The Island 14

Codex from The Order of the Rose

“When the island remembers you, the choice is already made. The wise fear this, for memory is the first summons of destiny. And the Rose wakes only for those it has claimed.”

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They walked back from the waterfall with a bag of colored stones each. The sun was lower now, warm on their backs, and the sound of the falls faded behind the trees. Renate didn’t speak for a long time. David let the silence stretch. He knew her silences. They were never empty.

When they reached the hut, she set the bag down and sat on the bench he had built. She looked at her hands for a moment, then at the trees.

“David,” she said. “Something’s changing.”

He sat beside her. “Because of the cave?”

She nodded. “It wasn’t just fear. It was recognition. Like I’d seen something like that before, but not with my eyes.”

David waited.

Renate touched her shoulder lightly, where the rose‑vine tattoo lay hidden beneath her shirt. “I don’t want it to wake up again.”

He felt a tightness in his chest. “Renate.”

“It took years to quiet it,” she said. “Years. And I thought coming here would keep it asleep. I thought the island was far enough from everything.”

David looked at her. “You think the island is waking it?”

She didn’t answer right away. She looked toward the stream, toward the direction of the cave. “I think the island remembers things. Old things. And I think it knows me. Not as a person, but something ancient, unexplainable.”

David felt the memory of the faint glow he had seen at the waterfall. The soft pulse under her skin. He had told himself it was the light. The mist. Anything else. But now, he wasn’t sure.

“Renate,” he said quietly, “what if it’s not something to fear?”

She shook her head. “You don’t understand. The Order of the Rose, it doesn’t wake without reason. And when it does, it asks things of people. Hard things.”

David looked at her with concern. The way the evening light touched her face. The way her eyes held both strength and something like sorrow.

“I trust you,” he said. “If you say we shouldn’t go into that cave, we won’t.”

She breathed out slowly. “Thank you.”

He put his hand over hers. “But Renate… I think it’s already begun.”

She looked at him sharply. “What do you mean?”

He hesitated. Then he shook his head. “It’s nothing. Just a feeling.”

He wasn’t ready to tell her what he had seen. Not yet. Not until he understood it himself.

Renate leaned against him, her head on his shoulder. “I don’t want destiny,” she said softly. “I just want peace.”

David wrapped his arm around her. “Maybe peace isn’t the end of the story. Maybe it’s the beginning.”

She closed her eyes. “I don’t want the Order of the Rose to choose for me.”

David looked toward the trees, toward the hidden path that led to the carved cave mouth. The island felt different now. It almost seemed to be alive, conscious, and directing things in the simplest ways to their advantage. As if it had been waiting for them long before they arrived.

He thought of the Order of the Rose, of the old teachings in the Codex they had studied together, of the way destiny never came as a command but as a quiet turning, a subtle shift in the weave.

He held her closer.

“Whatever comes,” he said, “we face it together.”

Renate didn’t answer, but her hand tightened around his.

The evening wind moved through the trees, carrying the faint scent of river stone and something older, something that felt like familiarity or recognition.

16 responses to “The Island 14”

  1. The cave, the Order of the Rose and the rose-vine tattoo on Renate – all coming together in a mysterious and intriguing fashion.

    What started out as a seemingly romantic love story is starting to have a tinge of horror to it.

    Talk of the island remembering old things reminds me of H.P. Lovecraft’s Cthulhu whom Lovecraft described as one of the Great Old Ones.

    Cthulhu was supposed to inhabit R’lyeh a deep underwater city in the South Pacific.

    Perhaps this island is close to that.

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    1. Mystery upon mystery, it seems. R’lyeh is just about 1 mile off the south shore of the Island. I wonder if Cthulhu is still kicking around or did the Kraken eat him?

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      1. That’s an excellent question.
        Did Cthulhu run to be governor of a state, lost and then told the press, “You won’t have Cthulhu to kick around anymore.” ?

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        1. Most likely he ran as a MAGA candidate in Oregon and was tarred, feathered, and run out of town.

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          1. That is most likely what happened 😂

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              1. They kicked and tomatoed his butt.

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  2. Great Chapter! It feels like the end? Just a gut. Take good care.

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    1. It’s just the beginning of a long happy ending, M. 😁

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  3. Oooh, now it’s getting good. All woo woo! I love woo-woo! It will to reveal me much of your mind! I don’t see evil, btw. I see good! Benevolence. The Order of the Rose can see what’s coming is forcing you to turn! The only fear is of the unknown!

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    1. You’ve read it right, George. Sometimes being a Chosen One comes with burdens, but it’s a deserted island paradise, so evil and suffering is very unlikely. Although, dealing with cosmic plasmoid beings can be a bit unnerving.

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  4. Oh, intriguing and a little eerie! Is there an ancient spirit dwelling in the cave… has Renate been to the island before and … well, I let you figure it out. Suddenly, I’m a little afraid all’s not what it appears to be. Good one , Dan.

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    1. There is definitely an ancient spirit dwelling in the cave. I think he’s related to the Wizard of Oz. Well, we all know what happened to Dorothy. Yes, this is a bit spooky and the underground part of the cave is not what we see above ground at all. I’ve got to figure out how our intrepid couple feel about the island now that they know it’s’ a portal to another dimension. Hmmmm…Niburu may not be a long flight after all. NO worries. They have lots of happy flower and pear wine. What could go wrong?

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      1. I wasn’t expecting that… they must stay and experience this , this is their island. After all. 🚬🚬

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        1. That’s really it. The cave part is just saying hi to the hermit landlord and then they get to keep the goats and everything else they find.

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