The Island 10

“When the island opens its heart, the seekers shall enter. Those who carry light will find shadow, and those who bear shadow will awaken the flame.” — From The Whispering Stone Codex

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Renate and David worked near the bank, stacking stones in a circle. The air smelled of salty sweat on cotton, wet clay, and flinty stone.

David lifted another stone and set it in place in a bed of wet clay. “We’ll need it tight,” he said. “No gaps.”

Renate nodded. “The heat will escape otherwise.”

They worked quietly, the rhythm of their labor steady. The kiln took shape—low, wide, and solid. The clay they had gathered from the creek bank was thick and fine. Renate mixed it with water in a wooden trough, her hands moving slowly through the mud.

David watched her. “We’ll need a throw table,” he said.

She looked up. “For shaping?”

He nodded. “Something that spins smoothly. I can rig a wheel with the old bearings from the boat.”

Renate smiled. “And tools for cutting and inscribing.”

“I’ll make them from the scrap metal we found,” he said. “We have enough.”

She spread the clay along the stones. “We’ll need glaze too,” she said. “Something to make color.”

David scratched his head. “We don’t have much for that.”

Renate looked toward the grove. “Maybe something in the old casks.”

He frowned. “You think so?”

“There were unopened ones,” she said. “We never checked them all.”

David wiped his hands on his shorts. “Let’s look.”

They walked through the trees, the air cool under the canopy. The grove was quiet except for the rustling canopy of leaves. The rock mound stood as it always had, solid and still.

Renate knelt beside the stacked barrels. “These,” she said. “The small ones.”

David pried the lids off one by one with his knife until he came to one that was quite heavy. Inside were cloth bags filled with coins. He opened another bag.

Renate leaned close. “What is it?”

He smiled faintly. “Gold.”

She blinked. “Gold?”

He lifted a handful of coins. They were heavy and dull with age, stamped with Spanish markings. Beneath them were small ingots of gold and silver, wrapped in oilcloth.

Renate held one. “It’s beautiful.”

David nodded. “Payment for soldiers, maybe. Or trade.”

She looked at the coins. “We don’t want to melt these for glaze.”

He thought for a moment. “Gold and silver would make interesting jewelry. We can use this for trade on the other islands if we need to. Other than that, I have no idea what we need all this gold and silver for.”

Renate smiled. “It’s so strange to find all of that treasure and we can’t think of much to do with it.”

They sat in the dimly lit cave, the cask open beside them. The coins gleamed faintly in the filtered light.

David turned one over in his hand. “Strange to think of soldiers here,” he said.

Renate nodded. “They must have lived well for a time.”

He looked toward the mound. “And left it all behind.”

She smiled softly. “For us, no doubt.”

They placed the small cask of coins and ingots back behind the others and returned to the kiln site without finding anything usable for glaze. The creek shimmered in the afternoon light. David sat down beside the stones.

Renate mixed more clay, her hands moving with purpose. “We’ll finish the kiln today,” she said.

David nodded. “Then test it tomorrow.”

They worked until the sun dropped low. The kiln stood firm, its walls smooth and solid. The clay would dry in the heat, turning pale and hard.

Renate wiped her hands. “It’s good,” she said.

David looked at it. “It’ll hold.”

They sat on the creek bank, tired but content. The air was cool now, and the sound of the water was mesmerizing.

Renate looked at the kiln. “We’ll make cups first,” she said. “Then jars.”

David smiled. “And tiles for the hearth.”

She nodded. “And maybe a vase.”

He laughed softly. “You always think ahead.”

She smiled. “Someone has to.”

The light faded, and the first stars came out. The kiln stood silent beside the creek, waiting.

David looked at the sky. “We’ve done well,” he said.

Renate leaned against him. “We have.”

They sat like that for a long time, the sound of the creek and the whisper of the trees around them. The island was quiet, the air full of promise.

“Tomorrow, we can fire the kiln and see if it works,” David said. That night, they rested, the gold and silver safe in its fortress of stones, the future waiting in the glow of the setting sun.

38 responses to “The Island 10”

  1. You’ve a fine talent for weaving engaging stories.
    My attention span is very…dynamic, to say the least, but every time I read one of these, it forces me to slow down a bit and enjoy what’s in front of me 🙂

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    1. Thank you Shruti, This is exactly what I hope for. I try to keep the scene moving and the text light. It gets a bit more heavy soon and the twists and turns start happening. However. Out of mercy, the scenes are short. Slowing down and enjoying what’s in front of you is exactly the island living vibe I’m trying to create. I mean, who gets in a rush on a paradise island unless maybe a seagull steals one’s sandwich.

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  2. David and Renate are certainly doing a lot of work.
    Building a kern.
    Finding Spanish gold and silver coins.
    The island seems to be full of mysteries and secrets.
    And they’re slowly being unveiled.
    One chapter at a time in your story.

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    1. We go full tilt gonzo soon but it’s mainly because some of the island berries can send you on a trip you didn’t intend to take. Never eat anything the goat won’t eat, I always say.

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      1. That’s very wise advice, Daniel.

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        1. I have lots of Goat witticisms and ancient goat knowledge. They have been trying to elevate the human race for eternity but we are just too butt headed to listen to them.

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  3. Gold and silver, oh my! Wonder what they will bake first?

    They are quite industrious, aren’t they?

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    1. They are very industrious. I had to include Spanish treasure on an island that needs no currency. They are going to figure out how to make glaze and that is going to start them on a little side trip even Jerry Garcia of The Grateful Dead couldn’t imagine. Side trips are where all the fun is.

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      1. Of course you did! It makes the treasure they have found all the more legit. Side trips can be something else.

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        1. I’m pretty sure I ruined the story, but it’s okay, rewrites are normal.

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          1. Nah…..

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            1. LOL! 😅. We’ll blame it on an exceptional batch of pear wine.

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              1. Hahahaha!

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  4. Soon, they’ll consume the island berries and the Truth will be revealed! To quote Terence McKenna; “The mushroom told me…”

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    1. Yes, I just finished chapter 31 off line and it took 10 chapters to get through the red berry blight and back into a pragmatic island life. During the psychological upheaval, they built a bathroom hut with all the conveniences. No more squatting beneath the banana tree and washing in the cold stream. Although after a while, it just seems natural.

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  5. It never hurts to have a bit of gold and silver on hand should the need arise . I love this beautiful story , Dan.

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    1. I thought, having a big pile of treasure would add to the ambience of the island. When they get back to civilization, their tax bill is going to be sky high, so the extra loot will help. I am so pleased you like it. This story has flowed easily since I started it. I do hope to remain True to Renate and David’s world and history.

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      1. If they get back to civilization mums the word on the gold. They might need to go on a few shopping sprees and get back home 🏝️as soon as possible. 🏃🏃‍♀️

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        1. LOL! 😅. When they head back home, if anyone knows they have gold and silver on them, the pirates will chase them all the way back to Paris. We can’t have that.

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          1. The pirates don’t stand a chance against these two. They can get acquainted over some pear wine.

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            1. Pear wine should be the international symbol of goodwill and prosperity. 🥂🕊️

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              1. All one needs a couple of mature ( no silliness) pear trees and Bell jars. 🫙 life is good. 😌

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                1. Pear Wine is mighty fine they say, but when you make it yourself, it’s a whole new way of life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness.

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                  1. The key to peace and harmony

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                    1. Hmmmm, I wonder if the GOO and his Cabal drinks wine. An enterprising Casa Loco sommelier could introduce pear wine and some philosophical witticisms and we might see a miracle. Nah… but at least the tone might mellow a little.

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                    2. I’m afraid I can’t trust them with our pear wine. They might claim ownership and go public with it. 🍐🥂

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                    3. OH Geez, you are right. That would happen with not a microsecond consideration about ethics.

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                    4. Ethics is passe on the WH

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                    5. I remember the good ole days when everyone was a crook but they kept it under wraps so we could live in peace knowing our government was watching out for us. Then they got lazy and don’t even care what we think. Now, enterprising journalists that know how to query AI to get the scoop ask, “Sir, what are you going to do about this heinous crime?” To which they reply, “Oh that’s no big deal. Fake news. Everything’s fine. Your grocery bill will go down next week.” One of the biggest scandals internal to the government that caused two yers of serious disruption was a senior executive attended a defense contractor sponsored symposium and the guy posted a picture from a penthouse hotel room in a bathtub. No shirt on obviously. That wasn’t what had everyone upset. There were two large glasses of wine perched on the edge of the tub. Apparently, everyone got the impression someone was there with him playing submarine and the gov went nuts. Now, we bomb the heck out of a third world terrorist country and they take a heck of a beating and come out and whoop our ass, knocking the GOOS boxing shorts and shoes right off of him. If this were a comedy show, I’d pay to watch. Unfortunately, it’s not a comedy show. It’s the very best we have to offer.

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                    6. It’s coming as a shock to the US that we are caught between a rock and a hard place. How can this happen to America? It can happen by appointing incompetent blowhards into powerful positions and counting on them for advice.

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                    7. That is the best answer I’ve read so far. You can’t get size 10 thoughts from a size 5 mind. Knowing this, we fill the ranks with size 3 minds. Who would have ever thought the right to vote could be an existential threat to the nation. Should we outsource voting?

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                    8. Will we have a choice.

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                    9. Surely “they” will want us to think we had a choice even if the choice was their intent all along.

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                    10. Yes, hope we aren’t that brainwashed 🤔

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  6. Love that there is nothing to buy with the gold, and that it may reveal something about this mystery island.

    I’m not a potter, or clay artisan, but can gold be used for glaze?

    Thanks Dan!

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    1. I do think our resident sleuths will wonder if this was a French Garrison, why the Spanish gold? Could it be, they found it somewhere on the island? Gold could be used to decorate their pottery and spice up the hut a little. All those lovely colored pebbles they are picking up are probably semi-precious gemstones. They really have the makings for some fine pottery.

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      1. Gee, I could use to pick up some of those pebbles!
        Look forward to 11!

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        1. Me too! When I write these things it seems like every stream should be full of gemstones. 11 is now live and the stream is full of gemstones which they plan to crush for glaze. Gold by the sack full and gemstones lying around aplenty. I do believe they found paradise.

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