy of determination and confidence that one must have to build a world of peace and serenity. Thank you for following this pair and sharing what lies ahead. You know I love Goats 🐐.🥂

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    1. Goats are fun animals. There is definitely fun and hard work ahead as the island willingly shares its bounty and secrets. I’ve got their amazing journey across South America to guide me on their stay on the island. And you know they love a little tribal celebration. Eventually, someone is bound to drop by and welcome them to the neighborhood.

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      1. Baby goats are my favorite critters. So much fun to watch. Are there other adventurers on the island? Are they searching for the same sanctuary. Can’t wait to find out !

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        1. I have several spoiled baby goat pictures I’ll have to post them up on IG for you. When they sound like a human infant crying everyone’s heart melts. Clever little rascals they are.

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          1. They are adorable joyful little creatures hopping all about just because they can. Do send the pics!

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            1. You have to prepare yourself mentally first or you might be inspired to bring a little baby goat home with you. They will definitely take care of the lawn and not let the grass and weeds take over. ❤️🐐

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              1. I would love to have a baby goat. I would love it and hug it and kiss it … I don’t care what my neighbors say. ❤️🐐

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                1. LOL! They’ll be jealous when they see how well maintained your yard will be and no mower sounds to wake them from their nap. Maybe a cute Baaaaaa now and then. Mr. B will love a baby goat too after he gets used to it. They like to take cats for piggy back rides.

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                  1. Haha, a visual. Mr. B will be goat herder.

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                    1. Imagine how nice life will be as a goat whisperer with a goat herding cat companion. So much frolic made even better with pear wine.

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                    2. Mr B will do a great job after his cat nip treat and pear wine … well it can’t get much better!

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                    3. LOL! I can see a social media influencer of great achievement with Mr. B and Billy.

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            2. I sent some pics to your IG.

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              1. So sweet! 🥹

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                1. They warmed my heart but they had to stay on the farm where they could run free and eat what ever they wanted when they wanted. But, we can visit them anytime we want. Mary wants to dress them up in cool summer fashion.

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  4. That beautiful hut they built looks like paradise.
    A very intriguing encounter with the goats where they discover signs of previous human habitation.

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    1. They did a good job but they have years of experience in visiting wild and wonderful places. It’s a bit mysterious, but I’m sure they will unlock the secrets and enjoy the discoveries along the way. Unless the python population gets out of hand.

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  5. Loved it. Escapism at its most romantic.

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    1. Absolutely George. We are escaping the mad mad world, skipping the Alien demon reveal, and not seeing any sign of economic distress on the island. If the goats have kids, that’s like the stock market going up.

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  6. Ohh, a bit of a mystery where the goats are. Very cool.

    I adore goats. I wish I had one. Then again, I love all animals, and want to be with them all.

    I look forward to #6, Dan, thank. you for writing!

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    1. Goats are like frisky puppies. If you take good care of them, they become your best friend. This little story has been a lot of fun. I’m letting it write itself. The goats are the main characters, LOL.

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      1. LOL!
        Keep letting it write itself!

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        1. Indeed, I will. Another will pop up today.

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  7. Yay! They found the goats. The hut sounds gorgeous and perfect. Now to see what else was left behind that fence they found.

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    1. It’s a slow reveal, but their island has many secrets to share.

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      1. I am beginning to see that!

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        1. Fantastic! This is being posted as written. I don’t do a lot of editing and deep dive into mechanics. Later after it is finished, I’ll edit, revise, rewrite the story and then format it as another novella in the series published in the library.

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          1. I like that. It’s pretty much how I write, too. Though there are no novellas in my future (yet).

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            1. I’m a total Pantser which aggravates editors into a frenzy. I finally learned how to self edit before formal edits so they don’t lose their minds and stop answering the phone. In spite of the rules of the game for publishing houses, the best stories are the ones that come from the heart, spontaneous, entertaining, and leave us wanting more.

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              1. I relate (not the editors part, the Pantser part). I agree totally that the best ones come from the heart.

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                1. I don’t think I’ll give up writing from inspiration. I write for the enjoyment of it, the community of sharing stories is my reward for the effort. We are all gathered around the campfire and we all have a story to tell.

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                  1. I sure hope not!

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                    1. Thank you for the encouragement, Dale. ☺️

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                    2. Its’s not even close to a hardship 😉

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                    3. Waa haa haaa! Thank you, Dale. 😁

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