The Island 6

Cold flower heads are raining over my heart.
Oh pit of debris, fierce cave of the shipwrecked. – Pablo Neruda

MS Copilot AI generated Image by the author

David woke to the light and sound of birds coming through the window. He was getting used to this natural alarm clock. He lay still for a moment, listening to the soft rustle of palm leaves and the faint cry of birds in the trees. Renate stirred beside him, her hair loose across the blanket.

“Oh, I could lie here all day,” she said.

He nodded. “It is tempting.” His hand wandered along Renate’s back as she stretched.

They ate breakfast on the small table near the open window—bread from the night before, a few slices of mango, and eggs from the boat. The light came in golden and soft, touching the woven walls and the floorboards.

Renate looked out toward the forest. “We should go back to the field,” she said. “See if the goats are still there.”

David smiled. “You are going to make pets out of them.”

“I want to see what else is out there,” she said. “That field looked too neat to be wild.”

They packed their day packs and a lunch. Renate tucked a folded cloth inside for carrying anything they found. David slung his pack over his shoulder and looked at her.

“Ready?”

“Always.”

They left the hut and walked through the clearing, following the same trail. The morning chill was gone, and the forest smelled of damp earth. The sound of the sea faded behind them, replaced by the hum of insects and the occasional call of a bird.

When they reached the field, it was empty. The goats were gone.

Renate frowned. “They were here yesterday.”

David listened. “Hear that?”

From beyond the trees came the faint bleating of goats, mixed with the rustle of branches.

“They’re close,” he said.

They followed the sound beyond the hedge. The ground sloped gently upward, and the air grew sweeter. Then they saw it—an orchard, sprawling and wild, with trees heavy with fruit.

Apple, mango, and pear. The branches bent under their weight. The goats moved among them, feeding on fallen fruit. Birds darted through the canopy, flashes of color and sound.

Renate stopped and stared. “David, look at this.”

The orchard stretched for acres, the trees thick and mature. The ground was littered with fruit, some fresh, some rotting.

“This isn’t wild,” he said. “Someone planted this.”

Renate walked to a pear tree and picked a pear. It was golden and soft, the skin warm from the sun. She held it up.

“Pears. We can make wine.”

David smiled. “I like the way you think.”

“I’m thinking of home,” she said. “This makes it feel possible.”

They wandered through the orchard, moving slowly, examining the trunks of old trees. The goats followed them at a distance, curious but cautious.

Renate looked around. “This is too big for one person. There had to be people here.”

David nodded. “A plantation, maybe. Long ago.”

They found no huts, no tools, no signs of recent life. Only the trees, the fruit, and the quiet hum of the island.

Beyond the orchard, the land opened again. They found a field of pineapples, their spiky crowns catching the light. A grove of bananas stood nearby, the leaves broad and green. Coconut palms rose beyond them, tall and straight.

Renate picked a few mangoes and pears, placing them carefully in her cloth. “We’ll take these back.”

David looked toward the far side of the grove. “There’s something there.”

She followed his gaze. A mound of rock rose in the center of a circular stand of trees. The formation was strange—too round, too deliberate.

“Let’s see,” she said.

They walked toward it, the ground soft with fallen leaves. The air grew cooler under the canopy. The mound was covered in moss and vines, the stones large and weathered.

David ran his hand over one of them. “This was built.”

Renate looked around. “Maybe a foundation. Or a wall.”

“Or a grave,” he said quietly.

She didn’t answer. The forest was silent except for the distant sound of goats and the flutter of wings.

They stood there for a long moment, looking at the stones and the circle of trees around them. The place felt old, older than the orchard.

As the couple walked slowly around the rock formation, David said, “Look, someone packed soil around the perimeter to build up a mound.”

“It looks like they were trying to fill in gaps, maybe to keep nature out,” Renate said.

They scrambled up on the mound. Renate pointed out where the boulders intersected. “Wow, all the crevices are packed with soil and moss.”

“Look, babe.” David pointed to a chimney built of small stones and clay poking up from the highest point of the rock mound. “This is their home. It’s like an impregnable fortress.”

The weight of their discovery held them in silence.

Renate finally broke the silence. “Whatever it was, it’s part of the story.”

David nodded. “And we’re part of it now.”

Climbing down, they continued to walk around the structure. “Look at this indentation, like a cove in the rock. All of this heavy brush blocking it looks like camouflage.”

“Darling, there is something back there like a wooden door. Can you see it?” Renate pointed beyond the brush.

“I’m going to see if I can get back there.” David pushed through the brush.

David called out. “My god, it’s a wooden door, and it’s thick. I can see that it’s sealed with clay around the edges.”

Renate drew in her breath and felt a cold shiver down her spine. “If it’s sealed from the outside, maybe it is a tomb.”

David emerged from behind the brush. “Whatever it is, I didn’t bring the right tools to get in. My inner Indiana Jones is telling me there is more to this than we can imagine.“

“I’m not feeling good about this. Let’s go.”

They turned back toward the orchard. Renate carried her bundle of fruit, and David walked beside her, his pack pressing into his shoulders.

When they reached the edge of the field, Renate looked back once more. “We’ll come again,” she said.

David smiled. “Okay. But I need to bring a few more tools and the flashlight. That door was well-built; there’s no chance of breaking in. I might be able to remove the clay and find a way to pry it open.”

They walked on toward the hut, their discovery weighing on their minds.

57 responses to “The Island 6”

  1. An intriguing mystery on the island, Daniel.
    Perhaps they found Captain Nemo’s Mysterious Island.
    I thought your AI generated photo (looking very much like a Harlequin romance movie visual) would generate further spasms in some of your readers.
    But it turned out to be the scene you described in your narrative.

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    1. You are very perceptive Chris. I did try to have the AI reproduce the old Harlequin romance book cover art but based on the island story. They aren’t photo real but not overly cartoonish. The old romances had this wholesome imagery on the covers and I wanted to give that feel. This is a wholesome sweet story that June and Ward Cleaver of Leave it to Beaver would approve.

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      1. I think you have very much succeeded in accomplishing this, Daniel.
        June and Ward Cleaver would definitely approve.🙂

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        1. I think the world is ready for June and Ward Cleaver to return. We’ve had enough of Anastasia Steele and Christian Grey.

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          1. I’m discovering the world of June and Ward Cleaver never existed for most Americans.

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            1. I think so too. I do remember Television trying to convince us that wholesome parenting was easy, even with a couple of rascals for sons. Now they try to convince us to dive head first into debauchery. Has TV gotten more realistic or did they just give up on wholesome programming?

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              1. …gave up…no one was buying it.

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                1. LOL! Nope, we are more inclined to identify with Game of Thrones instead of Beaver Cleaver skipping out on his homework to go play marbles with his friend.

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              2. btw, loving this idealistic love story! As another commenter once stated, I’m “eating it up.” LOL!

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                1. Wow, glad you are enjoying it. I decided to do this as a soothing escape for everyone tiered of the madness and drone news. We can get our fill of madness, violence, sexual adventurism anywhere, but dropping by for a little break on the island of dreams isn’t available everywhere.

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  2. Such an intriguing way you weave their story, Daniel. Now I’m more curious than ever to find out the mystery behind that rock structure 😅
    Could it be something dangerous? I wonder.

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    1. Thank you Shruti. David and Renate are incurably curious so we can count on finding out exactly what’s up with the rock pile that has a door very soon. Once they explored a cave behind a waterfall and found a paradisiacal monastery full of chanting monks. You just never know what is going on down the rabbit hole.

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    1. There will be many exciting twists and discoveries on this island.

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        1. I’m posting now on Monday and Friday as much as possible.

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          1. That’s great. Caregivers have to look for outlets of self-care and relief from the hourly stress.

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            1. The doctors have had some success in the use of calming medications, which provides me with more down time to nap and blog.

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              1. Great. Every little thing helps.

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                1. It certainly do. 🙂

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          2. I can’t remember, have you ever published a book?

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            1. I published two on the blog in the Hyperion Library. I’ve recently completed 9 final manuscripts for publishing. I’m going all the way back to the very first awful abominations finally cleaned up in sparkly new writing style and structure to meet modern publishing requirements. As soon as they are formatted, I’ll put them up on the library for free download.

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              1. Great. The reason I asked is I’ve started a new series called Interview Series which at the time focuses on published writers. I’ll be publishing my first post next week. After I exhaust writer’s, I’m moving to poetry pubs and who knows from there. I would like to move into photo books but I don’t follow anyone now who has published. It’s down the road so I can look for blogs to follow. Oh, I forgot artist! I know nothing about poetry but I know art! 🙂

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                1. That should keep you very busy M. WP has plenty of all of it, just a search away.

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  3. Dan, I love the way this is unfolding. These adventurers seem fearless in their curiosity and quest for knowledge about this new world they’ve inhabited. Love this, dear friend. Imagine a pear orchard, almost as thought they were expected. 🌷

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    1. I think you’ll recognize David and Renate’s routine as they focus on establishing their homestead and realize the island provides for all their needs, even pear wine. You know a waterfall can’t be far away. 🥂🍐🐐🌳

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      1. I recognize this adventurous devoted to each other couple, they are passionate about life and one another. Such a beautiful story, pear wine and waterfalls , delightful.

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        1. What always amazes me is we have cowritten an over 150,000 word story about this couple and their environmental adventures with amazing consistency in the world we built for them. The Island includes everything you and I discussed including their appreciation of the peace it affords. Recently, a documentary was published about a young man that actually went to the very place in the Patagonia refuge we wrote about and he discovered the river, lake, and giant wall of native hieroglyphs in our story. What blew me away is I made it all up and had no clue what we described actually existed in real life. However, the only thing mysterious that happened to the explorer was the awe he felt. He didn’t experience any communication with monks or spirits. LOL 😅.

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          1. That’s incredible, what a great experience.
            Though I don’t know if it was as good as R@D. Swimming in the waterfall is always better for two. We definitely did a wonderful job following our couple around and It was almost as must fun as being there. feel free to take from our masterpiece if you want to. I admit I am often inspired by our words and the lives of our subjects. I would not mind a little pear wine and a dip in the cool clear water 💦 right now.

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            1. I do believe it was the constant presence of clear flowing water, the water falls, and the rich scenes around R&D as they enjoyed the freedom it offered that gave it a voice. It was the blending of personal experiences, dreams, and a deep, almost mystical inner view that gave the story a beautiful voice played out in comments on poetry that seemed to conjure it all together in a story. An amazing feat of creative magic. I took a daylong canoe ride on the Wekiva Springs near Orlando last year. It was like the Flight to Senegal during the Andean phase but with Florida’s exotic waterbirds everywhere in abundance and even the occasional small crocodile. It was like the story became real. A bottle of chilled pear wine, a pool of crystal water next to a waterfall is paradise found. I definitely see our work before my eyes when writing The Island. It’s a devotion to Renate and the beautful soul that gives her life and presence in that world of words they live in.

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              1. We created a paradise for these two beautiful souls who fall in love in a dream of a journey filled with adventure and new horizons with each new chapter, an outpouring of spontaneous creativity. I’m glad it’s saved for look backs 😊, I really loved it.

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                1. I sewed it all together scene by scene in Scrivner, a powerful writing app on my MacBook. It breaks the story down in scenes making it easy to manage. Then when you are ready it will seamlessly create a document that puts it all together. It’s amazing to see and read. I should send you an unedited manuscript for historical safekeeping. It could serve as inspiration over and over again. You just can’t get writer’s block reading this epic story. As a novel, it would likely be 3 inches thick. Epic beauty from page one to the last page.

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                  1. I’m sure it’s beautiful gathered up and put together. Send it when you can and I will download it , I sometimes go through my comments and read our entries ,we had an amazing synergistic experience with our collaboration. An epic beauty hidden in sight.

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                    1. I also think it was an amazing synergistic experience. I could see it unfold in my mind’s eye in clear detail, even feel the Piper Cub cutting through the air. I sometimes go through periods where the visions stop and I just wait for them to come back. What really surprises me is a lot of what we describe is later revealed in some article in a journal or online magazine that exactly replicates what we earlier described. Our crystal ball was quite accurate. I’ll definitely send you a copy. It includes a lot of chapter epigraphs that were poems you wrote that inspired the story.

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                    2. Great… I really want to have that so I won’t have to dig through comments. That’s actually a very original idea we had there. Ahhh , my poems. That’s awesome. I have noticed a lot of articles in travel journals that basically entice to journey to far off continents, many unexplored. We’ve been plagiarized! 😟

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                    3. Indeed, we did it first and everybody thought it was a great idea, so they are doing it too. They are still beating around the jungle trying to find the waterfall with the cave of monks behind it. I’ll never tell.

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                    4. That’s one secret they’ll never get … I won’t have them barging in on the monks, only we can Do that.😏

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                    5. That’s right! Some secrets will remain secret. 😁🍐🥂

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                    6. That’s why they’re called secrets. 🥂🤭🍐

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                    7. And we’ll never tell. 🏝️⛵️

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                    8. What happens on the island stays on the island. 🏝️ most of it.

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                    9. Waaa haaa haaa haaa! That made me snort laugh. 🤣🙈

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  4. I’m kind of thinking there has to be a waterfall. R and D live to explore and to investigate, not to mention spending a bit of time in a clear waterfall pool after a couple of pear wine breaks.

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    1. You know them so well, you can tell what Renate and David will do before they do it. 😉🥂

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  5. Ahh, I’m liking the mystery.

    At first it seemed too good. Now it seems intriguing.

    Thanks Dan!

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    1. I am catching a bit of flak for my June and Ward Cleaver prose. I want us all to live vicariously through this lovely extended vacation on the island. Rest, go barefoot, drink some pear wine. We hear the bugs in the forest but we don’t see any on our hamburger and none are biting. Wait until you see the inside of the hut, it’s kinda nice in there.

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      1. LOL!
        Nothing like a well decorated hut interior.
        We can all dream… “Dream Big”. xx

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        1. Once they find one of those giant clams, they will have a matching bathroom and kitchen sink. That will be a big hit. 😁

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          1. NIIICE!
            Sounds better than my bathroom!

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            1. LOL! I’m pretty sure they won’t have to live without luxury, it’s just that luxury takes a different form. And naturally, since it’s a volcanic island, there will be an abundance of precious metals and gemstones so eventually they’ll have some impressive native wear. Here is a challenge. What would an art gown look like if all materials came from the island?

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  6. This story is growing teeth, so to speak. Of course, I am ridiculously nervous that all is not what it seems. And, like Indiana Jones, going into places you are not supposed to brings all sorts of (mis)adventures!

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    1. LOL! David is the very first person to dive headlong into misadventure. His curiosity knows no bounds. Thankfully, Renate is more level headed and generally has to rescue him from himself. There may be a few moments where you might want to cover your eyes.

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  7. A door now? Curiouser and curiouser.

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    1. Thanks Brian. It will definitely get curiouser. Like a fever dream.

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      1. Which you clearly enjoy writing…

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        1. LOL! Guilty.

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