The Island 9

What we make, the island remembers;

what we love, it makes again through us.

— Old island proverb

MS Copilot AI generated image by the author

The grove had become a place of quiet work and comfort. Renate and David sat in the shade near the rock pile, the air heavy with the smell of earth and leaves. The trees formed a circle around them, their branches offering abundant shade, moving gently in the breeze

The barrels were lined up neatly, small and solid, their wood dark with age. The tools lay spread out on a canvas sheet. David worked with steady hands, cleaning and sharpening the blades. The rasp of metal against stone was slow and rhythmic.

Renate sat nearby, opening the barrels one by one. She worked carefully, easing the lids off and checking the contents. The grains were dry and clean, the seeds still firm.

“They’re good,” she said. “Better than I expected.”

David looked up. “After all this time?”

She nodded. “The cave kept them dry. Whoever built it knew what they were doing.”

He wiped the blade of a hoe and set it aside. “Gunpowder’s still good, too. I tested a pinch.”

Renate smiled faintly. “You would.”

He grinned. “Couldn’t resist.”

She opened more barrels and peered inside. “Seeds. Wheat, corn, beans. Enough to plant a field.”

David leaned back against a tree. “We’ll need to test the soil first.”

Renate nodded. “Near the orchard’s a start. If we find the old garden, maybe the ground’s still good.”

They worked quietly for a while. The grove was peaceful now that they had cleared the overgrowth. The sunlight filtered through the leaves, and the air was cool in the shade.

When the tools were cleaned and the barrels checked, they stopped for lunch. Renate spread a cloth on the ground and set out bread, cold cuts from the boat, and water.

David looked around the grove. “I like this place.”

Renate followed his gaze. “It feels safe.”

He nodded. “The hedge helps. We’ll leave it. Just fix the gate.”

“The goats love this place too,” she said.

David looked up “They’re safer here than anywhere else.”

They ate slowly, the quiet between them easy. The sound of the forest was soft—birds, insects, the faint rustle of leaves.

After lunch, David stood and stretched. “We’ll clean the cave next,” he said.

Renate gathered the cloth. “It’ll make a good cellar.”

He nodded. “Cool, dry, solid. Perfect for storage.”

“And shelter,” she said. “If the weather turns bad.”

They walked back to the mound and began clearing the entrance. The air inside was cool and still. They swept the floor, moved the barrels to one side, and stacked the tools neatly. The stone walls were firm, the ceiling solid.

David looked around. “It’ll do.”

Renate smiled. “Better than most root cellars.”

By late afternoon, the work was done. The cave looked clean and orderly, with the barrels stacked and the tools arranged.

David wiped his hands. “Let’s go look for clay at the creek.”

Renate nodded. “I can’t wait to try making some pottery.”

They followed the path through the trees, the air growing damp and cool. The creek ran clear and slow, its banks lined with reeds and ferns. David knelt and dug into the bank at the edge of the water with his knife.

“Good texture,” he said. “Fine grain.”

Renate crouched beside him. “It’ll work?”

He nodded. “For jars, pots, maybe tiles.”

She smiled. “Then we’ll make some.”

They filled a small sack with clay and washed their hands in the creek. The water was cold and clean.

The sun was low when they started back. The forest was quiet except for the sound of their steps and the distant call of birds.

At the hut, the air was warm again. The roof caught the last light of the day. David set down the sack of clay under the hut and looked toward the sea.

Renate went inside and lit the lantern. The glow filled the hut, soft and golden-hued.

David followed her in. “We did good work today.”

She smiled. “We got a lot done and it doesn’t feel like work.”

They ate a simple dinner and talked about the garden they would plant. The orchard, the seeds, the soil. Later, they bathed each other outside, unashamed or worried about their nakedness. With the sun down, the offshore breeze was refreshing on their wet skin. They went inside and didn’t bother to dress.

When the lantern burned low, they lay down on the bed they had built. The air was still, the sound of the sea faint in the distance.

Renate turned toward him. “Tomorrow we start again.”

David nodded. “Tomorrow is going to be another great day.”

They fell asleep like that, tired and content, Renate nestled in David’s arms, the island around them dark and quiet.

51 responses to “The Island 9”

  1. A great day of working on the island 🙂

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    1. Things are moving right along. I do think that to realize their plans, they are going to need some migrant workers. Maybe some unemployed pirates would do. Hmmm. On second thought. No to the pirates.

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      1. Yes, a definite no to the pirates 🏴‍☠️.

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        1. They are always trying to raid your booty. It just never ends. Kinda like two neighboring governments we know.

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            1. 😂🏴‍☠️🍅

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  2. Tomorrow is a new adventure

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    1. Indeed it is.

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  3. Well written…

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    1. Thank you, Vipin! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

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  4. I love the peaceful serene atmosphere and path that this story is taking , it’s like a taking a deep breath, as though the tensions and anxieties of the world do not exist. Such a beautiful place and story, Dan. 🌷

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    1. We did it! We made it to the island. I’m placing little hints here and there that R & D are slowly adapting to the rhythm of the island and shedding the angst of the chaotic world. They are accepting of what the island offers them, and more and more thinking of the island as their home and living their dream.

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      1. This story makes one want to pack up ( lightly ) and take to the skies searching for that peaceful and simple life. The hard work is worth it in the end. Just beautiful!

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        1. I’ve written ahead a few chapters to keep things rolling. But it’s mainly a recreation of our many conversations. Naturally they would focus on getting established first, then the exploration starts, the beauty unfolds, and the island gifts them in a way they can grow in a field of wonder and live in gratitude for all it provides. Renate and David may impart some wisdom to us thru their experiences. I’m down to see it all unfold.

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          1. I’m definitely down to follow our couple as they build a life on the island. They seem to have lost their desire to travel to the corners of the world. It will be interesting to see how island life evolves.

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            1. I actually don’t have a start to finish idea of the story, it’s like I’m following along and in keeping with their high standards, I just imagine how they have invested fully in this part of their lives. Johan and Helle are still out there somewhere and Mia has the Paris apartment well taken care of. So, there is nothing keeping them from fully immersing themselves in a world where they run the show the way they want to instead of being guests. NO scary lizards, pirates, or evil spirits, just a beautiful paradise yet to be fully discovered.

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              1. Not even one scary lizard? 🦎

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                1. Nope. No scary lizards, or vampire mermaids. No snakes or human eating vegetation. BUT, and this is a big ole but, there is endless mystery on this ancient island. And David loves a good mystery, so Renate will have to keep an eye on him, unless he wanders off alone into the jungle.

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                  1. That’s a strong possibility after a few pear wines. 🍐🧋

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                    1. LOL 😂. inspired story forming 🙈

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                    2. Is he going to wander off in a pear wine haze in the middle of the night to skinny dip in the water fall? That David… Renata’s in his trail. 🫣🏃‍♀️

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                    3. That is exactly what happens. Renate is going to dunk him for wandering off without her. A Wet towel snap to the behind should bring him back to his senses.

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                    4. She knows how to handle him when he goes off the rails. 🤭

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                    5. Men that have a watchful woman in their life tend to live longer and take less risks in heavy traffic or while using large power tools. Speaking of that, I just finished chapter 31 of the Island offline. It went deep into a twist and then climbed back out again. You just can’t live on a paradise island without going whole hog philosophical about nature and the secrets of caves. After they finished building their bathroom addition will all the amenities, life settled down. The conflict is going total tribal or holding on a bit to civilization. They solved the riddle by splitting the difference.

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  5. How can they not sleep peacefully after a good, proper day of work for the betterment of their new home? Lovely without being saccharine.

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    1. That’s the best sleep, when you had a full, exciting, and productive day. This is where we see the them easing into feeling safe and secure on the island and they are dropping their guard and embracing the island vibe. Shedding the subconscious outer shells of urban life is a very liberating feeling.

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      1. That it is. I love that feeling of having had a physical and productive day and falling into slumber easily. I love that they are feeling so free.

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        1. As a matter of fact, I’m experiencing that right now. After a big day at the gym, I’m ready for a nice afternoon nap. I’m hoping no one notices my yard needs mowing. 😴

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          1. Funny you should say that. I was just chatting with to co-workers and thanked them for keeping me too late to do mine! It looks like rain and frankly, I am not down with getting caught in it!

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            1. I feel you, Dale. I do not like getting soaked and then getting in the car to go home. My car doesn’t complain about it, but I just don’t want to disrespect that nice dry interior.

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              1. Exactly!!

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  6. I could see all of this so clearly as I read, Daniel. Beautifully done. Hugs.

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    1. Thank you, Teagan. You patiently and politely waded through my earliest writings. I had no idea what a dangling participle or plot was. But, you gave me good advice and encouraged me to continue. I am grateful to have you to continue on this journey. Hopefully, there have been improvements since the old days. Big ole Cyber hugs back at you. 🤗

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      1. I blush. ^^’ You are far too kind. I’m honored to be part of your journey, even if in a small way. By the way, I thought those stories were marvelous.

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        1. What I mean to say is that I didn’t see the need for improvement then or now. Your writing was always and still is terrific.

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          1. You are very kind and I might say, I’ve had some terrific and kind examples to follow. Like yourself, there is a tremendous amount of talent out there willing to help. Oh, I finally retired about three years ago and disappeared for a little while. Then I realized I had much more time on my hands to do fun things and sneaked back in the WP community.

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        2. Now, I blush. At my very core, I am a tell don’t show correspondent for my inner campfire story teller. But, I’m learning to do other things too.

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  7. You … well, Renate and David are building an earned paradise.

    Hard work and some good luck can be fruitious. Hard work on its own can or not be enough. Circumstance prevails.

    I, like most, want all humanity to share in versions of this.

    I find it inexplicable that some do not want that. They would only want for themselves and possibly their own… the ones that stayed in line. They look to take all they can, no matter the cost to others.

    This was made very clear yesterday, today and I have small hope for tomorrow.

    But I do have hope.

    Keep writing, Dan! I’m liking this a lot.

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    1. I do see the same and it’s sad. Too sad. I genuinely see the world clearly as it is, not as our ideologies and politics now constrain and alienate us, but as it truly exists and it is an overwhelming high tide of darkness washing over us. We are a highly adaptable species and we are adapted to the darkness we bring. In the 3000 years of conflict and suffering on the planet, we also created stunning works of art, music, literature, architecture, philosophy, and social achievement. There is the light we crave. There is the respite we need. That is the torch we must carry forward.

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      1. I carry the cultural torch of the arts.

        It has made my life wonderful! xx

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        1. You do Resa, and you do it so well. You remain an inspiration to all us wee folk in the hinterland where mental dwarfs rule with a rusted iron fist.

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          1. LOL!
            The larger cousins to the hinterland dwarfs rule the city. That’s why I walk the alleys. They can’t find me.

            And you can spot them in the art gallery, as they don’t really admire the art, they talk value in $$$.

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            1. Yes, hidden in plain sight is a stealth tactic that works well. I’m familiar with this who buy art and have no clue what they bought. It’s an excellent way to move large sums of money via the value of the piece, across the globe. It’s a very interesting underground trade. There is a buyer in location and another buyer in location B. In between are all the thieves that try to find these in transit pieces. It’s a global economy that pays very well for the buyers and sellers and of course profit margins are high for the thieves too. Surprisingly, major museums are big players as well. Of course, everyone knows this except the detectives on the lookout.

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              1. Wow… this is all news to me!
                However, it makes sense. After all it doesn’t work to launder money in a washing machine. (I think I’m funny 😂)

                I’d like to see them launder street art.
                Although, if they want, I have a lot of laundry art for sale! It’s all amateur, no one knows who I am…so come-on crooks, buy my art, clean your $$$ & make me famous!

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                1. I have a family story that is intriguing. My grand parents traveled the world pre-WWII and collected amazing art and furniture pieces in Europe for next to nothing. Europe was not thriving and the art trade was booming in Europe as a means to survive. Many of her collected pieces were considered priceless world treasures. When my grand parents were gone, my father inherited it all. He grew up with all of this stuff and cared absolutely nothing at all about it. Strangely, after my mother passed, he met a woman of great interest quite by happenstance. They married and it became known she was an art dealer. My dad came home from a business trip shortly after to an empty house. Everything of value was gone. Months later investigators found out she had met an untimely death in an unlikely spot and yes, everything was gone. It was never recovered. One little statue by Michelangelo, from Florence Italy was the miniature made to use as a scale for the actual full scale works of the 12 Apostles. Two sets of the models were finished but Michelangelo never started the full sized statues for the Florence Cathedral. I know where the other set is, but our 1 of 12 was the only one known to exist for the second set. Now, it is sitting somewhere in a private collection owned by someone who knew never to ask questions. A priest sold the statue to feed his sheep, It stayed in our family for about 85 years. Then, a sophisticated thief lost her life to the trade to avoid paying her the price she asked. From there, no one knows. Born around 1503, the statue is still alive and hiding. Art has a life of its own and sometimes the pinnacle of humanity’s accomplishments fall into a darkness of our worst nature. The art itself, is never diminished, only those who seek to covet it at any cost.

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                  1. WOW!!!
                    Yes, most intriguing.
                    Thank you, Dan! xx

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                    1. I live a normal boring life, but as a child my grandmother told me the magnificent history of everything in her house. I felt connected to the artifact and the story through her. I held Michelangelos works in my hands as she described in colorful detail how this little statue came to be. I believe some things were never meant to be possessed but enjoyed as a symbol of what we can become if we try.

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  8. Quite the Love-fest you’ve got happening here.

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    1. Well, since real life affords no love to no one, I gotta make it up. It’s so much nicer in prose and poetry.

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      1. Yes, life never matches the fantasy we have of love portrayed in movies, films, books and stories such as this…so we grow weary and disappointed quickly.

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        1. My secret is to never ever leave the holodeck. If there is ever a power failure, I’m in for a rough time.

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