The Island 8

“The stone remembers what the sea forgets.
Beneath its silence, the old voices wait —
not for worship, but for those who listen.” – Songs of the Elders

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The new islanders awoke a little later than usual and lounged sleepily in the bed.

“The bed is so comfortable, I almost don’t want to get up,” Renate said softly. She stretched and yawned.

David smiled. “That was a good one. I’m jealous.” He rose slowly out of bed and began gathering the coffee tin and cups, then filled the percolator with fresh water. Renate started the camp stove and placed the percolator on the fire.

They lingered longer than usual, the quiet between them easy and warm. The hut began to fill with sunlight streaming through the windows. Renate made breakfast—fruit, bread, eggs, and coffee—and they ate slowly, talking about the mound.

“We should look inside,” she said.

David nodded. “We’ll take tools. Just in case.”

They packed their lunch and added two flashlights, a crowbar, a chipping hammer, and gloves. David checked the batteries and slipped the hammer into his belt. Renate filled two flasks with water and tucked one into her pack and the other into David’s.

The walk to the grove was quiet. The forest was alive with birds, and the air grew cooler under the canopy as they neared the mound. The trees formed a circle around it like a perimeter guard. The stones, covered in moss and vines, created a scene from the distant past. The island was slow to yield its mysteries, and the two explorers were fully under its spell.

David set down his pack. “Let’s clear the entrance.”

Renate took the machete and began trimming the brush. The vines came away easily, revealing a rough outline of a door made from heavy wood and iron bands.

“It’s old,” she said.

“Very old,” David said. “It reminds me of the kind of doors that castles had to defend the Keep.”

They worked together, cutting and pulling until the doorway was clear. The hinges were rusted but solid. David wedged the crowbar into the seam and leaned his weight against it. The door groaned but held.

Renate leaned in to give a hand. “Try again.”

The wood cracked, and the door shifted. A smell came out—dust, stone, and something faintly sweet, like old wine.

“One more,” he said.

The door gave way with a dull creak. They stepped back as it swung open.

Inside, the light from their flashlights cut through the darkness. They saw a room carved into the rocks, with a low, curved ceiling.

Renate whispered, “Look at this, it’s much finer than the outside would ever suggest.”

David nodded. “Someone lived here. The rocks are pointed with lime, probably made right here on the island.”

They stepped inside. The air was cool and dry. Against one wall was a bed, simple and narrow, covered with a faded blanket. A table and chair stood nearby. The chair had a goat leather seat and back, and at the far end was a fireplace built into the stone.

Renate moved her light along the wall. “Look at this.”

Small oak barrels were stacked neatly, their wood dark with age. A wide rack held long objects wrapped in coarse cloth and twine.

David examined one of the barrels. “Still sealed.”

Renate unwrapped a corner of one of the long bundles. “Rifles,” she said quietly.

David looked closer, feeling the bundles. “Percussion cap muskets. And cartridge-style rifles. They’re well preserved with some kind of oil.”

They moved slowly through the room, careful not to disturb anything. The sounds were heavy and muted. They had discovered a forgotten history of the island.

Renate turned her light toward the center wall. “There’s another door.”

David walked over and tried the handle. It was stiff but moved. The door opened into a narrow landing. A ladder descended into darkness.

Renate shone her light down. “It goes deep.”

David tested the first rung. It was solid. “Well built.”

They climbed down, one after the other. The air grew cooler, the smell of earth stronger.

At the bottom was a large room, wider than the one above. The walls were lined with shelves and racks. Barrels filled the space, all sealed tight.

Renate ran her hand over one. “These were probably here for storage.”

David nodded. “Supplies the owners wanted to keep preserved.”

They found tools—axes, shovels, saws—each wrapped in oilcloth. There were plow shares and other farming tools. On a shelf sat a bound ledger, its leather cracked but intact.

Renate opened it carefully. The pages were yellowed but legible. “It’s written in French.”

David leaned over her shoulder. “Any dates?”

She turned a few pages. “1757. Then 1762. It goes on.”

She flipped ahead. “Stops at 1890.”

They looked at each other.

“A garrison?” she said.

“Maybe,” he said. “Or a trading post.”

Renate closed the book. “Why here?”

David looked around the room. “A stopover, maybe. Ships coming through for resupply.”

They climbed back up to the main room. The light from the doorway was dim now, the sun outside beginning to lower into late afternoon.

Renate looked at the rack of rifles again. “They’re in good shape.”

David nodded. “Yes, especially considering their age.”

She smiled faintly. “We’ll leave them for now.”

He agreed. “We’ve done enough for one day.”

They stepped outside. The air was warm again, the forest alive with sound.

Renate looked back at the mound. “It’s strange.”

David nodded. “It’s history, but who’s history?”

They walked toward the orchard, the light turning golden through the trees. The goats were grazing in the distance, and the fruit hung heavy on the branches.

Renate picked a pear and handed it to him. “Should we come back tomorrow?” she said.

“I think we should examine all of the supplies to see if any of them are useful. The rock pile is a perfect place to store things. We can bring back anything we want to keep at the hut,” he said.

They walked on, the island quiet around them, the mound behind them holding its secrets slowly disappearing behind the trees.

43 responses to “The Island 8”

  1. Extremely well written, Daniel.
    Finding the remnants of an unknown garrison on the island.
    With (better yet!) bottles of good wine left over.
    This reminds me for some reason of two places I hadn’t thought about in years.
    The first is the Bone’s place on a creek on my paternal grandfather’s farm.
    Levi Bone was an eccentric old Englishman who decided to build himself a castle on the creek.
    It’s not intact but never the less the bottom part that remains does look like the ruins of a medieval castle on the Alberta prairie.
    The other is the Mad Finn’s castle in the Red Deer River Badlands of central Eastern Alberta.
    Called the Mad Finn by his neighbours (although he was actually Hungarian but they mistook his Hungarian for Finnish), he built himself a medieval castle in the Badlands.
    It is much more intact than the Bone’s place and somewhat a surprise to see a medieval castle standing in the Alberta Badlands.

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    1. Thank you Chris. Yes indeedy, one can’t wander around on an Island in the French Archipelago of the pacific without stumbling onto something left behind. It’s starting to add up. Someone was definitely here before. But no natives seem to be present and none seem to have visited or left any sign of their presence. Did the Kraken get them all? Will we find the bones of Dracul, Daniel, and Sherrie?

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      1. And being French, naturally their wine would be well preserved.
        Yes, did the Kraken get them?
        And hopefully the bones of Dracul, Sherry and Daniel won’t be found.

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        1. I know that will come as a shock to us if they do. I do remember the Kraken getting after us as we made our way to the island a few yeas ago. Only Sherry’s buns saved us from an awful fate.

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          1. They did.
            We will need a well stocked supply of Sherry’s magic mushroom buns should we head to that island.

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            1. We could survive a long time on those big beautiful buns. I love homemade bread. It tastes sooo much better.

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    2. I love the idea of finding a European style castle in the Canadian hinterlands.

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      1. Yes, it’s really something to see.
        Levi Bone was quite an eccentric character.
        He once lived in the town of Munson, Alberta and the people of Munson had elected him town constable – as a joke.
        But Levi took it seriously and built a jail for the town.
        He wouldn’t allow any parties.
        And threw in jail any party goers.
        New Year’s Eve was coming up.
        And it looked like no party.
        But my great grandfather Fred Clegg (my paternal grandmother’s father) came up with the idea of someone accusing Levi of having stolen chickens.
        Levi, being the law abiding citizen that he was, locked himself in his own jail on New Year’s Eve until a Justice of the Peace could be found to hear the case.
        While Levi spent the night in jail, the citizens of Munson enjoyed one rocking party under my great grandfather’s inspiring leadership.
        Late in the afternoon of New Year’s Day, after everyone had recovered from their hangovers,they approached Levi in jail and told him it was all a huge mistake.
        Someone else had apparently stolen the chickens.
        But at least the good citizens of Munson had enjoyed one heck of a New Year’s Eve Party.
        I get the feeling that I have inherited my great grandfather Fred Clegg’s deviousness.

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        1. ROFLMAO!!!! That is a great story. It has a bit of the town of Mayberry and deputy Barney Fife played by Don Knotts in it.

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  2. Now the real mystry begins!

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    1. It is getting a little more mysterious, M. Wait until they find the kegs of Cognac.

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      1. I knew they would find goodies in there but there has to be some voodoo

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        1. Mystical things always happen to this couple. They are members of the Order of the Rose and the order’s monastic codex. Magic could happen.

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  3. My comments are disappearing.
    I wonder if our couple will sleep as well tonight after this rather disturbing discovery? Is their paradise a stopover for pirates to resupply? Very intriguing and wonderful writing , Dan. I’m sure our couple can handle any surprises coming their way. If not, there’s the booze. 🍐🥂💀

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    1. Renate and David are very practical people. They wanted to farm the land and fate just handed them everything they need. Plus, some very well aged cognac, I’m betting. Or, maybe rum. In the real world the Allies began stocking little cabins all over the islands during WWII for survivors of sunken and damaged ships. Some of these little way stations are still used but all the rum and canned mutton is long gone.

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      1. Canned Mutton. Yum. I learned to like Cognac in Germany. Hopefully they’ve is landed in a honey pot with no worries.

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        1. In this story, no worries. Even tho they don’t mention it but briefly, there are plenty of pears and they now have good barrels. Pear wine abundance is in their future. 😁🥂

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          1. Then it sounds perfect. 🥂🍐

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            1. What could be better, Right? Well, they do need to get those hammocks up for noon naps. They stay busy now creating their world but, island life is not supposed to be busy all day long.

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    All work and no naps… never turns out good.

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    1. That’s right! I have no idea why we don’t have noon nap labor laws.

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  5. What a fab exploration, Dan.

    Of course now I want to know more about that old history about the place.

    I love the discovering of the ledger. This is intriguing.

    Thanks for writing! You write very well. It all flows. 🕊❦

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    1. Thank you so much, Resa. I’ve definitely been trying my best to figure out how to string sentences together. I based this island off of the island garden in the South Pacific near Bora Bora and French Polynesia. These islands were beautiful and plentiful and were necessary for resupply and survival for early European explorers and ship trade. Uncovering the island’s past is sort of a sub plot for the main plot of Renate and David finding the island provides for all their needs, physical and psychological. Not one time has David looked at his smart phone to see if he had a signal.

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      1. HA!
        I call my phone.. my stupid phone.
        Sure, the phones might be smart, but in many ways they make people stupid.
        As we rely on tech, are we smarter?

        Keep writing!!!

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        1. WE need a new pill for panic attacks when we realize we don’t have our stupid phone. All that angst for a phone that untypes all your correct words and substitutes gobble-de-gook.

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          1. I’m good! I do not take my phone everywhere, and do not answer it all the time. I figure if something is that important, the caller will leave a message.
            I disabled email on my phone. When I go for walks, it’s on Airplane mode. I just use the camera.

            I am hiding from stoopid!

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            1. LOL! Hiding from stoopid is a real art. It’s everywhere like mud just waiting from a nice shoe. You have a great strategy. I should try these techniques, if I can do it without stroking out.

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              1. It’s easy peasy. You just do it!
                LOL… right now .. where is my phone? Probably turned off, in my purse. I was walking, so taking street art pics..W/O being disturbed.

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                1. You already have island life going on. I’m sure when I get old and senile, I won’t even know I ever had a phone. That might be a blessing.

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                  1. LOL… I just found my phone.

                    Yes, in some ways I do have the island life, in a real and poetic sense.

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                    1. I totally approve. On several occasions, I spent some time on different islands and it only took a few hours for me to feel like a 500 pound weight was lifted off of me. I felt noticeably relaxed. That became a metaphor for living a better life, free of the current chaos of the world. We have reached a point where our common psychology has begun to build an island for us that we can retreat to.

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                    2. This makes sense to me, Dan.
                      I do feel lighter, freed when I go on my art walks.
                      I have 100% freedom from..my phone except its camera, which is an art capturing tool at that point, no worries about work, housework, errands, dinner, bills… just the island in the alleys.
                      It’s peaceful. The odd car or human. Alley animal life, insects, pollinator garden bees and butterflies, squirrels, rats, mice, raccoons and an assortment of urban birds.

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                    3. And you happen upon such fantastic works of art in those out of the way places. I hope that lovely oasis continues to thrive.

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                    4. Me too! ❦

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  6. Oh! What a discovery! And judging by the years in the ledger, they need not fear anyone returning for their stock… Let us hope there is stuff (outside of guns) they can use to keep themselves going. I figure it’s a question of time before coffee runs out – unless, of course, they find a coffee bean plantation hidden in another section 😉

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    1. I don’t think they will need the guns. No coffee could be the dramatic scene where everything changes. Thanks for bringing that up. I totally forgot this essential part of the story. I’m going to have to figure out how they stumble onto a well manicured coffee plantation and realize they are going to have visitors, sooner or later. In the mean time, like good neighbors, they’ll make sure the beans are properly harvested. 😁😁☕️

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      1. No guns… should they choose to eat meat, however…
        My pleasure! Yay! I’ve given an idea 😉
        Coffee is a must for me – and these two have it every morning so it stands to reason something must be done. 🙂

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        1. Pretty soon, the sailboat stores will be empty and they will need to go fishing. I don’t think Renate will let David eat her goats. Maybe the little pigs running around will volunteer to be the center piece of a luau. Island cuisine requires a lot of prep.

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          1. That’s what I am thinking. I don’t think they will, either. They can survive quite well on fruits, vegetables and fish.

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            1. I’m interested in seeing how they develop their recipes to match the food that is available. This is not Naked and Afraid mud wallering survival. This is living their best life. The nice thing is this particular South Pacific have only two seasons, dry and rainy. Things grow quickly and all year long.

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              1. Yes. It will be interesting!

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