The Island 7

My bed is sending out serious nap rays. I can’t help myself. The fluffy pillows and warm comforter are more powerful than I am. I have no choice but to snuggle under the covers. -Laurie Halse Anderson, Speak.

MS Copilot AI generated image by the author

At the hut, David set down his pack and looked toward the sea. The light was fading, and the horizon glowed with a rose-colored line between the dark green ocean and the azure sky. The grand views of sunset and sunrise were his favorite times of every day.

Renate began to prepare dinner. She worked quietly on a cutting board placed on a stump next to David, slicing vegetables and washing the potatoes in a bowl of clear water. David built a small fire and set the pan on the stones.

The steak from the boat hissed when it hit the pan. The smell filled the clearing. Renate smiled faintly. ā€œThat’s the best sound.ā€

David nodded. ā€œThese steaks smell delicious. We have been working hard and not eating enough. I think I might be hangry.ā€

Renate massaged his shoulders with both hands, digging into his tight muscles. ā€œHang in there, champ. I have a feeling this island is going to make us fat and happy.ā€

ā€œI’ve never once seen you with an extra pound on that sweet behind of yours.ā€

ā€œCheck back after I eat an entire apple pie all by myself,ā€ Renate said.

David choked for a second. ā€œDang. I drooled on myself. Please make two pies, or maybe four.ā€

They laughed. The tension of the day was quickly fading.

They ate at the small table inside the hut. The meal was simple—steak, potatoes, vegetables, and a bottle of pear wine they had saved. The wine was sweet and light, and it softened the silence between them.

Renate cut a pear after dinner and handed him a slice. ā€œTaste this.ā€

He put the whole slice in his mouth. The fruit was crisp and sweet. ā€œPerfect.ā€

She smiled. ā€œWe’ll make more wine. Enough to last.ā€

Outside, the night came down. The fire burned low, and the forest started its ritual hum. They sat for a while, listening to the wind move through the palms.

David stood. ā€œWe should get supplies. Tomorrow we’ll need tools.ā€

Renate nodded. ā€œAnd clean sheets.ā€

They walked to the boat under the stars. The tide was low, and the hull rocked gently against the makeshift slip they had built. David went below and gathered what they needed—screws, a hammer, screw driver, a small saw, and a handful of nails. He rolled up their mattress and pillows and found fresh sheets in the locker. He tied the bundle to make it easier to carry. After a quick shower, they changed clothes and headed back to the hut.

Renate carried the pack while David slung the bedding over his shoulder. The path to the hut was quiet, except for the breeze rustling the leaves and the faint rush of the sea.

At the hut, David set down the tools and looked at the leftover poles stacked near the wall. ā€œLet’s make a bed.ā€

Renate smiled. ā€œA real one.ā€

He worked by lantern light, cutting and fitting the poles together. The frame took shape quickly—sturdy and square. Renate held the pieces steady while he twisted the screws in. The sound of their work echoed softly through the clearing.

When the frame was done, they lifted the mattress onto it. Renate spread the fresh sheets and smoothed them with her hands. The lantern light caught the white fabric, and the hut looked suddenly more like a home.

David stood back and looked at it. ā€œThat looks good.ā€

Renate nodded. ā€œIt feels right.ā€

They sat on the edge of the bed. The mattress was firm but comfortable. The air smelled of fresh-cut wood and clean linen.

Renate leaned against him. ā€œAnother step,ā€ she said.

He put his arm around her. ā€œToward living the dream.ā€

They lay down, the lantern flickering beside them. The night was warm, and the sound of the sea came faintly through the open window like a lullaby.

Renate turned toward him. ā€œWe’ll find out what that place was.ā€

ā€œWe will,ā€ he said. ā€œBut not tonight. We’ve got more important things to do.ā€ He held Renate to him and kissed her long, slow, and deep.

She smiled. ā€œI like how you prioritize.ā€ She pulled him down on top of her and released a soft moan from the comfort of their new bed.

They pulled the blanket over them. The bed creaked softly under their weight. Outside, the forest whispered, and the waves broke against the shore.

Completely spent, David closed his eyes. The day’s work, the walk, the discovery—all of it settled into quiet. Renate’s breathing slowed beside him.

The lantern burned low, throwing a small circle of light on the wall. The hut drew quiet.

They slept like that, in each other’s arms, the island around them alive and waiting.

40 responses to “The Island 7”

  1. That tropical island hut in the picture looks very much like a home, David.
    David and Renate have excelled themselves.
    That simple meal of steak, potatoes, vegetables and pear wine they enjoyed (which sounds absolutely delicious by the way) would have cost $145 Canadian in Marx Blarney’s Canada to make up for all the carbon taxes slapped on the production, growing and making of all those just to send Greta Thunberg into Climate Change orgasm.
    It looks like David and Renate know how to do that better as well compared to Marx and Greta.
    Not everything the woke Left comes up with can beat the real thing.

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    1. Glad you liked that little scene, Chris. They arrived with a fully stocked sailboat so they have to use up their stores before it goes bad. However, they will switch to seafood and local cuisine which is always fresh and good for you. No cost but time, no taxes, carbon or otherwise. The little view of their new bed shows it in a quaint light dappled view making the scene more comfortable and homelike. I could live there and love every day of it.

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      1. I could live there and love every day of it too.

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        1. With Sherrie there to keep all the Dragon Sisters in line, we could finally relax, maybe build a two-goat buggy and go explore the island.

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          1. An excellent idea, my friend.

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  2. I must say, I lived one of the perfect existences for a short while. Poetic. Romantic. Sexual. Peaceful. Then a baby happened. Then another. Then I’m pulled into the matrix worried about work, taxes, money, school districts, food, rent, clothes, medical bills, doctors, check ups, toys, friends, etc etc bla bla bladdy bla. Reality interrupted and intruded upon the idyllic. Well, I could never see that far ahead when I was younger. I do NOW…but who cares? LOL!

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    1. We shall forever call them the good ole days. I think I lived a similar life. Quite adventurous where the matrix rarely travelled. But ultimately the gravity of life sucked me over the matrix event horizon and I also became fully embedded in responsibility and no matter how high I exceeded mundanity, there was always someone to disrespect my effort and me. I try to keep my core strong because when I finally go to the nursing home, when I break wind, I want everybody to know it. I’ve heard from several old folks it’s a sign of good health.

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      1. There’s a consequence to everything.

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        1. Indeed, the duality of life cannot be separated out. But, it was consequence that fueled my life while everything else was just the story.

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          1. “…it was consequence that fueled my life ” I’d say this is true for me as well…mainly because I was unprepared for any consequence. I had no idea! LOL!

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            1. Unprepared for any consequence is the best part. It’s that WTF moment when the pressure cooker blows its lid and you have catfish stew all over the kitchen. It’s when you show off at the water park and do a 2.5 gainer off the high dive and lose your swimming trunks. It’s standing in the 15 items and under line and the person in front of you has the register locked up with a credit card disaster. When your heart rate hits 220 beats a minute, you know you are having the time of your life.

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              1. I somehow think I ‘should have’ been better prepared, warned, educated…something. But who could be? Who knew?

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                1. It certainly wasn’t me, who knew. I was totally absorbed in the philosophy of youthful debauchery and worked hard at my job to earn enough money to accomplish all my socially taboo milestones. Then one day, I realized I wasn’t having fun. I had debauched my way into a rut. I became accountable, responsible and judgmental of iniquitous behavior. I married, had children, bought soccer mom cars, property, and dreamed of becoming rich and famous by inventing something no one needed but everybody wanted.

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  3. So perfect, I could stay there forever, have you considered going into the interior decorating business. That bedroom is the bomb. A bit of a. Romp with the baby goats ( no eating the Goats though) a mid day swim in the river calls for wine and a nap. I hope they brought the chess board for distraction. 😊

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    1. All very good points that somehow may materialize in the story soon. Two hammocks in the shade and a small Chess set carved from local aromatic woods. Pear wine in glazed decanters brightly colored cooled in the stream nearby. And of course the goats are loved and protected, each with a name well earned. I can see it clearly.

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      1. This is actually a very beautiful room. The floor coverings are lovely, the bowls , the rope. Everyone needs those.

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        1. I love that you noticed these things in the picture. I let Copilot have a lot of creative freedom in making the images. It always has something weird that doesn’t belong. I usually leave the doesn’t quite belong part in the image so everyone can enjoy a little Easter egg hunt for weird AI interpretations. I always think of AI as an eccentric comedian. It’s never quite right but the wrong parts can be entertaining.

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          1. You’re doing a lot better with the AI images than I. šŸ‘ Nine out ten times I give up and use something online if I’m going to feature a pic. I really love this one though. I’m glad you’ve got AI under control 😊

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            1. Think of it as a young apprentice full of eager desire and low on real skills. I have to mentor it. šŸ‘Øā€šŸ«

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              1. That’s the secret to AI. Don’t let him get to full of himself.

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                1. Exactly, nothing worse than a smarty pants AI that misspells everything you type on your phone keyboard.

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                  1. He’s a real smart-ass , apparently smarter than me. 🧐

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                    1. I know Hans the ASS (automated spelling system) can misspell and misinterpret at a level I couldn’t even achieve in Kinder Garden before I learned to spell.

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                    2. Hans the ASS is a trouble maker , that’s his job. šŸ˜‚

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                    3. And he does it SOOO well. Mxtkspickle is. šŸ¤–šŸ˜£

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  4. It’s all so idyllic, Dan, wonderful!

    I did wonder where they were going to get new sheets when these ones wore out. How not idyllic of me.

    Also, I’ve never tasted pear wine. Something new to try!

    Lovin’ the island home coming together, thank you!

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    1. Oh, if you find a good quality pear wine, it becomes the drink of choice. Alcohol content is usually low and it goes with any situation and light cuisine. LOL! I love the question of where do the new sheets come from. One reader mentioned Amazon. I wonder if they deliver to islands? They will likely end up doing the ancient process of making bamboo cloth and slowly switch from the latest tropical fashion wear to local traditional native ensembles. A lot of the story is about Renate and David adapting to island life and exploring the natural wonders. If that gets too boring, then a giant prehistoric beast might stomp around and stir up some excitement, or maybe pirates visit the island.

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      1. Lol
        Thanks for answering about the sheets.
        I figured they would weave up something. I forgot about bamboo. Nice!

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        1. Renate and David are slowly going 100% organic, Non-GMO, small farm produce and products. TAX FREE! 😁

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          1. Yes… just paid mine… not free here and now!

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            1. I sometimes confuse myself with thoughts like America revolted against the British over taxes, and then set up a British style tax system and progressively raised taxes every year there after. Dare I be suspicious?

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  5. That hut looks so cosy. I like the way their story is unfolding, David. Often when life gets busy and stressful for me, stories like this offer a comforting slice of relief.

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    1. Thank you, Shruti. I’m glad this story is working for you. You were the person I wrote this for, someone that likes to set the busy, stressful day aside and relax with a gentle story. This story started after several years of talking about getting away from the mad world to an island with a quiet life. No politics, no war, no economic subterfuge just day to day life, no schedule except the cycle of nature.

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      1. That sounds like heaven. And you successfully crafted that through your words. That’s not really easy, you know. I’ve read very few pieces that have instantly calmed my nervous system. Reminds me of my childhood when I used to read a certain comic book (that’s very popular here!) to bed almost every night.

        Have a lovely day, David!

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        1. I was a comic book fanatic in my preteen years. Books, and comics, and cartoons help craft me into an eccentric person who laughs at nothing but funny stuff. I hope this story continues to help you find your way back to those quiet times.

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  6. They are building a beautiful home.

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    1. I wonder if it will turn into a small village of mostly nice people? Thank you, Dale. I greatly appreciate your comments and support for this little story.

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      1. I am hoping for all-nice people šŸ˜‰ to go with the gentle theme of the place…

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        1. I’m toying with a lovely native islander family adding some community to the island. This would occur later in the story.

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          1. Ooohhhh…

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