The Island 2

There was the black solitude of the islands,
and there, woman of love, your arms took me in. -Pablo Neruda

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The sea was calm when they rounded the island. The sun had gone down behind it, leaving a faint red smear across the horizon. The wind was soft, steady from the west. The boat moved easily, the sails stowed, and the engine putt-putted along.

Renate pointed ahead. β€œThere,” she said. β€œThat break in the cliffs.”

David nodded. β€œLooks like a natural harbor.”

They turned toward it. The water deepened, dark and smooth. The cliffs rose high on both sides, sheltering the cove from the wind. When they dropped anchor, the world went still except for the sound of small waves from the sailboat rebounding from the sheer cliffs and tapping the hull.

Renate poured the last of the pear wine. β€œWe could stay here awhile,” she said.

David looked at the island. β€œIf there’s fresh water.”

β€œMaybe more,” she said. β€œWood. Goats. Something to eat.”

He smiled. β€œYou planning to start a colony?”

β€œMaybe just a hut,” she said. β€œA garden. A place to come back to.”

They finished the wine and went up on deck one last time before turning in for the night. The stars were coming out, sharp and cold above the dark cliffs. The hidden bay smelled of salt, flinty stone, and wild grass filtering down from the cliffs.

Morning came clear and bright. The breakers outside the harbor looked silver. They rowed ashore with a small pack and a canvas bag for anything useful they might find.

Renate stepped onto the sand first. β€œFeels good,” she said.

David followed. β€œUntouched.”

They walked inland. The ground rose gently, covered in scrub and low trees. Birds moved through the branches. The air was heavy with the scent of earth and salt.

They found a stream running down from the hills. Renate knelt and cupped the water in her hands. β€œSweet,” she said.

David drank beside her. β€œThat’s one good thing to find right away.”

Farther up, they found a stand of straight treesβ€”good for poles. Beyond that, a clearing with soft soil. Renate pressed her fingers into it. β€œWe could plant here.”

He looked around. β€œWe’d need fencing.”

β€œGoats,” she said. β€œI saw tracks near the ridge.”

β€œWild?”

β€œProbably.”

He smiled. β€œYou think you can tame them?”

She stood, brushing dirt from her knees. β€œI can try.”

They spent the day marking the clearing, cutting small branches, and gathering driftwood from the shore. The sun burned high, and the sea shimmered beyond the trees. When they stopped to rest, Renate leaned against a rock and closed her eyes.

David watched her. β€œYou look like you belong here.”

She opened one eye. β€œMaybe I do.”

He said, β€œWe could stay.”

She smiled faintly. β€œWe always say that.”

He shrugged. β€œMaybe this time we mean it.”

By late afternoon, the tide had turned. Renate and David made their way back to the dinghy and motored out to the sailboat. The cliffs glowed red in the dying light. The island was quiet except for the wind moving through the trees.

Renate climbed aboard first. β€œI’m sore,” she said.

David laughed. β€œYou worked harder than I did.”

β€œYou always say that,” she said.

He poured fresh water into two cups. They sat in the cabin, listening to the slow slap of waves against the hull. The air smelled of salt and pine from the island.

Renate looked out the window. β€œIt’s beautiful,” she said.

David nodded. β€œIt’s ours, for now.”

They sat in silence for a while, resting. The forest whispered beyond the cliffs. The sea moved gently under them, steady and endless.

Renate said, β€œTomorrow we start the hut.”

David said, β€œTomorrow.”

She leaned her head on his shoulder. β€œAnd maybe catch a goat.”

He smiled. β€œIf it lets us.”

She laughed softly. β€œIt will.”

Outside, the stars came out again. The boat rocked in the quiet harbor, and the sound of the sea reverberating off the cliffs and forest air filled the night.

81 responses to “The Island 2”

  1. This island the way you describe it sounds like a true idyllic paradise, Daniel.

    Maybe I should set sail to find such an island 🏝️ in the South Seas before Marx Blarney succeeds in turning Canada into the USSR 2.0

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    1. I’m hoping it turns out to be a story of a true idyllic paradise. As you know, I don’t limit myself in my reading and so I shamelessly admit to reading Treasure Island, Robinson Crusoe, and Swiss Family Robinson as a youngster. The need to escape the fallen world has urged me to write the paradise story I’d like to live in short vignettes with the underlying literary tones of Canadian Maple Syrup aged in used bourbon barrels as well as the heavenly paradisical inferences one gets from drinking bottles of pear wine. I’ve seen reports of Marx Blarney bleeding Calgary of its tax revenue to enrich the people of Ottawa. Wealth redistribution is a favorite political policy in Ottawa and in Calgary, not so much. Perhaps Calgary will relocate to an island they own and become a sovereign nation for themselves. Hmmmm, maybe they could build a border wall and prevent politicians from invading.

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      1. An excellent idea for any nation, Daniel.

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        1. WE may have just saved the world and island life is going to start a new housing boom.

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          1. It looks that way.

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            1. Grab Sherry and we’ll rent a sailboat.

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              1. An excellent idea.

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      2. Any paradise exceeds reality right now…which is a big Debbie downer.

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        1. Agreed. Debbie Downer has been cloned and through the help of male anthropomorphic AI agents based on the John Holmes model, is able to replicate little Debbie Downers as a result of transhumanist advancements. Soon, they will be everywhere like mice rapaciously feeding on our joy.

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  2. An excellent idea.

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    1. With Sherry along, we’ll eat well and enjoy some immortal mushroom soup. Living eternally on a paradise island might be the ultimate destination.

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      1. Yes, that immortal mushroom soup will be out of this world.

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        1. Osiris will be jealous.

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          1. Especially since he has a wooden phallus.

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            1. It just occurred to me where the saying, β€œmorning wood,” came from. Osiris.

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              1. And where the saying β€œKnock on wood” came from.
                The goddess Isis.

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                1. The world is finally making sense.

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                  1. For the first time in a long time.

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                    1. Hopefully we are now enlightened. Knock on wood!

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                    2. A gay tree lover’s dream.

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                    3. True, it is important to have a job you love.

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                    4. Gives a whole new meaning to the term β€œtree huggers” used to describe certain people during the 4 years I lived in British Columbia.

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                    5. I do remember tree activists who bedeviled the lumberjacks by chaining themselves to trees, spiking the trees, and climbing up into the trees marked to be cut. A lot of them were injured by falling trees because they forgot to wear their safety helmet.

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                    6. Yes, they were able to climb trees but a lot of them – their own personal mental elevator didn’t quite reach the top floor.

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                    7. And there in lies the problem of climbing to great heights. We used to say you can’t get size 10 thoughts from a size 5 brain and now that the size 3 brain is well established, 10 has been permanently retired.

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  3. They have dreams and wild imaginations, there’s no limit to what they may find here. I do love the enchantments you create. Some kinda magic there.Β 

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    1. I agree. I can’t wait to see how they catch the wild goats and of course, the real magic might show up when they plant the pear orchard.

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      1. The wild birds and animals always flock to wanderers. They sense that they are safe and loved.

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        1. This is very true. Even lions like a good hug and back scratch now and then.

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          1. Lions and tigers πŸ… and ,as you know, Bears are not in my get close list. πŸƒβ€β™€οΈ

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            1. Waaa haaa haaaa! You are always the smartest one in the bunch. Consequently, you probably don’t have any bite marks or claw marks unless the puppers and Mr. B got too happy to see you.

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              1. Maybe a few around the ankles. Mr B doesn’t take prisoners.

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                1. LOL! He is a rascal. Always on the hunt for an unguarded ankle. πŸ˜…πŸˆβ€β¬›

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                  1. He has a foot fetish.

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                    1. It’s a thing to keep him busy between catnip episodes. πŸ˜‚

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                    2. He does like to play get the worm. πŸ› otherwise he gets quite upset.

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                    3. LOL! That’s hilarious. Cats need a lot of play time or they get cranky and dig up all the house plants. πŸ§ΆπŸˆβ€β¬›

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  4. Pear orchards are a priority, how long can they go without pear wine ? Do you love goats as much as I do. So adorable !

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    1. Indeed, morale will drop quickly if Pear wine production is interrupted. I adore goats. They are just like puppy’s only they are good at climbing. Those eyes! My older cousins had goats on the farm and they made a mini buck wagon out of old wood and scrap iron. Then they tied the Billy up to the wagon and raced all over the farm until Billy got tired or hungry. The farm house was high off the ground. We kids could almost stand up under it so it served as our wagon garage. Every time I went over there I looked for the wagon and then went after Billy. Later they had Ostriches and then Alpacas. WE talked a lot about hitching an Ostriche or an Alpaca but they were a little too big for us to wrangle. I’m sure we would have broken the sound barrier if we got that Ostriche hooked up to the wagon.

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      1. She much fun. It’s a pity everyone can’t be a kid on the farm at one time or another. I feel my son really missed out by not having summer fun on the farm. I’m sure the farm hands weren’t as excited about the whole thing.

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        1. I think my early life with farm exposure all the way up to my early 20’s made a huge impact on my life and work ethic. No doubt my parents and grandparents made sure I learned the values and ethics farming requires. I can remember some of the things I was required to do were so hard on me, I doubted myself and my abilities, but their stoic, β€œgotta be done and gotta be done now,” forced me to reach deep and keep going. It turns out, I had tremendous fun and learned a few things about nature and myself along the way.

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  5. Are you writing and posting now on a regular basis?

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    1. HI George, Yes, I thought I’d do this little series until I run out of ideas and then move on to another story. I thought I’d try a Soap Opera approach. One long series of vignettes under 1000 words with no character arc, plot, sub plot or story beats. Just escapism through island life. The sub-sub liminal message is, how to be self reliant and isolate yourself from the Zombie hordes. For instance we’ll have WWIII kick off with chemical, biological, and nuclear attacks on population centers, but the island couple have no idea it’s happening because their little piece of paradise is lovely and quiet.

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  6. Farming is hard work. I wa not involved in that aspect of farmlife as a summer visitor but as a 8 or 9 yr old I begged to pick cotton and was turned down til finally Gramma made a small sack and sent me out. Within the hour the tears started and heading back to the house… those cotton bowls stick like needles. πŸ§‘β€πŸŒΎ

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    1. I love that story, Rene. You wanted to pick cotton and you did. The lessons we learn on the farm have a way of teaching us about life in general and we are better for it.

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      1. I will never forget that , one cannot imagine the pain of being in the hot sun , dragging a huge sack of cotton , fingers so sore. Many farmers have equipment now to do the work , many don’t and that’s where the immigrants come in. 😞

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        1. Anybody I know that picked cotton the old way dragging the sack, did not recommend it to anyone unless they had to. North of Tallahassee along highway 84 from Dothan Alabama cotton is still grown in huge fields. They use the combines and big trailers that create a cotton bundle as big as a tractor trailer. After the harvest, there is enough loose cotton on the road to make yourself all the cotton products you can dream of.

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          1. Thankfully they have amazing equipment to do this hard work now . My grandfather had a huge farm with many crops ., cotton and tobacco for acres and acres. just 8 I remember he r on every early and picked up the field hands and they worked all day except for lunch which my grandmother made. They eventually sold the farm.

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            1. I’m sure the days were long and hard but the rewards were the memories shared, The experience of being tied to the land, and being connected to others that depended on the farm for their vocation. I looked into a large commercial farm near Orlando that was dedicated to renewable resources and green organic farming to study their methods. All of the farm’s produce goes to feed the poor projects managed by charities. I was encouraged that some farms are going back to careful stewardship instead of burning out the land then selling it to developers.

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              1. It’s encouraging that many small companies as well as large farms are donating to charities that help those who are truly suffering during these very difficult times when many can barely keep a roof over their head yet those responsible are intent on building ballrooms and spending billions ( prob trillions) on a war that no one asked for. Oops, I wandered away from the island for a moment.

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                1. LOL! It’s hard not to wander. I’ll post another short Island chapter very soon for you. I have 8 written so I’m ahead of the posting schedule. I’m experimenting again. I’m using a bare bones structure with short paragraphs and quick dialog. I try to keep the visuals and senses engaged. I’ll get reprimanded by the editor readers but this is about making the story simple and a quick read for online. I plan to move it quickly using scenes without filling in the days in between. I’m hoping online readers will like the quicker pace.

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  7. There’s a lot to be learned out there , good and bad and a perspective many will never have the opportunity to experience.

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    1. Absolutely. I consider myself fortunate to have had the experiences I did. It gave me standards that earned me success and unforgettable challenges I was prepared to meet. My heart hurts for those who are transitioning to the cold hard facts of life at a time when positive standards and examples were tossed away.

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      1. Yes, it’s an experience one doesn’t forget and hopefully a good one. I feel very sorry for the farmers out there right now.

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        1. Oh yes, The gov and the oligarchs are trying to take their land and kick them to the curb. It doesn’t help that the climate is always a major challenge to make it through the year with a good crop(s).

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          1. A lot of crops will go to dust due to lack of fertilizer and other nutrients needed to have a decent harvest.

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            1. If the average person living life day to day didn’t see how our lives depend on oil and global markets, we should be getting a hint right now. The strange thing is a global economy is so delicate that changing the variables always has unpredictable results born on the back of those who never consented to it. Who would have drawn the line from Iran to fertilizer on American farms. Yet, it was there all along.

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  8. Idyllic, thank you Dan!

    I’ll be back to see where this all goes.

    Strange, but I find a peace in the alleys here. Just me, urban wildlife, gardens and garages. Okay…garbage cans for the urban wildlife, but still, no people.

    Other than the odd car going through, quiet, peaceful and sometimes art.

    A goat would be nice.

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    1. You do find amazing artwork in the back alleys. I bet taking a pet goat out for a walk would be fun.

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  9. I must now play catch-up! Pear wine – so funny because I visited lovely vineyards in the MontΓ©rΓ©gie area of Quebec, just an hour from Montreal and tasted the most delicious pear wine ever.

    As for your story, this is truly idyllic. Must go to the next chapter.

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    1. Dale, you are only the second person I’ve heard from that has tried pear wine. When it is well finished, it is a delightful and refreshing drink. I do have to exercise a bit of discipline or I’ll be zonked out in the hammock all day. Hope you enjoy the story. It’s a bit easy on the psyche, no monsters or pirates to bedevil our adventurous couple. They are learning to be more self reliant and not limiting themselves.

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      1. I admit I was doubtful until I tasted this particular one! So good.
        Gentle on the psyche is just what we need in today’s way overstimulated world!

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        1. I first tasted pear wine in Korea. It was so delicious I tried it again later but reading the label was a little difficult and I didn’t notice it also had ginseng in it. Well, to my palate it tasted like dirt and pine bark and that didn’t go down so well. I’ve become a better label reader since then. Definitely working hard to decouple from busyness and enjoy less clock and calendar and enjoy more timeless peace and quiet.

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          1. Hahaha! Dirt and pine bark! Yucky!
            Seriously, I was so pleasantly surprised, I bought a bottle. Now, I’m trying to decide on a menu which would include this as a pairing πŸ™‚

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            1. The Koreans serve it as an after dinner drink or with savory and spicy dishes because it helps calm the palate after a bit of spicey red pepper sauce (their favorite) or lingering mouthfeel like oxtail soup. I also thought it gave a nice flavor to fowl with rice dishes. But, this is truly where one’s personal taste can lead to some tasty experiments.

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              1. Mmmm…. So many ideas πŸ™‚

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                1. And, there need not be only one answer.

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                  1. Yes! That’s one of the best things.

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                    1. Even I have no idea what happens next.

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                    2. I love that!

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                    3. I do take notes from comments. That does help drive the story and challenges me to weave ideas into the story.

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                    4. I love that. We get our inspiration from all sorts of sources.

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                    5. I absolutely get inspired by others who help me see the different pathways of doing things from their perspectives. It’s like I have multiple minds available to answer questions when my head elves just draw a blank.

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                    6. One of the great things about blogging.

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                    7. I have greatly improved my inner world by wandering through the WP community. My mother loved to meet with the neighborhood ladies Coffee Klatsch and enjoy a few hours of freedom from her house full of feral children. WP is like that gathering, we just have to make our own coffee.

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                    8. Yes. I completely understand your mother and after watching the series, Blue Zones, I’m thinking we lack community. At least WP is a form of one!

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                    9. It is and it brings lots of creative minds together. Anything could happen.

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                    10. For sure.

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                    11. πŸ˜πŸŒ‹β›΅οΈ

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