The Island 13

Order of the Rose, Chapter XIII, Verse XXIV

“The island hides its oldest truths in places where light hesitates.
Those who feel the unseen currents know this;
the land dreams through stone, and its dreams awaken only for the chosen.”

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They worked in the shade beside the hut where the morning light fell soft across the table David had built. Renate held the small stone mortar steady while David pressed the rounded river pebble into it and ground it in slow circles. The sound was steady and dry, like sand shifting under a tide.

“Blue first,” David said. “It’s the strongest color.”

Renate nodded. “It feels right.”

The pebble eventually broke down into powder, fine and bright. David lifted the mortar and tapped it gently. The dust fell into a small clay bowl. Renate added some of the filtered ash they had saved from the kiln.

“Try a little water,” she said.

David poured a few drops. Renate stirred with a stick until the mixture turned into a smooth paste, the color deepening as it thickened.

David smiled. “That’s glaze. Or close enough.”

Renate dipped her finger into it and held it up. “It’s beautiful.”

“It’ll fire darker,” David said. “But it’ll hold.”

She looked at him. “Then we need more stones.”

He nodded. “Upstream.”

They packed lightly and followed the creek. The sun was warm but not harsh, and the air smelled of water and leaves. The stones along the bank glimmered in different colors—reds, greens, blues, golds. Renate picked them up as they walked, dropping them into a small cloth bag.

After a while David said, “There’s a path here.”

Renate looked where he pointed. A narrow trail, almost hidden, wound away from the creek and into the trees close to the steep rise of the mountain and waterfall.

“It’s natural,” she said. “Animals, maybe.”

“Or people,” David said.

They followed it. The trees grew thicker, the air cooler. The path curved around a rise of stone, and then they saw it.

A cave mouth, wide and tall, framed by carved patterns in the rock. Spirals, lines, shapes that suggested vines or waves or something older than either. The carvings were worn but still clear, as if the stone refused to forget.

David stepped closer. “Someone made this.”

Renate didn’t move. “David, wait.”

He turned. “What is it?”

She shook her head slowly. “I don’t know. But we shouldn’t go in.”

He looked back at the entrance. Just inside, where the sunlight reached, stood a stone stele, tall, narrow, and carved with lines of symbols arranged like verses. The light made the carvings glow faintly, as if the stone itself breathed.

“It looks like writing,” David said.

Renate’s voice was low. “It feels wrong.”

David studied her face. She wasn’t afraid of caves. She wasn’t afraid of anything he had seen on the island. But now her eyes were fixed on the stele, and her shoulders were tight.

“Okay,” he said. “We don’t go in.”

She let out a breath she had been holding. “Thank you.”

They turned back. The path felt different now, quieter, as if the forest listened.

When they reached the waterfall clearing, the sound of the falling water filled the air again, bright and alive. Renate went straight to the edge of the pool and knelt to pick up more colored stones.

David watched her. The mist from the falls drifted across her skin. She brushed her hair back, and the sun caught her shoulder.

For a moment, just a moment, he saw the rose‑vine tattoo there glow faintly, a soft pulse of light under the skin.

He blinked. The glow was gone.

Renate didn’t notice. She was sorting stones by color, humming softly.

David looked at her shoulder again. Nothing.

He told himself it was the light. The mist. The sun. Anything but what it looked like.

He picked up a stone and put it in the bag.

“Find any good ones?” he asked.

She smiled. “Plenty.”

He smiled back, but the image of the faint glow stayed with him, quiet and persistent, like a memory the island wasn’t ready to explain.

15 responses to “The Island 13”

  1. Hm. The mysterious stele with the strange hieroglyphs.
    And now a glowing rose tattoo on Renate’s shoulder.
    Things are getting curiouser and curiouser.

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    1. Great comment Chris. Right when you think everything is about as lovely and routine as it gets, you find a cave and island caves are famous for having all kinds of things mostly related to pirates and aliens.

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      1. They are famous for such things.

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        1. I guess we will find out if it’s pirates or aliens later.

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          1. Or maybe both.
            Jerry Bruckheimer meets Stephen Spielberg on a tropical island.

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            1. Waaaa Haaaa haaaaa! That would be a wild story.

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  2. Oh, I’m deeply intrigued and eager to know if there’s trouble afoot on our island. 🏝️ A wonder u-turn, Dan. Life’s getting pretty exciting !!

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    1. I honestly have no idea how or why this popped up, but, I suspect our adventure couple is slowly taking on superpowers that will give us a lot of useful insight into the cosmos. But, more so in our natural world and the mysteries that remain undiscovered.

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  3. Ah, the secrets of the Universe about to be revealed. Or, at least, all your classified military information about aliens!!

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    1. LOL! I thought it’s about time to put all the conspiracy theories away and confess what’s really going on. Monks, who live in caves all over the world, are fighting the war against Satan’s host and losing badly it seems. So, they had to go out and recruit help or give up on their vow of celibacy.

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      1. If there is a force or entity representing evil, such as Satan, then it surely has gained the upper hand lately. I’m open to any wild explanation…such as a particle generated by Cern brought us into a parallel more evil Universe.

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        1. I find the new age scientists who prefer imagination over hard and validated truths, to be quite fun although we won’t be advancing science or humanity with their wild ideas, at least we can be entertained by them. I think we have crossed over into inanimate subconsciousness. This is the part of manifested consciousness that chooses to have sex with a person known to be infected with several STDs and believing statistically, we’ll be okay. Life often slips through the cracks left in a statistical solution. In ancient times, such a person would be simply labeled a dumb ass. No one would care his or her subconscious has turned to stone.

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  4. Oooooh, an intriguing note for the ending. I loved this episode, Daniel.

    It’s not really a writing comparison, more of a vibe of my own reaction — your style in this story puts me in mind of Nathan Lowell’s fantasy and science fiction stories. He gives that level of detail about how things work in the worlds he creates. It somehow both calms me but simultaneously draws me in, and I become interested in everything about the characters and the place. What you’re doing here affects me the same way. Hugs.

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    1. I love that description, Teagan. I always hope parts of the story will pull the reader into a deeper discovery of the psychological and mystical connection the characters are developing with the island. Land and honor among other things were most often fought over in history because the person and the land become bound to each other in a generational stewardship where life’s energy returns life’s sustenance.

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