The Island 2

There was the black solitude of the islands,
and there, woman of love, your arms took me in. -Pablo Neruda

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The sea was calm when they rounded the island. The sun had gone down behind it, leaving a faint red smear across the horizon. The wind was soft, steady from the west. The boat moved easily, the sails stowed, and the engine putt-putted along.

Renate pointed ahead. “There,” she said. “That break in the cliffs.”

David nodded. “Looks like a natural harbor.”

They turned toward it. The water deepened, dark and smooth. The cliffs rose high on both sides, sheltering the cove from the wind. When they dropped anchor, the world went still except for the sound of small waves from the sailboat rebounding from the sheer cliffs and tapping the hull.

Renate poured the last of the pear wine. “We could stay here awhile,” she said.

David looked at the island. “If there’s fresh water.”

“Maybe more,” she said. “Wood. Goats. Something to eat.”

He smiled. “You planning to start a colony?”

“Maybe just a hut,” she said. “A garden. A place to come back to.”

They finished the wine and went up on deck one last time before turning in for the night. The stars were coming out, sharp and cold above the dark cliffs. The hidden bay smelled of salt, flinty stone, and wild grass filtering down from the cliffs.

Morning came clear and bright. The breakers outside the harbor looked silver. They rowed ashore with a small pack and a canvas bag for anything useful they might find.

Renate stepped onto the sand first. “Feels good,” she said.

David followed. “Untouched.”

They walked inland. The ground rose gently, covered in scrub and low trees. Birds moved through the branches. The air was heavy with the scent of earth and salt.

They found a stream running down from the hills. Renate knelt and cupped the water in her hands. “Sweet,” she said.

David drank beside her. “That’s one good thing to find right away.”

Farther up, they found a stand of straight trees—good for poles. Beyond that, a clearing with soft soil. Renate pressed her fingers into it. “We could plant here.”

He looked around. “We’d need fencing.”

“Goats,” she said. “I saw tracks near the ridge.”

“Wild?”

“Probably.”

He smiled. “You think you can tame them?”

She stood, brushing dirt from her knees. “I can try.”

They spent the day marking the clearing, cutting small branches, and gathering driftwood from the shore. The sun burned high, and the sea shimmered beyond the trees. When they stopped to rest, Renate leaned against a rock and closed her eyes.

David watched her. “You look like you belong here.”

She opened one eye. “Maybe I do.”

He said, “We could stay.”

She smiled faintly. “We always say that.”

He shrugged. “Maybe this time we mean it.”

By late afternoon, the tide had turned. Renate and David made their way back to the dinghy and motored out to the sailboat. The cliffs glowed red in the dying light. The island was quiet except for the wind moving through the trees.

Renate climbed aboard first. “I’m sore,” she said.

David laughed. “You worked harder than I did.”

“You always say that,” she said.

He poured fresh water into two cups. They sat in the cabin, listening to the slow slap of waves against the hull. The air smelled of salt and pine from the island.

Renate looked out the window. “It’s beautiful,” she said.

David nodded. “It’s ours, for now.”

They sat in silence for a while, resting. The forest whispered beyond the cliffs. The sea moved gently under them, steady and endless.

Renate said, “Tomorrow we start the hut.”

David said, “Tomorrow.”

She leaned her head on his shoulder. “And maybe catch a goat.”

He smiled. “If it lets us.”

She laughed softly. “It will.”

Outside, the stars came out again. The boat rocked in the quiet harbor, and the sound of the sea reverberating off the cliffs and forest air filled the night.

40 responses to “The Island 2”

  1. This island the way you describe it sounds like a true idyllic paradise, Daniel.

    Maybe I should set sail to find such an island 🏝️ in the South Seas before Marx Blarney succeeds in turning Canada into the USSR 2.0

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    1. I’m hoping it turns out to be a story of a true idyllic paradise. As you know, I don’t limit myself in my reading and so I shamelessly admit to reading Treasure Island, Robinson Crusoe, and Swiss Family Robinson as a youngster. The need to escape the fallen world has urged me to write the paradise story I’d like to live in short vignettes with the underlying literary tones of Canadian Maple Syrup aged in used bourbon barrels as well as the heavenly paradisical inferences one gets from drinking bottles of pear wine. I’ve seen reports of Marx Blarney bleeding Calgary of its tax revenue to enrich the people of Ottawa. Wealth redistribution is a favorite political policy in Ottawa and in Calgary, not so much. Perhaps Calgary will relocate to an island they own and become a sovereign nation for themselves. Hmmmm, maybe they could build a border wall and prevent politicians from invading.

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      1. An excellent idea for any nation, Daniel.

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        1. WE may have just saved the world and island life is going to start a new housing boom.

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          1. It looks that way.

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            1. Grab Sherry and we’ll rent a sailboat.

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              1. An excellent idea.

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      2. Any paradise exceeds reality right now…which is a big Debbie downer.

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        1. Agreed. Debbie Downer has been cloned and through the help of male anthropomorphic AI agents based on the John Holmes model, is able to replicate little Debbie Downers as a result of transhumanist advancements. Soon, they will be everywhere like mice rapaciously feeding on our joy.

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  2. An excellent idea.

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    1. With Sherry along, we’ll eat well and enjoy some immortal mushroom soup. Living eternally on a paradise island might be the ultimate destination.

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      1. Yes, that immortal mushroom soup will be out of this world.

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        1. Osiris will be jealous.

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          1. Especially since he has a wooden phallus.

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            1. It just occurred to me where the saying, “morning wood,” came from. Osiris.

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              1. And where the saying “Knock on wood” came from.
                The goddess Isis.

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                1. The world is finally making sense.

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                  1. For the first time in a long time.

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                    1. Hopefully we are now enlightened. Knock on wood!

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                    2. A gay tree lover’s dream.

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                    3. True, it is important to have a job you love.

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                    4. Gives a whole new meaning to the term “tree huggers” used to describe certain people during the 4 years I lived in British Columbia.

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                    5. I do remember tree activists who bedeviled the lumberjacks by chaining themselves to trees, spiking the trees, and climbing up into the trees marked to be cut. A lot of them were injured by falling trees because they forgot to wear their safety helmet.

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                    6. Yes, they were able to climb trees but a lot of them – their own personal mental elevator didn’t quite reach the top floor.

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                    7. And there in lies the problem of climbing to great heights. We used to say you can’t get size 10 thoughts from a size 5 brain and now that the size 3 brain is well established, 10 has been permanently retired.

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  3. They have dreams and wild imaginations, there’s no limit to what they may find here. I do love the enchantments you create. Some kinda magic there. 

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    1. I agree. I can’t wait to see how they catch the wild goats and of course, the real magic might show up when they plant the pear orchard.

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      1. The wild birds and animals always flock to wanderers. They sense that they are safe and loved.

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        1. This is very true. Even lions like a good hug and back scratch now and then.

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  4. Pear orchards are a priority, how long can they go without pear wine ? Do you love goats as much as I do. So adorable !

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    1. Indeed, morale will drop quickly if Pear wine production is interrupted. I adore goats. They are just like puppy’s only they are good at climbing. Those eyes! My older cousins had goats on the farm and they made a mini buck wagon out of old wood and scrap iron. Then they tied the Billy up to the wagon and raced all over the farm until Billy got tired or hungry. The farm house was high off the ground. We kids could almost stand up under it so it served as our wagon garage. Every time I went over there I looked for the wagon and then went after Billy. Later they had Ostriches and then Alpacas. WE talked a lot about hitching an Ostriche or an Alpaca but they were a little too big for us to wrangle. I’m sure we would have broken the sound barrier if we got that Ostriche hooked up to the wagon.

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      1. She much fun. It’s a pity everyone can’t be a kid on the farm at one time or another. I feel my son really missed out by not having summer fun on the farm. I’m sure the farm hands weren’t as excited about the whole thing.

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        1. I think my early life with farm exposure all the way up to my early 20’s made a huge impact on my life and work ethic. No doubt my parents and grandparents made sure I learned the values and ethics farming requires. I can remember some of the things I was required to do were so hard on me, I doubted myself and my abilities, but their stoic, “gotta be done and gotta be done now,” forced me to reach deep and keep going. It turns out, I had tremendous fun and learned a few things about nature and myself along the way.

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  5. Are you writing and posting now on a regular basis?

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    1. HI George, Yes, I thought I’d do this little series until I run out of ideas and then move on to another story. I thought I’d try a Soap Opera approach. One long series of vignettes under 1000 words with no character arc, plot, sub plot or story beats. Just escapism through island life. The sub-sub liminal message is, how to be self reliant and isolate yourself from the Zombie hordes. For instance we’ll have WWIII kick off with chemical, biological, and nuclear attacks on population centers, but the island couple have no idea it’s happening because their little piece of paradise is lovely and quiet.

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  6. Farming is hard work. I wa not involved in that aspect of farmlife as a summer visitor but as a 8 or 9 yr old I begged to pick cotton and was turned down til finally Gramma made a small sack and sent me out. Within the hour the tears started and heading back to the house… those cotton bowls stick like needles. 🧑‍🌾

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    1. I love that story, Rene. You wanted to pick cotton and you did. The lessons we learn on the farm have a way of teaching us about life in general and we are better for it.

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  7. There’s a lot to be learned out there , good and bad and a perspective many will never have the opportunity to experience.

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    1. Absolutely. I consider myself fortunate to have had the experiences I did. It gave me standards that earned me success and unforgettable challenges I was prepared to meet. My heart hurts for those who are transitioning to the cold hard facts of life at a time when positive standards and examples were tossed away.

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